Illusions 2 !! Sid - Ridhima (Pt4 on Pg7) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yippeee new SR FF
Welcome back!🤗
Wonderful start👏👏👏👏
continue soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Kavita🤗
Awesome start..
Continue super soon and do PM me PLZ
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nice intro..really looking forward to the next part...plz continue soon n pm me! :)
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Part 2

There was a big group to welcome. Hugs, welcomes, introductions etc. were exchanged.

"Very proud of you son!! Heard a lot about your research! Feels wonderful whenever I hear your progress! " Shashank pulled Sid closer with the arm that encircled around Sid's shoulder.

"Thanks sir! You were instrumental in all this. You knew how I was ! Was hardly serious towards work !!" Sid had a constriction in his chest as he felt the warmth of Shashank's love.

"It is your hardwork my son! You had it in you.. You definitely had it in you .. I very well knew you would be an achiever one day.."

"Congrats ! " Sid continued and Shashank seized him little more.

"So !! You are the Sidhant Modi !! Heard a lot about you !!" Muskan smiled warmly.

"Hai ! I am Rahul !"

Atul seized him tightly and Anjali was not left behind either.

"Bro ! Great to see you !! " Arman pulled Sid to a hug, while scrutinizing his friends.

"Sid '" exited Jayant Prasad enveloped him completely.

"Thanks a ton !! " JP welcomed rest of the Houston group..

"Where is THE girl ?" Sid searched around.. His eyes followed JP's..

"Shilpa" Sid jumped in her direction ..

"Sid" Shilpa barged into Sid's arms and encircled him with both her arms..

"Thanks" she whispered. Padma, standing side by, patted her head with small tears in her eyes.

"For what?" Sid teased ..

"For everything ?" she whispered again.

"Even for this ?" Sid gaze drifted towards JP. Shilpa's cheaks turned slight shade of pink. She hit him lightly on his chest.

******

A while later in the middle of the gardens in the farmhouse, the Houston group gathered. Others were busy with marriage preparations. They want to fight the jetlag and hence decided to practice.

"You have some great friends over here ! You never mentioned once ? " Lucy pouted.

"Yo " Sid sighed..

"They adore you so much !!" Henry exclaimed !

"Except for few .. ! I guess !!" Lucy was casual ..

"Shilpa !! A beautiful girl !! You are very fond of her !! Right !!" Mark ..

"Ofcourse ! he is ! Other wise we would not have been here " Lucy stated it simply.

"She is an angel !! A god sent gift ! Mischievous but heeds to every ones needs !! Had all the reasons to sink, but fought back with great will power" Sid started with a huge smile but smile as well as the voice trailed off slowly

"What ?" Lucy

"She asked me for something, that too as a gift for her marriage. How can I say no ? " He smiled again.

"Guys!! Thanks !!" He paused to continue "We should give a rocking performance "

"Sure dude ! We WILL .." Henry patted Sid..

"Sid !! You said Shilpa has two sisters ! We met only one!" Lucy remembered suddenly.

"She must be around too." "Lucy !! common !! Stop talking and get back to work " Sid continued enacting strictness

"Quick ! I need to see it going on " he went on with his parade ..

"Hey fatsy !! Stop ordering " Lucy taunted him..

"What ! How dare you ?" Sid enacted gritting of teeth ..

"Guys !! Do you remember the fat thing that entered our school .." Lucy started laughing

"Slowly !! looking lost .."

"Man ! Can't believe !! Now girls don't want to leave the very same thing .." Mark continued the laughing parade..

"Common ! Sid was not that fat ! Just chubby !! and he was new and hence shy " Henry was to rescue as usual..

"Chubby !! Shy !!" "Do you remember always with an ice cream in his hand ! As if the whole aim was to just eat ice creams" Lucy caught her stomach while laughing hard '

"Running nose !!" Sid had it enough.. "Mountains of tissue papers around "

Sid enacted a running nose..

"Stop it Sid !!" Lucy darted towards Sid.

"Running nose !! Nosy Cindrella .. !! Leaking Princess .. " Sid was running hard to escape her..

"Sid Stop !! I will not spare you .."

"Nosy Cindrella .. ! Cindrella dress and leaking nose ' "

"Ouch .." Sid held the collided person involuntarily..

"Sorry !!" Left her instantly..

"It is .. It is fine. It was my fault .." she answered in a small voice.

"Hey !! Sorry ! It was me chasing him .. " Lucy apologized on Sid's behalf.

"Don't worry. It is fine .. "

"Guess we did not meet before. I am Lucy !"

"I know you .. ! I mean .. I mean .. heard about you .."

