Maaneet.. Eclipse UPDATING - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part... love it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...

waiting for the story to reveal ...😕lots of suspense.😕... please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago


please Samra...my request...this style of writing in views is not so interesting...please change it back to original style...

update was interesting...thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
poor maan is in so much pain
so maan lost his parents n geet all bcs of that greedy rathod
omg maan had to leave geet in the past
lovely precap
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Samra.
Loving the story.
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO SUPERB UPDATE
MAAN HANDLING
EVERY THING WITH
SO CARE.HOPE HIS
PLAN WORK.
Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear...waiting for more past to unravel
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
plzzz add me to ur buddy list n pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago

thankyou all for your support and love.
sorry for the delay.
thanks thabs who have agreed to post these updates on my behalf
plz comment
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Part 11:
i was so tired that i was having a hard time concentrating. my eyes were almost drooping with sleep. it was 8 pm when we landed at a private hanger in goa.i thanked my rarely lucky stars to find yash there at the hanger to escort aadi safely to my place. after a few formalities and taking fuel i was ready to fly back to shimla. there was a 30 mint delay due to heavy air traffic and then i was allowed to take off .
i smiled thinking how aadi wud be having heart attacks sitting there talking to that bas***d. i turned the auto pilot on and lost myself in never ending thoughts finally round midnight i finally parked my plane at my private hanger. another one hr of drive. i groaned. but with heavy heart and heavy steps walked toward my car. i drived home almost absent mindedly . my mind was busy in deciding what wd i do once i get back home.
should i just jump into the bed or should i eat first. my heart voiced out its opinion that i wanted to meet geet. but my brain gave him a good snub. ofcourse it was not fair that i come back and is preffering khana and sleep over her but those are neccesities i dont think i can survive without those.i denied any kind of guilt to overcome tomorow i wd have enough time to feel guilty and amend it right now just sleep. no actually eat . i smiled at finally reaching apparently a difficult decision.i almost dragged myself outside the car. opened the door and went inside the house not bothering to close the door behind me.i went toward my room . i threw my clothes on the floor of my bathroom so unlike me and stepped in the bath tub while turning on hot water. i dont know how long i lied there in the tub filled with warm hot water. it was so relaxing maybe i dozed off.i pulled the string and water started draining. i took shower my every muscle was screaming in pain probably cursing me for dragging them through this ordeal at this hour. i turned off the shower and stepped out.
i looked at the trouser stood ther for two mints holding it in my hands trying to figure out should i wear it or not. finally my senses kicked in and i smacked myself for contemplating on such a thing. i stepped out in the room and got rooted at my place. there in the door she was standing water dribbling from her hairs. her face damp with water droplets. looking like angel my angel. i sighed and i dont know how and why i found myself hugging her.
i mentally thanked God for i was atleast wearing trouser.
it felt as if i was finally at peace.it took me only a few seconds to come out of my revive . she was crying bitterly holding me close her tears were running down my body and her soft breaths on my chest were sending shivers down my spine.i did not know what to do as my senses were already numb and holding her close to me wasnt helping me either it was sending me another type of senselessness.but then she broke apart holding my face in her hands. and said mk. how many times had i thought about such a scenerio. when she wd be so close to be hugging me looking into my eyes and with her angelic voice wd call me out maan ..
mk. this time he shook me harder and i concentrated.more
geet . kia hua tum thk to ho
mk plz pinky ko bacha lo she was crying frantically.
kia hua my adrenals finally started to work.her crying was making me jumpy. geet muhe batao kia hua .
wo rahul aya tha pinky ko marne ki dhamki di . us waqt icu k bahir log thy to wo chala gya per wo mujhe bol ker gya k wo wapis aye ga pinky ko khatam krne k liye. or mujhe bhi . . she cried agar mene kisi ko kuch bhi bataya.
mk mujhe apni parwa nahi plz pinky ko bacha lo.
let me see hum use kisi dosre shehar lejate hai
nahi us ke contacts bohat uper tak hai. wo hame kahi se bhi dhoond lega.us k admi india k kone kone me haia sudden thought hit me. india k bahir to nahi. i will transport her to london.i knew the moment words were out of mouth that i m going to regret but again my heart won over my brain. anything for my geet
mk plz pinky ko hame yaha se nikalna ho ga aj k aaj nahi to wo use mar de ga.
geet trust me. hum use kal subah hote hi yaha se nikal k le jae ge.
promise
promise.
and she fell down on her knees i followed her down trying to console her and she did eventually i guess i cant be sure cuz we were sitting side by side next to bed she hugging me me hugging her back .i dont know how i slept even when i was desparately trying to keep my eyes open to savour every moment with her but i guess my bad luck wasnt over yet.
PRECAP:
she stood there eying the plain and then she turned abruptly throwing up on me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!...
Yay Me first!!!
Felt good to know that maan is ready to do anything for geet

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