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fab part
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omg!!!!!!!!!!u have to cont sooon! that was a gr8 part! i want to kno wut happens! how is kripa insane now?
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omg!!! ab kya hoga!! i seriously am dying to read more!! behchara angad!!poor kripa!!! my prediction is that kripa is not mad!!
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Part 54

Kripa snaps her fingers again..

K:hello..what happened..

A:huh nothing..!!

K:ok then lets go..

A:ok..

The both leaves the office while We see a person sitting on a chair spinning a ball but we can't see his face.

Man:Kripa tum is baar to bach gayi..per ab nahi bacho gi....i will not spare u.......after all u r my target to get ANgad and through him his Father....

A boy comes.

Boy:Sorry Sir...woh bach gayi...os ki yaddash chali hai ..ose kuch bhi yaad nahi..meine doctor ko hire kiya tha aur os ne baataya tha ke ager ose kuch bhi yaad dilane ki koshish ki to ose psychology ki zaroorat hogi..

M:Great!!!....Ose pagal ker do...don't lether leave in peace..then ____________

Then we can't hear what he says.Kripa and Angad gets home.They both enters the house and sees Tina in Naina's hand.She was crying.Kripa runs to her and takes Tina in her arms and calms her down.Tina calms down and start playing with her hairs.Angad was happy seeing her happy with Tina.Angad comes to both of them and also plays with Tina.Angad's hand touches Kripa's hand.Kripa's hand was like some current was start flowing in her when Angad touched her.Kripa looks at him when Angad also looks at her.They both continues looking into each other's eyes.Naina smiles and leaves.Kartick comes in to house while Aaliya was coming downstairs.They both looks at them and then at each other and smiles.

They both goes close to them.Aaliya on Kripa's side and Kartick on Angad's side.Aaliya takes Tina from Kripa's hand but to her utter shock Kripa was still lost in Angad's eyes.Kartick Slaps Angad playfully but Angad was also lost.Kartick pats on his back really hard that they both comes back to their senses.Kripa blushes and runs to her room.Angad rolls his eyes and takes Tina from Aaliya's hand and also heads to his room.Angad was going upstairs when he hears Kripa's screaming voice.Angad quickly runs to the room and sees Kripa sitting on the floor crying.

A:Kripa what happened...?

He lays Tina on the bed and bends to Kripa.

A:Kya hua..tum ro kyon rahi ho..

K:woh wahan..wahan....khoon....

A(confused):Khoon..

Angad sees where she pointing but there was no sign of blood.

A:Kripa kaha hai khoon...

K:Woh..wahan...dekho..woh..

Kripa looks at the place but there was nothing.

K:Angad yahin tha...yahin tha..meine khud dekha tha...tum mera yakeen karo...mein dekha tha..woh yahi tha..

She continued saying while Angad hugs her.He was having tears that Kripa had to suffer this only because of him.If he haven't left Kripa alone in the car then this won't happen.

Kripa calms down after some time.

A:Kripa tum araam karo..mein abhi ata hon..

K:nahi..please..mujhe akele mat chor ker jao...mujhe bohut dar lagta hai..

A:Theek hai..rona band karo pehle..

He wipes his tears.He has no chance but to stay with her.He makes her sleep and was about to get uo when he sees Kripa holding his hand.He sits back and start crying.He can't control his tears.

A(in a low voice):I love u alot Kripa..please come back...come back to me...

To Be Continued..
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wow!!! yaar, that was too good!!!u r a fantastic writer!!! keep up the good work!! n cont. when u can!
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poor kripa and angad! Awesome part! Cont. soon!
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awwww poor angad....continue soon...i feel so bad for the poor guy.... 😭 😭 😭
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Part 55

He wipes his tears.He has no chance but to stay with her.He makes her sleep and was about to get uo when he sees Kripa holding his hand.He sits back and start crying.He can't control his tears.

A(in a low voice):I love u alot Kripa..please come back...come back to me...

Next Morning,Kripa wakes up and sees Angad still sleeping on the couch.She gets up and head to him.She comes near him and sits down just front of his face.She looks at him for minutes.In the mean time,Angad started opening his eyes slowly.Kripa quickly gets up pretending she was just passing by.She quickly goes to take a shower.After 15 minutes or so,she comes out wearing a white kurta and a white pant.She dries her hairs and looks herself into the mirror.When she looks herself,she also notices Angad watching her.Kripa gets nervous and lowers her eyes.Angad comes back out of his trance and head to washroom.He also takes a shower and comes out and sees a suit lying on the bed for him.He takes the suit and gets changed.

