Illusions 2 !! Sid - Ridhima (Pt4 on Pg7) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Hey Kavita🤗
Well I m shocked... Shilpa n JP😲
But its your story you can write whatever you want... and I agree that we should not give importance to looks...
Yaar I m not talking about looks, according to me JP is a backstaber... from the very beginning he kept saying Sid Bhaiya...Sid Bhaiya and What he did at the end...I agree with Alisha... PLZ don't mind its just my point of view...
But still I want to read this FF as I m a crazy SR fan... n can't miss any FF related to them...
So continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonia1000

Hey Kavita🤗
Well I m shocked... Shilpa n JP😲
But its your story you can write whatever you want... and I agree that we should not give importance to looks...
Yaar I m not talking about looks, according to me JP is a backstaber... from the very beginning he kept saying Sid Bhaiya...Sid Bhaiya and What he did at the end...I agree with Alisha... PLZ don't mind its just my point of view...
But still I want to read this FF as I m a crazy SR fan... n can't miss any FF related to them...
So continue soon...



Good to see many here are not giving importance to looks. Regarding back stabing, I already answered. Many characters (actually almost all) behaved in a strange in the last few episodes and I did not even watch them. Including Shashank, Anjali for that matter even Sid, everyone behaved out of their character in that noisy period and this happened b/c CVs suddenly changed their route. So, I just dont give weightage to that period.

Thanks for liking it otherwise.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Kavita :D

As much as I agree wid urs & DJ bro's explaintions I can't see Shilpuu wid JP :| No I'm not going wid looks for me looks r not everything its always better to love an average looking guy who has a beautiful heart den to love a charmer like Haraam :x:x
Its just dat LMG left a very bad taste I love love love Shilpuu & HATE JP :x he's just a backstabber who left Sid wen he needed his friends the most :x he was the one who said to SR k ' kitne acche lagte hain saath me' & he only went wid Haraam to help him win Maiya back even after knowing what kind of bond SR shares & what Maiya means to Sid . Sid his 1st friend in Sanjeevani he backstabbed him to support a psycho obsessive pagal whom he don't even know properly . Yuvi was the only one who supported him dat's why I always say Yuvi was a true friend

Anyways its ur story & u hav full right to write it as u want to :)) I love ur writing & SR so i'll read dis FF for SR <3

Continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok i am having really hard time seeing JP n Shilpa...too shocked...if i just cant see this working in my head...n not just by looks...i know some girls who don't have the best looking guy, but they have grt personality n for me i don't think JP has that kind of personality...i see him as one of those who sides with the person whose "palda is more bhari/ heavy"...n also from what i have seen, i cant visualize that chemistry a couple has b/w them...anyways plz continue soon n thanks for the pm!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends,

On popular demand I make some changes. Please replace JP with another JP, Jay Prasad, a common friend of Sid, Naina and Yuvi. They met Jay Prasad during Tamanna times, when they went for some special training which lasted for around 10 days. They became good friends and remained in touch with each other. After completing his internship Jay Prasad joined Sanjeevini as a doctor and Sid needed somebody to pick up Shilpa and so request him for that. I know it is a loose fit (old JP would have fit into the story better as Shilpa already knows him and might feel better to be picked up by a known person than this new JP). But lets keep it that way, as many might feel it better now. Finally replace Sid bhaiyyaa dialogue with just Sid. Now I want all of you to comment and let me know your opinions.. Or atleast hit the like button. In case you guys are still not happy, I am fine with discontinuing. Hopefully, will come up with some thing else in future which will be liked by many. But, please do let me know if I should continue or not.

Part 3

"Hi!! Good morning!" Sid was interrupted by an enthusiastic Arman. He turned around to see Arman standing leaning into Ridhima.

"Good morning!"

"How are you? Are you fine with jetlag?"

"It is fine. I had a good sleep." He paused to continue "Ok! Guys! Am in a hurry? Will catch you later" Sid hurried away..

"Why the hell do they have to display? Why that show?" perturbed is an understatement. He sat at a swing at the pool side.

"These guys will never learn. Why these two behave so weird? Why cant they behave normal? "

"The guy wants to show off at every step! And she .. she.." he sighed. His thoughts went back to yesterday's happenings. Firstly she was absent on the first meeting with everyone. Then, he observed her, quite some times, observing him and his activities hiding herself.

