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Posted: 13 years ago
omg absolutely amazing ff...
so much twists...
maan lost geet by his own foolishness...
but i cant believe that geet married prem and she is pregnant...
sent u buddy req...
pl add me in ur pm list...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-38

He is totally blanked. He don't know what is running in his mind. Geet...with ...prem. did she is alive... Did she married again... How can she left her baby and choose prem and now she is pregnant... There are so many question in his mind... Only geet can answer all these question. his gaze is not even moving from her...his geet?only his geet now she is standing next to another person addressing her she is his wife...unbelievable.

Raj tapped him..." Mr. Maan singh khurana any thing wrong..."

Maan waked , he extended his hand towards prem. Even prem extended his hand. But he is still looking at geet. her smile vanished within a second. Even she is not expected him in Bangalore. She thought already his chapter is closed in her life. again...why he came here...bhabaji still you are testing me...why I don't have rights to live Pease fully. Her gaze moved to ceiling...maan very much know ..now she is praying with her bhabhaji. Raj observing quietly him...prem immediately catch his hand greeted him. "hello Mr.Maan singh khurana... " maan totally pale.

Some how he maintained him self. he extended his hand to geet.. but geet just joined her hands in Indian style. She didn't dare to give her hand to him. She scared. She know very well the magic of his touch. Her face fully drained like there is no drop of blood in her face. Her skin turned to white. She couldn't stand any more" papa, excuse me...I have some work..." she moved to her room. Prem followed her... now maan blood is boiling how dare he is following her to room. She is only mine...his breath become warm. His palms tightened , his jaw tightened... his angry gaze followed them till they reach the room...

" maan did you know her..." raj question brought him sense.

"no..." why he told lie . he don't know . still his eyes are firing.

" any thing wrong...can we complete our formalities..."

" umm?yes sir?" he is so restless. Nothing in his mind .totally blank?.without his knowledge , without reading anything blindly he signed.

"congratulations Mr. Maan singh khurana the new owner of Radhakrishna builders?." He handover all his papers to him. his eyes were teary. "maan come lets have our break fast. Don't know when this geet and prem will back."

"sorry sir..now I am not hungry..pls.." his eyes are still glued on geet room." Ok maan even I am not hungry...today I don't have Pease of mind." His Radhakrishna builders not his own anymore. Again he pressed intercom and ask prem and geet come to dining table. After few minutes when they sat on dining table. maan clearly observed geet eyes are swollen. Prem looking rest less.

Raj about move his room geet hold him" papa did you had your breakfast..."

"no..but today .."

"no papa, ..pls it is not good for your health. Have some breakfast..." she himself served everybody. there is south Indian dish on table. she know very well he likes pasta only. But still she served. Maan gaze is not moving here and there. he is continuously scanning her from top to bottom. He didn't touch the plate.

Raj just ate one dosa and went his room. Now only geet , prem, and maan remained. She can not be there any more. She went to kitchen. She washed her hand. Now her tears are not stopping. Its started to flow continually. She washed her face at wash basin trying to cool her self. when she about to turn maan standing next to her. she try to move from there. he holed her wrist tightly. " geet did you married again..." another surprise on her eyes. she dipped her face down. She didn't bother to answer him. he holed her arm tightly. Its hurting her. she is trying to come out from his grip. but maan not leaving her. he need the answer from her. what all these days he suffered . he pulled her close. His gaze turning to aggressive. Any movement he can loose his patients.

She is struggling to come out from his grip. "maan leave me..you are hurting me.." he tightened his jaw pulled her too closer...he is looking her eyes..he know her eyes can not be lie with him..but today only he can see scare in her eyes..."maan now I am married prem...leave me..." only one sentence it explode bomb next to him. suddenly he left her arm. His eyes were gone deep. not believing her words. Once again he scanned. Yes she is wearing south Indian style mangalsuthra. His hand caressed mangalsuthra which is all ways in his pocket.

"geet..." prem called her...she left the place horridly. Maan standing near the washbasin really he don't know how long he stood there. when raj send the servant to call him, maan came in sense. Raj ask him to visit his construction sites and office. Maan not in mood but he agreed . some how he want to meet her alone. All went to Radhakrishna builders. Raj describing him everything ..but maan not in this world. He is thinking only about geet. he is trying to meet her alone. He want to know how dadima declared that she is dead. He called dadima . after two years he called dadima . he know she wont take his call but still he tried. She didn't picked his call.

Finally prem got a important call. He went out side. Raj felt very tired. He requested geet to guide about his office. She nodded. He followed her. maan just observing his surroundings. Suddenly he grabbed her to one empty cabin. Her breath choked. She scared. Her eyes widened about his dare ness. "maan leave me..." she try to loose his grip. but this is maan singh khurana. How can he leave her so easily. Geet know very well this is sound proof cabin. Maan gaze moved on wall. Finally he found what he want. He dragged like animal and switch off the lights. He know she scare to darkness. But he didn't care. He pinned her on wall. Now she locked between maan and wall. They are not visible to anybody. Even in little brightness she can see his eyes are shining like black diamonds.

