MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
Are we lucky enough to get an update now? or am i being greedy?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Are we lucky enough to get an update now? or am i being greedy?😆


Sadly I am stuck!! One-fourth accomplished, rest half can be tackled too. But another one-fourth part has me trapped in writer's block😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Sadly I am stuck!! One-fourth accomplished, rest half can be tackled too. But another one-fourth part has me trapped in writer's block😳


No problemo!!😃
Will wait!
THere is a sweetness in waiting too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Ustaad...I felt that the first meeting went a little flat. I mean after all the build-up...though the actual high point is yet to come...err hopefully...but this should have been monumental too, right? It was being tough to maintain the balance between who they are and how should they react to the sudden force the new feelings would bring in.

YOU wrote a FF???😲 When!! Where!! How come I don't know about it *pouting*


No yaa.. it didnt fall flat... that is the way it should be... like that Amitav Ghosh book 'The Hungry Tide' where there are alternate chapters... one of teh actual plot and the other of a surreal deeper symbolism and the various under-currents... the intensity heightens when there is a period of 'normalcy' and the meeting was apt... i mean i would have hated it if their 'private space' became part of the 'public domain'... their private space and moment should e for later away from prying eyes... 😆😆
Dont you dare make this too short... i thought you said somewhere that a couple of chapteres are left... you should add at LEAST 7-8 chapters... coz the first 6 were just the built up.. there should be enough justice done to the rest.. 😃😃
FF? arrey no yaar... only in my lazy brain... but i dont have the diligence or the patience or the sustained imagination to write a continuous 20 part series... 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Well the poor thing has kept away from matters of heart till now. Its a new area for him, but he will get there😆

You want him to stop stalking?? The man just mastered the art😆



I don't think he will ever stop stalking, at least now he has progressed and found out more about his stalkee 😃

Edited by LuvScooby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ... loved part 6

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry 4 d late comment , was out of town ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

After reading the SS I'm spellbound….such beautiful characterization of every individual be it MSK, Geet, Pinky or Dadi…clear defined characters.

What I liked most was the slow build up like a warm up session for the tango dance these two will be doing soon :)

The best part are the title which say not only what the character is going through but also indicates the way ahead….like a whole cycle of emotions like attraction, wariness, guilt, awkwardness, realization, fight back and lastly drowning in it ….. every relationship goes through it!!! 👏👍🏼⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ... loved part 6


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry 4 d late comment , was out of town ...


Koi na...glad you enjoyed reading it.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Note - This part is dedicated to Ustaad and Simz. They made this possible.


Chapter Seven

Everything that a Word can contain.



Past few days her life witnessed nothingbut intrusions.

Geet was on her way back to home, with anexultant spirit and yet a mind that was perplexed. She was trying to figure outthese intrusions. Her family intruding on her dreams, a man named Maan SinghKhurana intruding her thoughts and yet another nameless person who stoodoutside her window, under the debilitated bus-stop.














2022/2/9 - IMPORTANT - SS moved to

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36072373/chapters/89923987

jazzerette | Archive of Our Own



















Stranger! you donot know how longingly I look upon you,

You must be she I was seeking.

I am not to speakto you,

I am to think ofyou when I sit alone or wake at night alone,

I am to wait, Ido not doubt I am to meet you again,

I am to see to itthat I do not lose you.

WaltWhitman

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Chapter 8 (last part)

The End that gives way to a new Beginning.

Edited by jazzerette - 3 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


🤗

But was this it? The limit where he stepped back and let her cover the rest of the journey alone? His heart wanted to believe that there was more to it.

Yes, my heart believes there's more too. 😳

The pull is there - And his reply instill's confidence in her.. WOw that is so touching. I loved that bit, Jazz.
Nothing feels as good as to know that there is a person who cares about what you care about.


She would complete him in many ways he could perceive. But would it be fair to drag her into the murky waters of his existence, when she has such colorful pallete of desires? It's not his place to do so, for he needs to better his existence. A place that is worthy of her. She wants to experience life on her own terms. And he would not be selfish to stand in her way.

i LOVED THAT BIT!!

🤗

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago

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