"God! I am so irritated with these two. " he threw a flower side by into the swimming pool to release some of his frustrations.

"Why did I have to introduce her in such a strange way to Lucy? That too! to Lucy!!"

"She is Ridhima !! Shilpa's other sister!! That is all that was needed" "That should be the way.. My My the looks that Lucy delivered .."

"Hi Sid! You are looking cute while making those weird faces!!" Lucy jerked him out with a small pat and a bright smile. "Whats up dude!!"

"Hey! Good morning! I have a brilliant idea !!" Sid sounded super enthusiastic and was successful in distracting her.

"I think we will make a change in Henry's part '" Sid continued to explain the new idea that flashed had to him some time back.. They discussed for some time ..

"It all sounds great!! But! What if Maggi does not come back in time. I am some how worried about it? Some how I have this nagging feeling"

"Lucy !! Stop being a spoil sport ! She will come !! Don't worry.."

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"Wow!! This is gorgeous" Lucy exclaimed looking at one of the jewelry. "My! My! This is mind blowing. I have never seen things like this in my life!" "Maggi is really missing something." There was a gathering of almost all the girls in that room and they are enjoying the excitement of Lucy as they are showing her the wedding purchases.

"Lucy!! This is for you" Ridhima brought out a Lehnga looking fondly at her. "It would look great on you."

"Wow!! Really!! That is so kind of you" Lucy twirled holding the fabric in her hands. "Can I try it"

"You can!! But you should wear it on wedding! Please" Ridhima requested with a bright smile.

"Sure!" Lucy set out with her task.

"Wow! You look great!!" Anjali exclaimed. Shilpa just came and hugged her. Lucy was then bestowed with praises from every one and she was jumping with joy.

A twirling Lucy was interrupted by a Sid looking uneasy to barge into a large group of females "Hi everyone !! Sorry to disturb! I am looking for Lucy"

"She is just in front of you"

"Oh god !! Is it you? What is this.? " Sid exclaimed looking at the beautiful/delightful sight in front of him.

"Sid!" Lucy almost jumped on to him. "This is gift for me. It is beautiful! How am I looking?" She started twirling in front of him. Sid smiled brightly seeing her excitement.

"You look stunning! Beautiful!" .. "Thanks Shilpa!" Sid squeezed Shilpa's hands.

"It is actually di's idea" Shilpa smiled.

"Thank you Ridhima" Lucy engulfed her again into a warm hug. "This is very sweet of you" Ridhima responded with a small smile.

"I have one even for Maggi" she smiled.

"Wow! I am sure she would be delighted too! Is it not Sid?" She looked towards Sid.

"Yaa! She will be. Thanks Ridhima!" continued after a pause "Lucy we need to rehearse"

"Oh! No! I forgot! Give me a min"

"This is one exotic couple! They look perfect with each other!" Muskaan commented looking in the direction of the disappeared couple.

"Yes! I have hardly seen couple who complement each other so well" Naina added..

"I am very happy for Sid" Shilpa could not help but add to their observation. Anjali Shilpa observed Ridhima walking silently out of the room and sighed.

Edited by kvva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Oh Riddhima Oh Riddhima ...tera kya hoga ...

Waise Kavitha I am fine with both JPs 😆 ... Keep the updates flowing ... 🤗

Detailed comment later 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
I agree wid Sid why the hell these 2 ve to show off grrr esp Haraam he don't leave a single chance to show his ' pureee lobe ' 😡

Maiya
I love how coldly Sid thanked her :P & girls comments abt Sid & Lucy was like petrol in the fire lmao 😆😆

New JP hmm good 😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Continue superrr soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

nice part...i didn't have any problem with the name, just cudn't picturise shilpa with the old jp...sorry, shouldn't have put a face in the character...the story is nice so plz don't discontinue it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
new JP is good...Way To Go

come on sid keep going on treat that confused ki maiya



Edited by NaGeSwArI - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
hey dere is no way u r stopping

JP,new JP or no JP...m fine wid anything...

plz plz plz cm bak super soon wid another update

this one was fab...😊


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