Eternal Soulmates-RN-Note & UD Part-11 on Pg-22 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
awesome update...naina is impulsive from the beginning but still she should not have done that whatever may be the reason...the cadets r so shocked...shalini shot naveen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Hi Preet

update was really gud.👏👏👏
Naina was really hurt but she nearly killed Raj with her betrayal...😭😭😭 he trusted her blindly while all the time she was just playing with his emotions.
Shalini was disguted with this and she slapped her ..Naina expected this from Raj but not from her..huh wat does she know abt Raj???😡😡 he wud never hurt her.
Naina is so wrong ,she doesn't deserve Raj at all.here Raj is ready to sacrifice everything for her while she cudn't keep her single promise made to him.
Raj's grief knows no bound..he is emotionally scarred forever.he just wants to return Naveen's honour and then dissappear.😭😭😭
Alekh heard everything but he is one person who knows how to balance his emotions..he wud never spill the beans.😊
Naina was really hurt to see Raj behaviour toward her..Even Shalini didn't help her much...so wat did she expected that Raj wud forget all🤢🤢
The cadets were so hurt to know that their mentor has gone through so much grief..😭😭😭
Did Shalini really shot Naveen instead of Raj????😲😲😲 this is indeed a shock!!
Naveen's condition is improoving..I hope everything comes our right..😊
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
This was amazing part though sad but a very well written part...

Raj really loves naina alot ... Raj is hurt coz of naina...

Alekh is so matured... Liked the part between Raj and Alekh...

Waiting for the next part ...

Thanks for the update...
Edited by golu_1677 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awesome update
loved the twist 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Update was very emotional...beautifully written where everyone's emotions have been depicted perfectly...be it Raj's hurt and helplessness, Shalini's anger, Naina's guilty, Raj and Naina's family's worry for their children future and happiness. the cadets worry and new found respect for their favourite teacher.👏

Raj is so shocked 😲by Naina's betrayal that he is feeling dead, keh te hai na ki jab dukh ek hadse zyada badh jata hai to insan kuch bhi mahsos nahi kar pata. Raj ki bhi yahi halat hai, and that is why naina could only see void in Raj's eyes.😭

Naina deserved to be slapped, Shalini ne bilkul thik kiya. Akhir kisi ko toh uski akal thikane lani thi.😉 Shalini is worried for Raj because she knows that Raj will never be able to bear that his naina was playing with his emotions.😔

Naina knows that she has lost Raj's trust for ever. She tries to argue with her conscious say that if she had known that Naveen was alive then she would not have behaved in such a manner. If she would have tried to see how hard Raj has been trying to prove Naveen innocent then she would have realised her mistake. 😒

Both of their families were so happy with Raj and Naina's wedding. Raj had asked for only one promise from naina that she would never break in trust in return for sacrificing his entire life for her. But naina could not even keep this promise.

The news of Naveen's death shattered eveyone's life but naina never gave Raj a chance to explain his action, or to understand the message which he has sent her. The only way she found to cope with her sorrow was to blame Raj for it. 😡

Shalini tries to console Raj, but she knows that the damage can never be repaired. Its good that Raj has shalini with him to share his tears. Both of them are overjoyed to hear that Naveen's condition is finally starting to improve. And this has given Raj new hope, something that he has asked for by the wishing pillar…to have his friend back with his lost honour.

Alekh is shocked to hear about how much Raj has been suffering but he decides not to tell other about Naveen. Raj is confident that Alekh is a person who knows how to keep secrets.😊

All the cadets are amazed as to how Raj can keep is professional and personal life separate so perfectly. Despite of facing so much pain and sorrow, he has always had care and guidance to share with his cadets and above all unending patriotism for his country.😊

Naina is hurt by Raj's cold and curt behaviour towards her. Even shalini behaved in a similar manner with her. Shalini wants naina to know the truth before she goes about blaming Raj for everything.

Its shocking to know that shalini has shot Naveen. I am sure it was a plan to save Naveen's life.😲

Waiting for the next part. Continue soon

Edited by dazzling_glory - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hi preet!!!!
the update was awesome n very emotional!!👏👏👏
naina is shocked to find raj next to her listning her convo wid major nair!!!😲😲😲
raj was out of sences after knowing that naina was just cheating on him🥺...n mor ethen that he is heart bcz she didn't keep her promise!!!
shalini who was watching all this couldn't control her self n slap naina!!!
the marrige scene was sooo cute😳😳😳
i love ❤️RN❤️ fight on there wedding night!!!
but...itne cute scene ke baad itna shocking scene!!!
i hate the news part where naina had to leave raj😡😡😡...argghh
the wishing piller scene was awesome!!!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...jahan log apne pyaar ke leye wish maangte hai waha raj apne friend ship ke leye wish karraha hai!!!...he IS really heart by naina's act!!!
naveen is getting better👍🏼...chaloo ek to good news mili!!!😆😆😆
no need to say our fav six rock in this part!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
raj started to call his nia to lft!!!🥺...awww poor girl!!!
hhuuhhh now thats a SHOCKING news😲😲😲...shalini ne naveen ko mar tha???...aur beechare naina...wo to yeh samajh rahe the ke saara kasoor raj ka hai!!!
thnk u very much for long update😳😳😳...loved it!!!
plz cont soon!!!!...we all will wait 4 ur next rockng+long update!!!
love u
esha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Update was very good.
Raj is completely shattered because of Naina's betrayal. Shalini is angy with Naina for cheating Raj.
It is good that Raj has shalini there to share his pain with. They are both happy to know that Naveen's condition is improving.
All the cadets are shocked to hear about Raj's past.
Alekh promises Raj that he will not tell anyone about Naveen.
What a shock...shalini has shot naveen??
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awsome update
too good
interesting part
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Hiii Preet
awesome upd dear
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

I think I shud be commenting from Part 5...baki padha hua hai I guess, though I had to glance at those parts!! Shukr manao meri kamaal ki memory ka jo mujhe itna kuch yaad hai...main khud hairaan hu...😆

As u already knw...I love Raj being Major and Nair being Captain...🤣...kamaal ki scene thi wo. And all the cadets were impressed...while Huda was jealous!! Ab uska kuch ho to nahi sakta...so wud say nothing abt him.

In the beginning it was touchy to read the phn convo btwn Raj and Veena...and its a treat to imagine these two actors u knw!! Always loved them together!! 😊

And now Sanjana...chalo usne meri khwaish puri ki and Huda ko thappad lagaya!! And aww...gud to see Neev here!! Raj is just super awesum to have called him here!!

Dr. Ritu Mishra...iss baar ghalat Naina se paala padha hai unka...this is Veer's Nia!! 😉 Love the possessiveness as always!! 😃

So it was an amazing part Preet!! Am so glad to see this fic being continued!! 😃 Moving on to the next part now.
Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago

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