The Unknown Language of Love.MG ff Completed - Page 14

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awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
rd n 1 gooo..awesomee ff...cntnue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

nice part... poor louis... he'll be gonna mad in this love story for sure... poor guy hv to drank so many shocks every nw & thn


😉😉 thnkx 4 d cmnt... smbdy hs 2 tlort Maan's atyachar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Man realized his feelings towards Geet...but his mom interrupted at right moment...he was going to make so boring confession...he is saved for another time to confess beautifully...

awesome update...

thanx for pm

you are so right... the special moment is saved... all thanks goes to his mom😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta



👏Wonderful update... sooo dreamyyy😍... n love the song u gave😊... wanted ds on MAANEET for a long time😃... thanx for giving ds song😉... it was soo perfect😛... love MAANEET ❤️... sooo romantic 😳


wow!!! really cute...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

here is the part 7 of Unknown. hope you like it... plz hit the like n do comment.

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Part 8: Mujhe Kuch Kahena Hai



Actually I hate bus journey. Specially long bus journey.. it makes me extremely tired.. but I'm not feeling tired today.. cause I have decided to say the special words today.. she will be here by 6 o' clock.. then we are gonna go to some club' then' I will say it. Yesterday I was just going to say it but the ultimate moment destroyer my mom ruined it' but today I am not going to let anybody come between me and my words.😃

It was 5.45. I was already ready.. and went to see if Louis was ready or not.. I would have killed him if he was late.. but thankfully he was ready.. well his luck was favoring him.

I was looking at my watch constantly.. every second was like an hour.. Finally she came at sharp 6 o' clock. She was wearing a sky blue salwaar n she was looking' is it needed to say every time how she was looking? As usual she was looking gorgeous.😳

"nice dress.." I said with a grin.😃

"nice shirt.." she replied with a smile..😊

"nice smile'" we both laughed..😆

I was fully prepared to say the 3 magical words today.. just waiting for the right time.. all were chatting only I was sitting zipping my mouth' I have to be patience' just wait for the right time..

We reached the club within an hour.. the moment is coming closeer.. and my heart is beating faster..

Me and Geet were standing near the bar.. today only soft drink for me.. it helps me to keep calm.. so finally it's the moment.. I cleared my throat took a deep breath..

"Geet'"

"Hmm.." she looked at me finishing her drink..

"i'" I stopped for a moment again.. just the moment a new song started'

"that's my fvr8 song.." she gave a big smile "lets dance.." she pulled me to the dance floor.." I wanted to bang my head against wall.. it had to ruin my perfect moment??😭

Aaa..aaa'.

Jogi nach leee yeee ..

Rang rach deee yee ee..

Jogi nach le yeee..

Rang rach de eee yee ee ..

Lehra ke balkha ke tu, duniya bhula ke naach

Dhun koi gungunaale, gaale tu gaake naach

Rangeeniyon mein kho ja, peeke peelake naach

Mad bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach

She placed my hands around her waist and placed her hands on my shoulders.. and started to dance..


Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, It says I wanna dance with you

ooo ooo'

The way she was dancing.. the way she was moving her body.. I was falling for her in every second..

Dekh ke bhi nahi ho yakeen

Itni kyun hai bata tu haseen

Tere husn se zindagi haseen

Tere husn ke aagey koi haseena kuch bhi nahi

I grabbed her shoulders tightly and bring her closer to me' too close that I can here her heartbeats.. she was looking at me with questioning eyes.. I was lost into her hazel eyes.. it's not like that I have not seen beautiful girls before.. but she was special'

"beautiful.." it came from my mouth without realizing..

"Hun?"

"you are looking beautiful."

"thanks.." she smiled.😊

Well I was not planning to say this.. of course she is beautiful.. but I was planning to say the special words' again a moment is ruined.. first time mom ruined it.. second time her favorite song and third time me myself ruined it..😭🥺

Aankhon mein mere saare sapne sajaa ke naach

Mujhko tu dil mein rakh le, dil ko dhadkake naach

Pyaar agar hai mujhse, pyaar jataa ke naach

Jaan o dil jo hai teri, mujhpe luta ke naach

I was lost in my own thought'

"can't you dance'" she tapped on my shoulder..

"ya I can' but now your beauty is distracting me'"😉

"hmmm' so you can flirt' I like it'"

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I was at my hotel room.. I had lost my chance.. I had no plan for next day.. so I can think peacefully how to do it without stammering, halting and other kind of disturbance.. the day after next day they were going to Hoshiarpur to attend wedding of a cousin.. again a bus journey'

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Next day I was alone at my hotel room.. mom and dad went to her house.. Louis went on a date with Pari.. and I was going crazy' my back stabber friend told me strictly not to disturb him in their date and that's why he switched off his phone.. helping friend when he needs it most, is not on his ten commandments..

I thought at least thousands ways to tell it and canceled all of them..

I don't know when my parents returned from her house.. Louis returned at 10.30 and went to his room without even talking to me' it was 1 o' clock.. I had bite nails of my fingers.. I had done every insanity except ripping my hair.. well I was thinking to do that but just then something clicked on my mind..

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I found myself knocking Louis's door at 1.30 pm' It was banging more than knocking' it would be strange if others guests of the hotel did not wake up.. well everybody except Louis.. I'm sure he is going to loose half of his life sleeping and another half eating street foods..😡

Finally after 15minutes of hardworking he opened the door with restless expression..

"where.. where is the fire' why are you standing here.. run'" he said in a breath..😕

"Louis calm down.. there is no fire.. I have to talk to you"

The restless expression from his face vanished and a wired expression replaced it..

"what?" he said in a overly serious tone..

"something important.. I need your advise.."

"go ahead.."

"how to propose a girl? I mean how to propose kind of girl like Geet? I mean how to propose Geet.."

BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He shut the door on my face.. he is so ungrateful.. I helped him by giving advise.. when he needed even if he did not ask for my advise I give him only to help him.. and when I needed it most he just closed the door on my face..

"Louis.." I started to knock again..

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I was sitting in Louis' room telling him the whole problem.. from the last two hours I was explaining it to him ' and he was answering only hmm and hun..😡

After a few moments I noticed he was sleeping resting his head on table..

"Louis'"

"what??"

"are you even listening?"

"actually no'."

"what nonsense I'm trying to describe my situation from the last two hours and you'"😡

"now get out of my room or I am gonna tell Geet how did you loose your virginity.."

Well he is not only ungrateful he is a blackmailer too.. so what? I can blackmail too..

"O really? Then I'm gonna tell Pari how did you loose it.." I smiled evilly and he answered smiling evilly..😈

"Maan look at me I look innocent by face.. I can make people believe what I am saying'and look at you.. you look arrogant.. a guy with too much attitude.. and has anger management problem' now tell me who will believe you??"😈

He didn't spare me a sec to speak.. "now get out of here.." he kicked me out of his room..

I came back to my room thinking what a friend I've got and how to solve my unsolvable problem.. I sighed..

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Part 9: The French Connection


waiting for your comments😳 Scroll down.. imp note..


Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey frnds at 1st i wnt 2 thnk all of u 4 reading my FFs...

plzzz add me on Facebook.. dis profile is only for MAANEET fans.. http://www.facebook.com/geetblair.maneetchair

n plzz join dis group...http://www.facebook.com/groups/100823563372535/?ref=notif&notif_t=group_activity

i hv created a blog to keep trck of my FFs... d link s here.. http://sreyaguptadotcom.wordpress.com/

still undr constructn...

ok enogh of my bakbak.. now plz plz plz do cmnt...😊

plzz go to pg 1... i hv added bg music... plzz tell me howz it...😛

Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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