"She is Ridhima. Arman!! You remember !! we met over there. His girl friend " Sid then introduced Mark and Henry.

"Thanks for making it to my sisters wedding"

"Ok ! So you are the other sister" Lucy smiled at her ''

Ridhima gave a small smile ..

******

That night when he finally retired to bed, Sid was going through a lot of emotions. Different people evoked different emotions. He channeled his thoughts towards Shilpa. Pleasantness seeped through his heart. It was wonderful to see her glow with happiness. He still remember those days..

Those were the days in Houston after his return from India. He was numb towards everybody else but was guilty of one person. Guilty, for being a catalyst in pushing her towards the pain. He wanted to know how she is dealing with it. He still remembered the way she made an exit. Her tearful eyes were not leaving him neither was that truth. At first he thought he can bring her back after things settled. But alas, things never settled. He was not sure if it was sufficient to share the truth with Arman. He started talking to her over phone. He was in touch with her regularly but could not succeed in getting through her. He did not give up on her. Finally one day she opened up..

"Sid ! Do you know the meaning of an Orphan ? A person that is unwanted for the entire world. A person rejected by the world. A person that can be taken granted by anybody.." He flinched at those words. He could completely visualize her dejected state of mind.

"We are not supposed to see big dreams. We can only have limited life and I did a mistake of trying to fly high.." She was cut sharply by Sid

"Shut up ! Who said you are an orphan? Who am I? You remember you called me Jeeju. Am I not one now? Shilpa I am your family and I mean it. Don't you dare call your self an orphan again.." he paused to continue little more calmly "I am there with you Shilpa. Always!! You will remain my family irrespective of my status with her. And I mean it. Please never say it again.. I pains me immensely if you even feel an orphan." She responded with just sobs..

Then few more conversations, she opened up slowly. She started responding.. Taking one such opportunity ..

"Shilpa!! You should go back !! You should go back to Sajeevani. To complete both the unfinished tasks.!! Finish your internship to be a complete doctor and then .."

"No Sid !! it is not possible ..!! I can't do it"

"Why can't you ? Shilpa did I not do it? Did I not complete my internship ? Do you think those 2 months were less painful for me? You should fight back. I know you can do it.."

"Sid! I will do it, but not in Sanjeevani. I just started and don't mind wasting the 3 months."

"No Shilpa! You have to go back for her .."

"I don't need her any more.. I don't want to think of her." Anger was springing in every word of hers.

"No Shilpa ! I know what she means to you. You are just angry right now. Please calm down.."

"She is so wrong.." she was now dejected.

"Who is not wrong? Show me one person! One person!! THAT had not committed a mistake. Why is it wrong if she likes some one other than her husband? It actually is a blunder if she is forced to stay with a person that she does not like. "he was bleeding inside to say this..

"Yaa!! It would have been fine if she had been clean with her thoughts. If she has not deceived herself and others! Things would have been much less painful. " he was talking more to himself.

"Exactly!! Why should she deceive? " Shilpa jumped on his point and Sid was back to senses..

"Shilpa!! I agree! That's what pains me. But as I said it is a mistake and I am sure most of us have done one or the other mistake. Have we not? Will we give up on our people because they commit a mistake? Not to forget, she was so confused and was pushed in all directions."

"She was not pushed .." Shilpa retarded sharply..

"Shilpa !! I have forgiven her .. Seriously! Whatever has to happen has already happened. The way it happened might not be the best one, but the final outcome is correct. Is it not? Please forgive her.. I have moved on.. I am fine in my life. Why are you still clutching on to it? Please don't punish yourselves for this. We need to move on.. I know what a blood relative means to you. I know the way you grew up weaving dreams around her. Please don't do this to yourself. Please !! I request you .."

It took many more conversations like this to convince her. At that juncture unknowingly he introduced Jayant in her life. As a support, he requested hist friend Jayant, who recently joined Sanjeevani as a full fledged doctor, to pick her up from Panchagani. She joined and was going through it. He found Jayant responding sensibly to Shilpa as well as found him to be more than willing to help him out on things that are concened with Shilpa. Initially he used to request Jayant to cheer her up, whenever he found her depressed after some conversation. He found Jayant being effective in that job. Slowly JP became a support for her even without his requests. Slowly with time, Shilpa blossomed back to life. JP in India and Sid on phone were her two punch bags. While doing this, Sid would often forget his own pain. His words to her used to act like medicine to his own wounds also. While portraying a happy picture to her, he himself slowly healed up.

