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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update swati 👏 so now pia knows about twins good n she also knows about abhay n aleena r not humans nice😊 loved misha she n her pranks 🤣 laksh n misha r falling for eachother great update soon n dont take long next time 😊
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thnx for d pm
awesome gr8t updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
people i dont feel like updating right now...
i am not shutting it down but i want to have some break will try to update it soon...
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we will be waiting swati.. try 2 update soon plzz...
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Chapter XXX
Girls' hostel, Mount College'
It was piya who first woke up and was getting ready'. Today was Panchi's 19th birthday'. And misha asked piya to bunk classes and help her to arrange a surprise for birdie'. Piya called abhay and lied that she and Lia would not come to college as they are going for shopping'. As she couldn't tell anyone except Lia and aleena about their plan'. Soon Lia woke and piya told her the plan and asked her to get ready'.
Lia and piya reached dobriyal house where misha had already sent birdie out for some shopping with her mother asking everybody to pretend as if they forgot her birthday'. Panchi was really looking very sad that no one in her house remembered her birthday'
After the house was empty, the girl gang after a lot of pondering finalized to have a all girls' party at the zero degree night club for birdie where her well-wishers and friends would come after which the girls would have a sleepover at the club. No boy, t and her chamchis and pets were allowed in the party. Piya and aleena were given the duty to invite everyone and see decorations while Lia was asked to reserve the 1st floor of the night club for the party and sleepover. Misha was seeing the music, food and drinks. Finally after a lot of chaos they completed all the arrangements and no one except the four knew about it but suddenly Ruhi popped out of nowhere and finally the news of having a girl's sleepover was spread like a wildfire to every boy and girl.
Kabir and laksh were sitting in the cafeteria of the college with abhay and Angad who were still thinking why the girls were being so secretive about the sleepover.
Kabir: what the hell'. Ye girls ke dimaag mein chal kya raha hai' why are the hiding?
Laksh: aisa kya hai Jo in logne birthday party mein only girls ko bulaya hai'
Angad: mujhe lagata hai ki who koi nayi tarkeeb nikal rahi hain hum boys ko jealous karne ki'
Abhay: so what should we do now'?
Kabir: what about crashing the party guys'.
Laksh: nice' lets tell them that we are not fools'
Abhay: but how will we go'?
Laksh: Humein chup kar jaana hoga'
Kabir: par kaise'.? I mean how will we hide'?
Angad: abbey' ladikiyon ki party mein ladikiyon ki tarah jayenge'.
Abhay: then I am not coming'.
Laksh: what? I too' think something else'
Kabir: what about waiters'.
Abhay: pakde Gaye toh'.
Laksh: main hoon nah'. I'll make you all look different'.
All the boys gathered at kabir's mansion where Angad and Kabir had already arranged the costumes and other accessories. With a pinch of laksh's magic, all of them looked like real waiters ready to serve the girls with their tricks.
Zero degree night club, Panchi's birthday party
All the girls who were invited started entering the already decorated club in their short dresses clinging them tightly barely covering their thighs.
PIYA'S DRESS

ALEENA'S DRESS

MISHA'S DRESS




RUHI'S DRESS



Most of them were not invited to the sleepover as it was only for the near and dear ones of panchi who consisted barely a dozen of people. Soon panchi was also called and she came their panicking as she was informed that misha had picked a fight with some drunken boy and is out of control. Panchi was all surprised and bewildered as she didn't even smell that something like that was cooking. She was feeling ecstatic and soon she mixed in the party and started enjoying it to the core.

