Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Darling.

All r thinking about Maan n Geet only.

what about Riya?

She is the one missing out...na

She is having hard time...she wants her day to be with her..spend time with her and all that...what about RIya...

Please let Riya get her love from her dad...

N geet shud have told maan na...he deserves the right.

How can she marry yash now...juss to give name...

no...

n arjun..urhghhh😡

pyar bhi kara hai...but uff...his brain thinks stupidly..😳

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Water.
Darling.
All r thinking about Maan n Geet only.
what about Riya?
She is the one missing out...na
She is having hard time...she wants her day to be with her..spend time with her and all that...what about RIya...

Please let Riya get her love from her dad...

N geet shud have told maan na...he deserves the right.
How can she marry yash now...juss to give name...
no...
n arjun..urhghhh😡
pyar bhi kara hai...but uff...his brain thinks stupidly..😳

a very valid thought even i forget about riya she is carving love from her dad maan geet should have told maan

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: abinash079

a very valid thought even i forget about riya she is carving love from her dad maan geet should have told maan

Yes true..riya is suffering most!!
Well..the nexxt part will clear all queries asked;D

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Im giving this update only because well...there are many of you..who accordingly want Geet to suffer...and think injustice is been done to Maan..well guys there is a reason behind it as well...everything will be answered hopefully in this update which will focus on clearing your doubts...meaning the past!!!
.Part 12:
Geet sat there with Khushi and Yash who were chattering continuously...but her thoughts went back to the past...
**Flashback**
Y-Geet your phone is ringing...
G-Pick it up...
Y-But you don't like it if anyone picks it up then how can I?
G-Yash..im not that Geet anymore..that use to be a stupid habit...i don't want any of the past with me...im a new changed Geet!!
Y-But..
G-Nahi..Yash this is a new me..a new life with my daughter...I don't want the past anymore..the old Geet is dead...i want nothing from the past that may affect my future...i don't want any habits that remind me of Maan...
Y-Okay!!
**Flashback ends**
She knew it had been Maan on the phone today she could tell...and she knew he must have felt hurt when he heard Yash on the phone...but she was a changed woman now...a stronger Geet who only lived for her daughter...
K-Geet whats wrong?
G-Hmmm...Kuch nahi thinking about this Friday...
K-Geet are you sure?
G-No..im not...Khushi im not sure about anything...
Geet started sobbing uncontrollably...
K-Geet..kya howa?
G-Khushi...you dont know but im not sure about anything..i dont know if i did right...should I have told Maan everything?
K-Geet hume lagta toh hai ke you should have...i mean it was only a misunderstanding right?
You could have cleared it...
Y-She couldn't have...
K-Why Yash?
Y-I'll tell you...
**Flashback**
Geet had gone to Maan the next day...she entered the house when she saw a lady leaving the house...
G-Ji aap kaun?
L-Woh...i don't know i came here last night with this guy and then we...just you know and im leaving now...
G-What do you mean?
L-Well...he was saying something about cheating on his fiance...cos she did the same...something...i don't know..i just came here...i was drunk...he was drunk...you know..
G-Okay...
She prayed in her heart that it was not Maan the lady was talking about...she rushed to his room...and saw him...coming out of the bathroom...
G-Maan...meri baat suno...
M-Geet just go from here..i dont want to hear anything..
G-Maan woh larki...
M-Yes...i bought that girl home...yes we SLEPT TOGETHER..THATS WHAT YOU WANT TO KNOW RIGHT?SO YOU CAN TELL EVERYONE I CHEATED ON YOU...FINE TELL EVERYONE THAT..AND I WIL ADMIT IT...I SLEPT WITH THAT GIRL BEFORE MY MARRIAGE HAPPY?
G-Maan..don't joke with me...
M-You can cheat on me i cant?
G-Maan don't do this to me...Your kidding right?
M-Ur mm..No im not Geet...Last night i went to the bar...got drunk and thought if you can cheat on me..why cant I do the same?
G-Maan..what you're thinking is wrong...It isn't like you think it is...
M-GEET I DONT CARE!!I HAVE MOVED ON...M.O.V.E.D.O.N...GET IT..YOU BETRAYED ME..CHEATED ON ME...THAT'S IT...YOU AND ME HAVE NOTHING LEFT NOW!!
Tears streamed her face and she asked in a pleading voice:'Maan please...just listen to me once...just once please Maan..'
M-GET OUT MS.HANDA
Geet fell on knees...and started sobbing:'Maaan...pleasse just onceee just listen to me once...please..Maan'
M-I DONT WANT TO HEAR ANYTHING..WHAT I SAW AND KNEW WAS ENOUGH!!
G-Theek**sob** Maan how can you move on so easily?
M-I didnt..I just wanted to take my revenge...If you can sleep around with people..so can I...
It may be difficult to forget you but not impossible..I WILL LEARN TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU...
G-Maan did you really sleep with that girl?
M-YES MISS.GEET HANDA..I SLEPT WITH THAT GIRL...I HAD AN AMAZING TIME...IT WAS THE BEST...FOR THOSE MOMENTS I FORGOT YOU..SO YES ME AND HER DID IT...AND THAT'S A TRUTH YOU CANT CHANGE...
G-Maan paar...how do you remember all this?
M-I always remember what i do while im drunk..
G-So that night?
M-Yes Geet i remember everything that happened that night...and what i know now is enough..SO GET THE HECK OUT OF MY HOUSE!!
He pushed her out of his room...she stood their numb...so he knew all along what had happened between them?Yet he did not believe her?
after those beautiful moments...he chose to accuse her and cheat on her?
How could he?
He forgot all that..even though he knew what happened that night?
He choose to ignore that and believe others?
He destroyed everything by the step he took...he didnt listen to her..just assumed and went and slept with some random girl for revenge?
Had he stooped that low?
After that night he still mistrusted her?
**Flashback ends**
K-Geet?
G-Hmmm...
K-What you thinking?
G-I cant marry Yash...
K&Y-Okay...
Geet looked startled and stared at them...
Y-Geet i hate Maan and all...but i know how much you love each other..by marrying me..it would get complicated...our friendship would get ruined yaar...
K-Geet hume pata hai ke what Maan did was wrong but you can tell him right?
R-Tell him what?
Geet looked up to see Rahul standing at the door...she rushed forward and hugged him and started crying..she had missed her bestfriend...whom she could share everything with..
R-Geet kya howa.why you crying?Missed me so much?
G-Nahii..woh baas Maan...
R-Kya kiya usne?
G-Bohut kuch..
R-Tell me...
Geet sat down beside him and told him everything...by the end of it Rahul was fuming in anger..
R-Mujhe pata tha we shouldnt have done this deal..par tu bhi na Geet..profit hai..profit hai...aab you know how close you are to losing Riya?

