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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u update...really nice update abhiya were hawtt...i read ur ff 4 long time plzzz pm me next time plzzz awsome update and superb ff cont soon now plz waiting 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
FOR THOSE WHO COULDNT READ BEFORE AS I HAD EDITED THE UPDATE AFTER WARDS...
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abhay was having a great time near piya… they were dancing so close inhaling each other's scent and drinking each other from their eyes… it was so engrossing and apitavating to see them dancing so close…. The songs were so perfect for them….
LADY IN RED
I've never seen you looking so lovely as you did tonight,
I've never seen you shine so bright,
I've never seen so many men ask you if you wanted to dance,
They're looking for a little romance, given half a chance,
And I have never seen that dress you're wearing,
Or the highlights in your hair that catch your eyes,
I have been blind;

The lady in red is dancing with me, cheek to cheek,

There's nobody here, it's just you and me,
It's where I want to be,
But I hardly know this beauty by my side,
I'll never forget the way you look tonight;

I've never seen you looking so gorgeous as you did tonight,

I've never seen you shine so bright, you were amazing,
I've never seen so many people want to be there by your side,
And when you turned to me and smiled, it took my breath away,
And I have never had such a feeling,
Such a feeling of complete and utter love, as I do tonight;

The lady in red is dancing with me, cheek to cheek,

There's nobody here, it's just you and me,
It's where I want to be,
But I hardly know this beauty by my side,
I'll never forget the way you look tonight;

I never will forget the way you look tonight.

The lady in red, the lady in red,
The lady in red, my lady in red,

I love you
KISS THE GIRL
Percussion
Strings
Winds
Words

There you see her

Sitting there across the way
She don't got a lot to say
But there's something about her
And you don't know why
But you're dying to try
You wanna kiss the girl

Yes, you want her

Look at her, you know you do
It's possible she wants you, too
There is one way to ask her
It don't take a word
Not a single word
Go on and kiss the girl

Sing with me now

Sha-la-la-la-la-la
My, oh, my
Look at the boy too shy
He ain't gonna kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Ain't that sad
Ain't it shame, too bad
You gonna miss the girl

Now's your moment

Floating in a blue lagoon
Boy, you better do it soon
No time will be better
She don't say a word
And she won't say a word
Until you kiss the girl

Sha-la-la-la-la-la

Don't be scared
You got the mood prepared
Go on and kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Don't stop now
Don't try to hide it how
You wanna kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Float along
Listen to the song
The song say kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Music play
Do what the music say
You wanna kiss the girl