PANCHI'S DRESS


The boys also entered inside the club and mixed in the girls serving them with the drinks and other refreshments. Laksh chose to be the bartender as he knew whose centre of attraction was the bar. Misha went to the favorite spot and felt like special there.
Misha: hey... buddy'. Two vodkas for me and a soft drink for my curly head friend'.
Laksh as bartender: sure madam'.
Laksh first served piya and after she left the place he was alone with misha standing at front waiting anxiously for her drink. He made a less strong drink for misha so she doesn't get drunk but misha caught him.
Misha: hey' you moron'. Main tumhe koyi choti bacchi dikthi hoon kya'. Hard drink for hard ones'.. Make other one or else I'll break your legs'.
Laksh followed the instructions given to him and served drinks to misha as she wanted and then served other girls still trying to steal glances of her while serving.
On the other hand, piya was feeling sad for not even telling about her plans to abhay, she wasn't feeling good and was missing him dearly. Abhay was also standing inside the club waiting for the shift of waiters to change so he could see what was so secretive that piya didn't tell him. Piya could feel him near but could not find him. She checked each and every corner of the club to find abhay but was unsuccessful and abhay was on the other hand enjoying this game of hide n seeks to give piya the taste of her own medicine. He bumped into many people and rubbed himself to lot of people so piya couldn't find him and could get confused.
Lia was enjoying dancing at the dance floor when she suddenly bumped into someone'. Someone she knew and had a strong impact over her'. Her dress was spoil due to some food item which accidently dropped her and when she lifted her gaze to see who did that so she found a frightened waiter running towards the kitchen.
Lia thought: It was strange'. I know him'. Oh must be my fault'
At last when most of the girls went home and only few were left for the sleepover, piya went to the changing room to change into her nightdress and just then she found a pair of strong arms encircling her from her waist taking in her sweet fragrance. She didn't need to turn back to find who was it as she could tell from yards away that it was her abhay who had finally shown his face to her after a long day.
While Lia and misha found Kabir and laksh with Angad changing from waiter's costume to their own casual wears. They started shouting and calling other girls who became angry over those three poor red-handed caught souls and were beat badly.
On the other hand, piya was melting in abhay's arms like some chocolate in someone's mouth. Abhay was staring those cute brown doe eyes drinking their purity and was smoothly tracing piya's facial features with his knuckles'. They kept staring each other for long time till abhay broke the silence.
Abhay with naughty glint in his eyes: you look so sexy in this dress' this sexy number is clinging so close to you barely covering your thighs'. Ohh... I wish I could do the same'
Piya blushed scarlet: you are so sick abhay'. how did you come in' it's all girls' party'..
Abhay: so what party's over'. And I wasn't able to any work without seeing you form whole day'.
Piya: ohh' my majnu'. We have a girl's sleepover now and its better you leave or I'll inform others and they will roast you'
Abhay making puppy faces: and do you want them to do that to me?
Piya affirmatively: yes'.
Abhay: achcha' give me a kiss and then I will go'
Piya: ok'.
Piya came near Abhay and gave him a soft kiss on his lips but it soon turned into a passionate one when Abhay pinned her to the wall and started teasing and sucking her lips with piya equally matching his desires.
Their passionate lip lock was soon caught red-handed when aleena opened the door trying to find piya while others were still beating the other boys who were already caught.
Aleena: oh my goodness'' bhai I thought you were wise enough not to crash girls' party but it's so impossible for you to keep away from piya for even a day'.
Abhay: shut up you monster'. Don't you have some manners'. Didn't somebody teach you'.Knock before you come'?
Aleena: as if' its girls washroom not your bedroom'. I am a certified girl and can enter in the washroom without knocking'. Mr. Blind'. And moreover' didn't somebody teach you not to crash parties when you aren't invited?
Abhay: whatever' I was just leaving'..
Aleena: not so soon dear' time for punishment'. Your friends are getting it too'
Piya had walked form abhay's side and stood with aleena in her support now'
Piya: yeah its punishment time now'.
Both the girls pulled abhay with them while abhay was throwing daggers on both of them for doing this to him.
Kabir and Angad were standing with laksh and were looking terrible after getting so much of beating'. When abhay also joined them with piya and aleena.
Lia: where did you find Abhay aleena?
Aleena: he was busy with piya in the washroom when I caught both of them'.
Misha: piya you cheated us'. You let this moron have fun with you'. It was all girls' party remember'.
Piya trying to prove herself right: I didn't invite him' I had gone to the washroom to change into my night suit when he came from back and''
Lia: enough'. You both are wrong and you both will be punished'.
Soon all the girls started shouting'. PUNISHMENT'' ABHAY-PIYA'''TOGETHER'..
Aleena: since its Panchi's birthday then she will decide what punishment should be given to these despos'. Right girls'.
Girls in unison: RIGHT''..!!!!!!!!
Panchi: fine'. Abhay and piya''. Your punishment is to dance together and entertain us'. Rules are it should be VERY CLOSE''!!!!!!
Aleena: VERY SENSUAL'..!!!!!!
Misha: VERY SEXY'!!!!!!!
Lia: AND VERY ROOOMAAANNNTIIICCC''..!!!!!!! RIGHT GIRLS'..
Girls in unison: RIGHT''..!!!!!!!!
Abhay had finally his wish to have piya very close and was up for it while piya was throwing daggers on everyone as she knew that she would surely loose herself to abhay if he would be so close.
Abhay held piya's hand and took her to the dance floor when the lights were off and they had colourful spotlights over them...