Yash was listening to the conversation when his phone rang...he excused himself to attend the call...he answered:
Y-Hey
A-Yash...sun i need your help..
Y-In?
A-Reuniting Maan and Geet...
Y-Tu pagal hai kya?Maan hurt Geet so much...
A-I know but he loves her alot...
Y-Nahi Armaan cant help you...

Arohi's phone started ringing...she picked it up:
Arohi-Hello
Arj-Hello
Aro-Arjun tum?
Arj-Arey wah...toh what you up to?
Aro-Nothing baas ainvayi..
Arj-Up for a walk?
Aro-Now?
Arj-Nahi kaal..
Aro-Theek hai...see you tomorrow..
Arj-Pagli..im talking about now...
Aro-Oh toh meet you at the park in 5 minutes?
Arj-Theek hai but which park?
Aro-One near my house...
Arj-Okay..bye see ya
Aro-See you!

Armaan was sitting there and wondering how to convince Yash to help him?
Hmmm...
A-Shilpa?
S-Haan...
A-How should i convince Yash?
S-First of all...be sorry and convince him Maan actually loves Geet...
A-Yeah..
S-Paar isnt he married to her?
A-No i found it..it was all fake..just to show Maan...
S-Paar she has a child right?
A-Yeah..
S-Phir woh?
A-She's Maan and Geet's daughter..
S-WHAT?HOW WHEN?
A-Shilpa very long story...right now im planning how to reunite them?
S-Why dont you try convincing Arjun and Arohi?
A-Hmmm..yeah sounds like a start!!
S-But what will you do?
A-Start with clearing off their misunderstandings and then make them forgive each other..
S-But Brij?
A-That's why im worried too...

Maan sat there thinking he had to be strong..prove that Geet Handa did not affect his life anymore...he didn't give a damn about her and to prove that...he had to leave all grudges and work with her...yes he had to do that..picking up his phone..he dialed her number..
Someone picked it up...
M-Hello
Hello...
M-Kaun?
Mein Riya...
M-Beta aapki mummy kaha hain?
R-Khushi aunty ke saath..aap kaun?
M-Mein aapki mummy ka friend...
R-Acha...aapka naam kya hai?
M-Mera naam Maan hai..
R-MAAN?
M-Haan kyu?
R-Woh..mera papa ka...
M-Apke papa ka?
R-Mein apko kyu batao?
M-Mein apka freind hoo na?
R-Kaise meina toh apki kabi dekha bhi nahi?
M-Lekin baat toh ki na?
R-Hmmm...nahi nahi..mein nahi manti..mamma says not to talk to strangers...
M-Paar my apki mamma ka friend hoon
R-Hmm...toh mamma ka friend mera friend?
M-Exactly..toh mein apka friend hoo na?
R-Theek hai..toh friends?
M-Freinds...
R-Pinky promise?
M-Pinky promise..
R-Yayy..i have a new friend now!!
M-Yes..you do..waise you have seen me..
R-When?
M-That day when you came to meet your mamma?
R-Oh...but mamma was shouting at you?
M-Woh...she was a bit angry..that's it..
R-Acha..i want to meet you again..
M-Hmm..but how?
R-Come over here..
M-Hmm..let me see...
R-Okay..
M-Bye Riya..
R-Bye friend...
Maan was grinning like a fool when he cut the call...he felt so happy...he felt alive again and he didn't know why it had felt important that little girl knew him and cared for him...he wanted to know her..to keep speaking to her...he didn't know why he felt that absurd connection with her...He sighed and started getting ready to leave to meet Riya..he didn't know why it felt important to meet her,to see her...
Right now MSK..didn't have any answers and he was happy with it!

