Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome pt zee
do cnt soon
this shyam
i just hate him
ARHI was nice👏
SK1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww sooo cute ya...
keep it up...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the pm! Awesome update as usual! Looking forward to the next one. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum awsum awsum👏 pls do update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update !
i love d way u describe arnav's emotions !!of wanting to share thins 2!
beautiful update !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Zee darling!!!! 🤗
Where have you been?
Update was fantastic as usual...👏👏
I loved the fact that Arnav and Khushi have gotten away together, even if it is for a meeting. The journey there was really good to read. Khushi made me laugh when she asked him 'don't you feel like talking?'...😆
What she did outside her room was cute...I love the way he came and got the door open with such ease.
Him sending her lunch was just the cutest gesture ever...😍
You describe his feeling so well...you pen them perfectly to show the kind of struggle going on within him.
I do wish we could do something about Shyam,he's such a dampner...😡
I'm really looking forward to the next part...especially the coming ArHi moments!!
Thanks for the PM sugar...update soon!!
😊
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
zeejay🤗wowww once again awesome update i always love to read ur updates and this one was superb👏👏👏👏loved the way u portrayed chars here enjoyed whole update plz do continue soon 🤗🤗

btw i want to add that i loveddd ur avi i don't know who made it but is gorgeous i m using it 😃its gorgeous seriously ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey!!
wow wonderful update..!!arnaav is changing...nice😊
update soon n thnx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well done you have done a great job and I love the arhi moments
Thank you can't wait for ther next update xxX
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeee!!! You devil! 😡😡 I mma throw you off in to the garbage bin soon!😡
Shyam n Buaji 🤢uurrggghhh 🤬
*Vishy! Behave!*
Oh k 😔
I will start with the beginning...it was mmmwwaaahhh 🤗 wanna
give you a kissy for tht one... I love how ASR tells La to shut up and hands
over the responsibilities to Khushi...
and in the car 🤣 omg... I loved the scenes after that it was just soo funny
to have khushi not talk n sleepin in the car wit the devil 🤣
also the card scene was hilarious 🤣 😲 it made ASR smile
ASR really stole my heart in dis update... he was soo caring n cute 😳😍
n then the pig came 😒😡 And haiiirreee nand kisore...the man has not
even a pinch of shame in himself to talk about his love 🤢 (someone kill me)
before elders 😡
But other than that...the whole update was magnificent! ⭐️👏
I am a complete fan of your extravagant writing 😳


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