Maneet FF-tum mere kaun hu-pt-48- pg-144 - Page 59

Created

Last reply

Replies

795

Views

421.8k

Users

127

Likes

6.8k

Frequent Posters

TeamMcSwarek thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
loveed it
cont soon
thanks for the pm
varsha-sharma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago

PART-39

He stood like a paralyzed. She is right...i deserve it but what about kuhu...i have done the mistake so she is punishing me. why she left kuhu...dadima , anni, vicky ...why she forget everybody. she didn't bother to ask at least once about kuhu...she didn't remember anybody. How she can forget her motherhood...geet tum bahuth badal gayi...remembering his kuhu he banged the wall angrily.

Kuhu innocent face appeared in front of him. she didn't get her parents love at least once. She grown up only under the shadow of dadima and anni. I have done mistake, I deserve all these punishments but kuhu...what a pretty baby...how many days he heard her cry at midnights. Anni and dadima how much they tried to control her. she missed her mother love, she missed her mom's breast milk, she missed her mom's warmth when she scared at nights. Even she missed her father's love all these days where it is only her rights.

"maan?...pls try to come home early. I don't like my baby has to wait like me always for you..." how much she loved her baby when she is pregnant. When we lost our first baby she mentally retired...how can she forget her own child...no geet I won't leave to move from my baby's life. she had the right ...to feel you, You have to give your mother hood to her. you can just escape so easily. Again you cheated everyone you are dead. Being alive how can you give so much of pain to my family. You had the right to punish me but not my family and my daughter...geet you have to pay for it.you have to answer all my question and you have to back.

He went to raj cabin. Geet standing and showing some designs to him. prem is standing next to her. just one feet away. maan eyes are fuming with angry. Once he passed angry look on both and he sat on another chair. Raj explaining about the projects what he started in Chennai and Hyderabad but nothing is entering in his mind. the manager of radhakrishna builders entered the cabin. He requested raj family to attend send of party which is organized by employees. they invited even maan . maan agreed actually as per his schedule he have to leave Bangalore by evening ,but he changed his mind .he want his geet back. Some how he want to trap her. whether she is wife of prem or mother for his child or she is daughter of raj. He didn't bothering anything now. Just he need her back as a daughter in law of dadima and as a mother of his baby. Now his mind is searching the way to reach her.

While thinking with out his knowledge he smashed water glass which is in front of him. geet rushed to him. thank god raj is already left the cabin. She is taken first aid box to apply some medicines. But maan removed his hand from her and walked angrily.

Prem is looking restless. Some thing he is trying to speak with maan, maan is not in a mood. He didn't bother to look at least once at him.

By evening all are in party hall. Raj introduced maan as a new bass to RB. After some time geet went to washroom. Maan immediately followed her. prem observed but this time he didn't followed maan. he just sat on couch thinking deeply.

Raj walk towards prem. "what are you thinking prem...about meera..."

Prem smiled. He know already raj suffered by heart attack two times. He should be very careful with him. that's the reason meera forcing her papa to settle in USA. Here geet can take care but still she need her papa with her. " ha ..papa..actually her due date is this month end. Suddenly her baby head fixed any time she can deliver it. We have to move at any cost tomorrow. "

Raj put his hand on prem shoulder. "don't worry prem...as we planned we leave India tomorrow. Already I have handover all the responsibilities to maan. I know he is new to Bangalore. But geet can guide him. any how she is not planning to come with us. how many times meera try to convince her but she didn't agreed. she had a attachment with our orphanage home. she want to live with orphanage children."

Prem closed his eyes. after his engagement broken with geet he went USA with a broken heart. There he met meera some how again he fall in love with her. he married her. when he really surprised in his marriage day when he saw geet as friend for meera. After some time when he come to know about geet separated from maan really it hurt him more. Till today he don't know the reason but he know very well that even today geet love maan. her love is pure towards maan, but he don't know why she is addressing herself as prem wife.

When he questioned geet she didn't answer properly. Just she requested him to co-operate. He know about meera and geet friendship. There are too close friends where meera trusted her in everything she left her papa in geet responsibility. Even raj treated geet like her second daughter.

Geet coming from washing room. Maan closed her mouth with his palm and dragged to another corner where it is dark.

Geet try to scream but she couldn't, her mouth his closed tightly where she couldn't take her breath. She is about faint. " geet don't try to escape...it will hurt you..."

She is breath less. Still he didn't removed his hand from her mouth. Actually his hand covered her both nostrils with her mouth. How much she struggle to loose his grip ,so much he tightened his grip on her. finally she stopped her protest.

"geet I want you back..." with cool voice.

"maan don't think like a foolish...just away from me..." she roared on him.

He is not loosening his grip on her. "first answer me...if you want to move on my life ok I agreed but why did you spread that you are dead..."

Geet shocked" no I didn't spread those news . in fact why I should do...i have written a letter to dadima when I am leaving your house..."still he is not believing her.

"geet galthi maine kiya tho saza muje dena padega...lekhin hamari baby ka kya kasoor hain geet...?kue tum baby ko chodkar agaya..."

" maan...baby sirf aur sirf dadima ka amanath aur khurana khandhan ka amanath. I am not have a perfect identity any where in your house. Dadima loves me like her daughter, you love...sorry you married me bcoz I am like sangeetha di, ani loves me like her sister, but where is my own identity maan. when you are not ready to accept me your wife .. why I should stay in KM. at least my baby need proper identity. I don't want my baby to struggle like me. she deserve some true love from your part." Her voice is cracking.