Yash was sitting with Riya..who was looking really happy..
Y-Princess aap to bari khush hain?
R-Yes...because my friend is coming
Y-Which friend?
R-My new friend..he's coming over and we'll play loads...
Y-Acha?
R-Haan...and you know i felt like i knew him from a long time...
Y-Really?
R-Hmm..
Y-Acha princess..abhi i need to go..you go to mamma...
R-Yash papa...
Y-Ji princess?
R-Mera papa kabhi nahi ayenga na?
Y-What makes you say that?
R-Yash papa..im serious..every year everyone tells me..he'll come next time...next time..but he never does...maybe he forgot me or he doesn't love me...he doesnt care about me..
Tears started forming in her eyes...
Y-Shhh..princess..its not like that...baby...papa loves you alot...and he can never forgot..how can you think like that?He cares for you so much...just that he's a little busy na?But he loves you loads and can never forgot his princess...
R-Pakka?
Y-Pakka..baby!!
Riya hugged him and he hugged her...deep down he felt so bad...he sighed...he thought time has come...Maan should know about all this..in between all this ego..Riya's life shouldn't be destroyed!!

Maan's blood boiled at the thought of Riya being in Yash's arms..he felt protective of her all of a sudden...he felt that he should be comforting her..he didn't know why..he was feeling so possessive about the child that wasn't even his?
When suddenly Riya looked at him and came running...
R-Maan friend right?
M-Right..
He bend down so they were head to head now..
M-So Hey Riya...
R-Hey friend...
M-How is my darling?
R-Darling?
M-Haan...kyu?
R-Nahi..everyone always calls me princess or baby..that's why?
M-But im not everyone..im your friend Maan..
R-Haan..but?
M-Theek hai..you are my Baby princess?
R-I like that..
She jumped in joy..Maan just smiled..he felt peaceful at last...the calm that failed him in the last 5 years returned..all hatred gone...just love..pure love was left..for this child whom he had just met...but he didn't care...
Maan picked her up and she hugged him and said:'I like my new friend...'
M-I Love my new friend...

Geet looked at the scene in front of her with tears in her eyes...how she wished every second of her life..this could be true and how she wished right now..this moment could last forever...finally in front of her eyes...she saw her daughter with her father...
Maan was holding Riya while she was chattering away...there was a different glow to her face...Geet smiled whole-heartedly...
She knew what she was doing wrong by keeping Riya away from Maan but it was the only thing which was right..she couldn't forgot what he had done..the smile vanished from her face...the spark in her eyes disappeared...she looked at her baby who was so happy...she hadn't seen her this happy ever...there was a glow and and a spark while talking to Maan..which was never there...but she knew..this couldn't happen...and she screamed:'MR.KHURANA KEEP MY DAUGHTER DOWN RIGHT NOW!!

Precap-Maan i have to tell you something..
Armaan i have moved on..
Geet's heart shattered...

Okay guys...VERY IMPORTANT:
THIS PART I GAVE AWAY A LOT OF THINGS VERY QUICKLY...I WOULD REVEAL ALL THESE THINGS REALLY SLOWLY BUT EVERYONE WAS REALLY PISSED..WITH SOME FACTS SO I THOUGHT TO CLEAR A FEW THINGS UP..BUT FROM THE NEXT PART THERE WILL BE NO PAST..ONLY PRESENT MORE OF MAAN-RIYA BONDING AND YASH-ARMAAN PLANS..ARJUN-AROHI ROMANCE...MAANEET EGO CLASHES...PLUS HAS THIS UPDATE CHANGED YOUR VIEW IF IT HAS DO MENTION IT;D
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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

dear i agree with u

but dont show much ego clashes i want maan to know thw truth soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

well ...can we assume that what ever Maan has spoken us all coz of betrayal he thought & to satisfy his ego.

nyway Dad - Daughter moments were so sweet.

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meena..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

awesome

cont soon

keep writing

thanx for pm

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

nice one

thanks for the pm

do continue

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: -dia-
well ...can we assume that what ever Maan has spoken us all coz of betrayal he thought & to satisfy his ego.

nyway Dad - Daughter moments were so sweet.

Well..i dont know...you have to wait..it can be the truth also!!
Thankyou;D