You've got to kiss the girl

Why don't you kiss the girl
You gotta kiss the girl
Go on and kiss the girl
The song was so apt and to add the extra magic…. Abhay really kissed piya on her lips to which piya replied with same passion forgetting about her surroundings.
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SWATI..!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter XXXI
Zero degree night club, Panchi's birthday party
What a romantic heart filling punishment…. Abhay thought he could bear infinite punishments like this with his piya…. After Abhay placed kiss over piya's luscious lips… they both were brought back to earth by the audiences who filled the whole club with their thunderous claps….
Panchi: you both are really something…. Forgiven now….
Abhay and piya were still standing with each other holding great smiles and were soon joined by all the others who started having a hearty joyful dance altogether. Party songs started to play again and everyone was enjoying a lot.
Laksh was staring misha like a love struck teenager while dancing and was brought back to reality when Lia patted on his cheek on which he blushed like anything…
Lia thought: OMG……..!!!!! I never knew that my donkey brother knew to blush…. Awww….
Lia herself was somewhere losing her self-controls near Kabir whenever he touched her or their eyes met while dancing…. Misha was already too drunk to notice anything except the music and dance. While Abhay was now having a fast dance after a great sensual dance with piya…. It was looking like there was nothing to worry in everybody's life now…. There only aim was to get their love and party and dance till they drop….
Piya was enough tired after the whole stressful day of organizing the party and her senses were playing with her when abhay was near and on top of that she had drunk quite a lot than she usually did while she wasn't able to find Abhay and was now having a close dance clinging to Abhay who was keeping her steady so that she doesn't fall. Abhay asked quite a lot times to take her to the rooms which they had booked but she was stubborn not to leave the party so Abhay thought to let piya have her wish which he was enjoying having her too close. "Good job, vampires don't need sleep" thought abhay.
Her fragrance and appeal of her blood was now of no sense as he loved her more than himself and any other thing that exists so he was able to control herself very well near piya.
Soon everybody lost their selves in the dance and was tired so they changed and slept wherever they found place in the rooms booked in the club.
Kabir and Angad went to a separate room with laksh to have a tight nap after so eventful happy day with lots of fun while aleena and Lia had their own room. Panchi and misha took an already sleeping Ruhi with them to their own room and were soon lost into slumber. Laksh wasn't still satisfied with staring misha so he sneaked out of his room and tip-toed to misha's room. Great luck that girls didn't lock form inside so he was easily able to sneak inside. He felt a great relief after seeing his tigress sleeping curled inside thick layers of blanket. Who knew what was she dreaming of though the smile on her face looked serene and silent.
Lia sensed laksh in the room beside her so she came to check laksh's room and when she found his bed empty she understood that he must have gone to misha's room but to her surprise she saw Kabir lying on the bed snoring and his blanket lying on the floor. She quickly went and took the blanket and covered Kabir who caught her hand while she was covering him.
Lia panicked thinking that Kabir has woken up but she felt relaxed when she could hear his snores again. She carefully removed her hand and went to misha's room and caught laksh red handed.
Abhay took piya to a separate room where piya as quickly saw bed she got lost in her dream world and when abhay came after changing and checking everything, he smiled seeing her cute angel snoring peacefully so he tucked blanket to keep her warm and got inside the bed to have a long night watching his piya sleep and having serenity in listening her heartbeats.
Next morning
After a long sleep everyone woke up to check out of the club. Abhay, Lia and aleena went to raichand mansion after dropping piya to dobriyal house while pa
nchi and misha went to their home. Kabir took laksh with him to his house.
Misha kept on chirping and jumping through whole journey to her house.
Panchi: jungleee… itna kood kyon rahi ho? Kuch hua hai kya…
Misha: tumhara birthday surprise Jo aa gayaa hai…
Panchi: aa gayaa hai…. Abb kon sa birthday surprise rah gayaa hai….
Misha: ghar pahuncho toh khud hi pata chal jayega…
Panchi: fine….
Dobriyal mansion
Mr. and Mrs. Dobriyal were still out of town but someone had come to visit them…. Or particularly say he had come to visit everyone except Arnab dobriyal. Donning in his casual T-Shirt and khaki pants….



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STILL TO BE WRITTEN FURTHER AND EDITED

SWATI...!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ths is really gud yr ur ff is like a drug to me its so intoxicating tht i culdnt stop myself reading the whole ff in a day...n now cuming to story its really superb n abhiya romance is so gud n laksh misha is so cute...but now who is ths new one who came fr panchi is he tht slayer or sum1 else i m really excited tht wht vil happen further... Plz update soon n plz add me 2 ur pm list as i m new here...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update...so nice they getting fell in love wow...plzzz add me in ur pm list yar...cont soon now
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
my name is Alicia pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated i think its d first time i commented here but i have read alll d chaps of ur ff n i love it plz add me 2 ur pm list :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey swati whn will yu update yur next chappi kafi din ho gaye hai yu have not updated sooo plsss update fast and dont forget to pm me becoz yu always forget to pm me
and
HAPPY KICK DAY
HAV A GUD DAY TC KS 😊
Edited by arunsunita_gm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its a grt story.al d parts r very nice.abhay-pia & al d others r very sweet.waitin 4 ur nxt part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its beautiful story...plzzz update it soon

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