He don't have any mercy on her. everything is lie...she is lying with me how can she leave everybody spreading news that she dead. "geet you are changed..there is lot of change on you geet. my geet is very innocent and her heart always beet for me...she never lied me..."

before he completing his word she roared" that's the reason you cheated me..you used me like a prostitute...maan if you need such happiness it can be fulfilled by any other ..." He couldn't control his anger any more. he slapped tightly on her cheek. she fainted on his chest.

Suddenly he scared what he done to her...she made him wild...he agreed all his mistakes, but her words...no ...he try to wake her "geet...geet.."he know she is pregnant ...agreed all my mistakes I have not treat you my wife...but I am not aware that I am really love with you. I didn't understood my heart my self. his fingers tugged her hairs back. Still she didn't gain her sense. his hands started to shiver. The chill sense passed towards in his spins and made him to scare more. he brought some water and splashed on her.

Now she is looking better. He hugged her tightly." Sorry geet...sorry... again I have done the mistake..."

She don't have the strength to protest on him. she surrendered her self. after few minutes she opened her mouth" wo ..how is our...baby...". he is waiting that question from her from yesterday. Even she wants to ask same question him from yesterday. But she didn't... he explored his pain in front of her

"muje kya path hain geet..." his voice is too low and too pain full.

Geet shocked. It means h e didn't accept my baby also...she holed his shirt collar. Now she is more then wild compare to him. " what it means...where is my baby ,what you did..."

Maan understood...now she is panicking".. geet calm down...when your death news spread in KM everyone punished me. dadima not let me to enter KM. anni didn't bother to give a small message about her marriage. Dadima ,anni, vicky looking me like a criminal. They are thinking I am the reason for your death...but you are here..." his eyes were pleading.

He felled down with his knees. Now his face is touching her tummy. After two years his pain is melting into tears. After two years he is crying. Geet stood like paralyzed...how its possible...i have written the letter to dadima...when I am leaving KM. how come they declared that I am dead or maan really telling me true...but his tears made her to trust him."...you know geet...dadima didn't let me to touch my baby at least once...you believe it or not I don't know about baby whether it is boy or girl for many days. I don't know when is our baby birthday...Even today I am watching my baby like a thief. Till today I didn't kissed her at least once...dadima punished me where I can not get such punishment at legal court ..."he is pouring all his pain in front of geet.

Geet shocked...did dadima treated him in this way...his tears are not stopping.

'I missed her smile, I missed her first talk, I missed her first walk, dadima didn't let me to give a small chocolate to my baby. I am the looser...looser..."still he is crying like a kid. Geet couldn't stop her tears. How come dadima punish so badly. Who published that I am dead...

PRECAP: MAAN TRYING TO TRAP GEET...

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

Silent readers pls I need all your likes and comments for my FF. if you really liked my FF, pls do not ignore to press like button. It will motivate lot for me.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 13 years ago
mrk-1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
awsome yaar ...time for maan to let geet know his true feelings ..
TeamMcSwarek thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
truly a beautiful part!
i loved it so much
the emotions were portrayed so well
cont soon
thanks for the pm
6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
phew..thank God...what I (not only I many readers) assumed about Geet is not true...she is not married to Prem and not pregnant either...and that rumour about her death is just from Maan's family not Geet...but why she told lie about her marriage...she can confront Maan and if she don't want to believe him she can say that clearly why there is need to tell lie about marriage thing and that too with her friend's husband...

anyway now that is cleared for us not Maan..he is in illusion that she is married and pregnant so it will be very interesting to know how he is going to trap her.

thanx for pm...Varsha
18mypride thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
ha a big sigh...
thanx..it s a nice update!
chubzy thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Oh thank god! Geet didnt marry prem, m sooo happy after reading this update.
jssood thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
as it is your 1st ff but it is wonderful
update soon
harshithaaaaaaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
wow.😊...yippe happy with update😃... superb and fabulous update😆... in the last update i was cursing geet for things she did😛... but she is a gorgeous lady.👏... she informed dadima about leaving mansion😊... the whole story about geet is cooked by dadima😡... she is not married to prem⭐️...even now she is loving maan to core😆... poor baby doesn't get love of both the parents🤢...she is not leaving to US😉... maan please bring your life (wife) back to you... give love of mother and father to baby which is missed from last two years...

wow varsha our FF is excellent...i'm enjoyig alot with our unexpected twists... in one update i feel bad for maan and geet but next update i will feel happy for maan and geet... love u
abina03 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant part

i am loving your way of writing &story. you are too brilliant with your plot. i just feel like not write negative comments when you are doing a good job. last part too i was bak bak some thing.as a reader i didn't like the clarification which given by Geet to leave her baby that "amanat part &all.as a mother she can't give such a lame excuse to leave her pre mature baby .all family members were on her side so she could have take the child with her &retun the "amanat " once she grown up .Dadima can play the same story on Maan.[i know Varsha wants to punish Maan more keeping his baby in front of but unreachable to him .😆] how she loves the children in orphanage when she is not even keeping a trace on her own child ?

why she is not ready to believe Maan? he is her so called love na.if she believes in her love in first place this never happens.
why he wants to lie her?
she didn't get marry any one that doesn't justify her act. i hate her. but Maan is suffering so i want them together


am i over reacting on a story that too some one written amazingly ...



you are doing a wonderful job

go ahead with your story

let us curse&love Maaneet

thanks for the update& pm

waiting for the coming up
love you

God bless you

Edited by abina03 - 13 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

3 months ago

Mere Brother Ki Dulhan ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @heavenlybliss in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Person A's gets alliance of...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".