"maan leave me..." she is trying her self to be free. Maan now he tugged his fingers on her neck hardly. Where she can not breath and can not be move inch.

His furies anger she can feel in little brightness. His breath becoming warm and he is turning to wild like an animal." Geet tell me the truth..why did you cheat me..."

Now geet stop to protest. "cheat...maan how could you say that I cheated you...i respected you like bhabhji...my self you are the other name of bhabhaji...but you broken my trust...before marriage you ruined my life, my dreams but still I accepted my faith, I didn't blame anybody. Then again you your self married me and made me to dream again about my life. I loved you like mad...when I come to know about your reality ,that you are not happy with me and you used me just to fulfill your physical desires . just think about me how I felt. Any self respected women take so easy..."she started to cry"... tell me maan...what was my mistake...i agreed everything what bhabaji given to me still I didn't get justice ... now I am here bcoz of prem again why you are trying to disturb me..."

Maan loosened his grip. yes she is right. I my self told all these words to her. today what is happened everything bcoz of my mistake. Geet about to move again he trapped her in the feeling of loosing her. "geet pls don't go. I agree I behaved like a idiotic why can't you forgive me pls..." now he is almost begging her.

"sorry maan, its too late, when our relation started first time you are not in sense. At second time I am not in sense. This means we both not started our relation properly when we both are in sense. Now we are separated. Now we travelled too far where we couldn't turn back and recognize our past. There is no other way to claim again...bye maan. pls don't try to disturb me. tomorrow our hole family will be leaving India. We are not having any plans to return to here. Pls don't try to contact me again. What ever happened everything is our faith. Forget it..." Maan shocked. Today in front of him a self respected and well matured geet standing where he missed such qualities before in her or he didn't notice in her.

"...but geet I agree all my mistake but how can you marry prem and ..."he didn't dareto complete his sentence.

Geet smiled pale." Then what I should do maan. I can not leave my rest of life like a saint. I am a human bee. . I can not leave alone in this society. Even I need some support and security to my life. I need somebody who care only me. I can not end my life . I can not live my rest of life just remembering you maan.try to understand we are already travelling in different ways. We have to move on..."

After few minute when he back to his sense geet already left cabin.

Pre cap: MANEETS FIGHTING...

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Edited by varsha-sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
GREAT ONE DEAR
ossum part
what she said is right
and it is sure also
but dear i dont think she is going with prem
liitle confused but great one dear
and what about the baby kuhu which geet loved the more
pls try to sort out story soon dear and pls let us get update daily
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Posted: 13 years ago
what another twist
let see what in store for maaneet
but what baby fault how can she leave her baby
even didn't she didn't get father
poor baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
update is good...but i dont like it...i dont like d way d story is going...
i also want maan to b punished but not d way u hav choosen...plz dot take it personally...its only my opinion...

u being d writer has all d rights to do as u want...but being a maan n geet fan...cant see dem separate...n most of all cant see maan suffer like dat...

all d above she married prem n is pregnant?...if its true...den i hate her...our geet cant do dis...leaving behind her child like dat n enjoying her life...i hate her frm d bottom of my life...

sorry...but cant help...im feeling disgusted...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
i was having a little hope that geet happens to b there & is not married...
but u smashed everything dear...i am heart broken now...
i know maan was idiot and he did those things but geet moved on...
waiting for the next...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh god... mujhe tho kuch samaj main nahi aaraha...geet is alive...woh kaise...aur woh prem se shaadi karl & pregnant bhi hai...
hey dear hamari yeh saari questions ka plsss answer karo...hum loghon ko kuch samajh main nahi aara ha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Varsha...thanx for pm.

So it was all plan of whole Maan family to send Geet out of Maan's life so that she can get love and respect as a human being not as a usable dustbin...and they show Geet dead so that Maan will not bother her...but destiny again bring them in front of each other...
I have doubts...how Geet forget her child ? what is child's fault that she can't get love of both parents ? if Maan family declare Geet dead then they can allow Maan to remain with his daughter so that atleast that child can get her father's love ? how come Geet became Raj's daughter ? Dadi knows Raj and she send Geet here or what is the story? Maan loved Sangeetha and she died then Maan waited for her for 5 yrs and here so soon Geet forget her love,her daughter and moved on very easily ? when reading,, what Geet said to Maan,, I feel she also never loved him...she married him because she doesn't have any other option...so if we assume that Geet also doesn't love him truely then I don't held Maan guilty...Maan loved Sangeetha more then Geet loved him.

Please I request u to clear my doubts.

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
well written update...😊
what Geet said to Maan is absolutely right...he deserved this...
I agree Geet had done the right thing by distancing herself from Maan,because his behavior can't be forgiven...But one thing I can't understand is that how did she forget Kuhu? Afterall Kuhu is her own daughter .It is very difficult to digest that she has decided to begin life a fresh without Kuhu, no matter what Dadima and Annie had told to convince her to do that.This action of her's does not match with her original character...she can't be so heartless...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
as you tell it is your first ff but it is favulous
we are waiting next
pz do next

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