Almost at the time she was finishing her internship, she mustered courage to reveal her identity to Ridhima. By then, everyone around her had a very good picture of her and this helped her being accepted immediately. Slowly she became a member of Gupta family. Every member of the family adores her. History has slowly diminished and became a minicule.

One day she told him her feelings towards JP. This was not a surprise to him. He knew this happening and was very happy for this. He knew JP is a very sensitive person internally albeit a very different appearance on exterior. It was not long before the two confessed..

"They make a perfect picture. They look so happy with each other" Sid thought remembering the images of JP and Shilpa ..

Edited by kvva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear Friends,

Thanks a lot for the welcome and the encouraging comments. I promise this time I will reply to everyone.

So, this is the second part. I badly need to know how you like the development in this part. Am I convincing enough for this development? Please let me know.

I will send PMs this time again to all the people in my friends list, but please let me know if you are not interested. Anybody else interested in PMs please send a friend's request!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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u r gonna to make shilpa jp pair😲
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Friends,

I know many of you may not like what I did in this update. But please dont judge a person by just looks. A person might have great exterior but a very bad interior. But another one might just be reverse. Whom do you prefer. I always felt (while watching the serial) JP has a beutiful interior. He always tried to help his friends (do you remeber Tammanna times or any other times). I know some of you might be angry with him towards the end. But he was convinced by Sid himself and hence he tried to be a catalyst.

In the given circumstances, Sid (being far away) has to take help of a local person. Who else could be best in this scenario ? He choose JP hence.. Remember Naina Yuvi were missing in the scene at that time. It is just that JP lived upto the requirement. Not just upto but beyond the requirement. Infact, in a way I tried to show that JP has become that for Shilpha what Sid had become for Ridhima. The situation of Shilpa and Ridhima and thier pains can be of different structures. One lost a person that she loved deeply while the other not only lost but was cheated by a person towards whom she was warming up. In the other case, this loss became more complicated because of her being an orphan and related to the person that was instrumental in making her loose. Nevertheless, no one can deny that both the pains were quite deep and they needed another person at that juncture to pull them out. Sid was exactly that person in Ridhima;s case and JP was the same in Shilpa's case. And pleasantly the later understood the importance of her uncondtional support system..


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Originally posted by: kvva

Friends,

I know many of you may not like what I did in this update. But please dont judge a person by just looks. A person might have great exterior but a very bad interior. But another one might just be reverse. Whom do you prefer. I always felt (while watching the serial) JP has a beutiful interior. He always tried to help his friends (do you remeber Tammanna times or any other times). I know some of you might be angry with him towards the end. But he was convinced by Sid himself and hence he tried to be a catalyst.

In the given circumstances, Sid (being far away) has to take help of a local person. Who else could be best in this scenario ? He choose JP hence.. Remember Naina Yuvi were missing in the scene at that time. It is just that JP lived upto the requirement. Not just upto but beyond the requirement. Infact, in a way I tried to show that JP has become that for Shilpha what Sid had become for Ridhima. The situation of Shilpa and Ridhima and thier pains can be of different structures. One lost a person that she loved deeply while the other not only lost but was cheated by a person towards whom she was warming up. In the other case, this loss became more complicated because of her being an orphan and related to the person that was instrumental in making her loose. Nevertheless, no one can deny that both the pains were quite deep and they needed another person at that juncture to pull them out. Sid was exactly that person in Ridhima;s case and JP was the same in Shilpa's case. And pleasantly the later understood the importance of her uncondtional support system..



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Originally posted by: jasangel


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I did not see the episode after Sid delived the divorce papers. But I saw lot of episodes before that. I saw JP going to any length to help others. He was ready to dress himself as an aunty to help Sid. He was ready to help Arman in uniting Sid Ridhima and many more such incidents. WE can't forget those. The CVs have screwed up the last few episodes and I dont think I can judge any character based on that. For that matter, even I heard Sid danced with Arman. I feel it is quite illogical. I mean the same person who repsonded sharply to A and R in lonavala is dancing with him. So, I just want to say give no importance to the last few episodes. They were just a choas.

Hope you will be interested further.
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Originally posted by: kvva



I did not see the episode after Sid delived the divorce papers. But I saw lot of episodes before that. I saw JP going to any length to help others. He was ready to dress himself as an aunty to help Sid. He was ready to help Arman in uniting Sid Ridhima and many more such incidents. WE can't forget those. The CVs have screwed up the last few episodes and I dont think I can judge any character based on that. For that matter, even I heard Sid danced with Arman. I feel it is quite illogical. I mean the same person who repsonded sharply to A and R in lonavala is dancing with him. So, I just want to say give no importance to the last few episodes. They were just a choas.

Hope you will be interested further.



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