abhay was having a great time near piya… they were dancing so close inhaling each other's scent and drinking each other from their eyes… it was so engrossing and apitavating to see them dancing so close…. The songs were so perfect for them….
LADY IN RED
I've never seen you looking so lovely as you did tonight,
I've never seen you shine so bright,
I've never seen so many men ask you if you wanted to dance,
They're looking for a little romance, given half a chance,
And I have never seen that dress you're wearing,
Or the highlights in your hair that catch your eyes,
I have been blind;

The lady in red is dancing with me, cheek to cheek,
There's nobody here, it's just you and me,
It's where I want to be,
But I hardly know this beauty by my side,
I'll never forget the way you look tonight;

I've never seen you looking so gorgeous as you did tonight,
I've never seen you shine so bright, you were amazing,
I've never seen so many people want to be there by your side,
And when you turned to me and smiled, it took my breath away,
And I have never had such a feeling,
Such a feeling of complete and utter love, as I do tonight;

The lady in red is dancing with me, cheek to cheek,
There's nobody here, it's just you and me,
It's where I want to be,
But I hardly know this beauty by my side,
I'll never forget the way you look tonight;

I never will forget the way you look tonight.
The lady in red, the lady in red,
The lady in red, my lady in red,

I love you
KISS THE GIRL
Percussion
Strings
Winds
Words

There you see her
Sitting there across the way
She don't got a lot to say
But there's something about her
And you don't know why
But you're dying to try
You wanna kiss the girl

Yes, you want her
Look at her, you know you do
It's possible she wants you, too
There is one way to ask her
It don't take a word
Not a single word
Go on and kiss the girl

Sing with me now
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
My, oh, my
Look at the boy too shy
He ain't gonna kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Ain't that sad
Ain't it shame, too bad
You gonna miss the girl

Now's your moment
Floating in a blue lagoon
Boy, you better do it soon
No time will be better
She don't say a word
And she won't say a word
Until you kiss the girl

Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Don't be scared
You got the mood prepared
Go on and kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Don't stop now
Don't try to hide it how
You wanna kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Float along
Listen to the song
The song say kiss the girl
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Music play
Do what the music say
You wanna kiss the girl

You've got to kiss the girl
Why don't you kiss the girl
You gotta kiss the girl
Go on and kiss the girl
The song was so apt and to add the extra magic…. Abhay really kissed piya on her lips to which piya replied with same passion forgetting about her surroundings.


Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated..and it was awesome! Abhay is definitely naughty..continue soon plz..cant wait for abhiya dance!
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice update. waiting for Abhiya dance now
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
cant wait 4 next update...abhiya will dance 2gether wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update swati waiting for abhiya dance now

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