After he changes,he goes to the mirror to comb his hairs when he sees Kripa coming in the room playing with Tina in her arms.Angad smiles and goes near to them.

A(To Tina):Hows my little princess..?

Tina smiles.Kripa thinks that if she is her little princess then who will the big princess for him.Her face lightens up and says out loud.

K:ME!!

A(confusedly):What?

K:Uhh nothing..

A:Ok..i m leaving its getting late..

K:But u haven't ate the breakfast..

A:No Problem..i'll take anything from the table..

K:ok

A:Bye..

Angad leaves.Kripa starts talking with Tina.

K:So boring day right..c'mon lets go to the mall for shop for u..

Tina smiles to her while Kripa changes her and leaves with Driver.Kripa reaches the mall ad head inside.Kripa goes to a baby section,she was looking through some small baby skirts and shirts.They were just too cute.Kripa buys couple of clothes for her and thinks to buy something for Angad too.She heads to men's section and bumps into someone.

K:Uhh Sorry!

Someone:Kripa!

K:Aap kon?

Someone:Kripa...tum kaha thi...meine tumhe kaha kaha nahi dhonda..

K:Mager aap hain kon..

They talk for a while and then Kripa runs from there with tears in her eyes.She enters the house and runs to her room.She makes Tina lay down because she was sleeping.Kripa was now crying silently.It was 4 noon.Kripa sits near the window thinking about what just today happened but only we could see but can't hear.

At evening,Angad comes home and heads to his room.When he enters the room,the room was dark.He switch on the light and sees Kripa standing near the window.Angad gets frightened.

A:Kripa!

Kripa didn't moved a bit.He comes near to her and taps on her shoulder but still she didn't moved.He makes her turned around and sees Kripa's red eyes.

A(Surprised):Kripa?What happened?

K:Angad...tum mere kya lagte ho?

A:What?

K:Who are you Angad?

A:Angad what are you talking about?

K:Just answer me...don't question me...who are you...what is your relation with me?

A:Kripa how can you say that...i am your husband

K(Shouts):Wronge...Wronge Mr Angad...Tell me the truth who are you..

A:Kripa why are you behaving like this....I am your Husband and thats the truth...

K:Then who is Anand...why was he saying that he is my husband...why is he saying that you are doing this just because you wanted revenge from him and got me first in an accident...

Angad was too shocked to say anything.

A:Kripa..he is lying..don't believe him..he wants to take away you from me...He always tried to do this....

K:Or should i say that u tried to do this..

A:Kripa believe me.....I swear...i swear on you..i swear on Tina...I swear..

Kripa was now confused.She don't know who to believe and on who to not.

K:But what if you are lying..

A:Kripa you wanted the prove right..

K:Yes..

A:then what was i doing in the hospital with your parents...why were they giving me so importance if i tried to separate you both...

Kripa thinks the whole time in hospital.

K:Ok i believe you but who is Anand why is he doing this...

Kripa tries to remember but can't.Her head start paining.Angad notices this and makes her sit.

A:Kripa...don't think anything about this...He is just a friend....a friend ok..

K(Holding her head):but why he talked that all..

A:He must be joking..

Kripa was now relaxed.

K:but why i didn't saw him before in house with you...

A:Uhh..just because he was busy in his work..now he must be free so played a prank on u...Sorry on behalf on him..

K:Its ok..

A:Ok now just sleep..you need rest..

K:But your dinner..

A:I'll eat..you just sleep...

Next Morning,We see Angad sitting on the couch.Kripa gets up and sees him sitting.

K:Good Morning!

A:Good Morning!

K:You didn't went to office today..

A:Oh..i just took some holidayz from work..

K:Oh i see..

Kripa goes to freshen up and comes out after 15 mins.

A:Uhh Kripa..i was thinking if Josh could come on lunch here..

K:Oh sure...

After a while.

K:And why don't you also invite Anand..

A:Anand?

K:Yeah..he is also your friend right..

A:Umm Yeah..he must be busy..

K:So What just call him...he is ur friend and a frined can do anything for anyone..

A:OK..

Angad hesitatedly takes out his cell and dials a number.Anand picks up the phone.Angad talks to him for a while.

To Be Continued..
Preview:Will Anand again succeed in separating them both?
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Part 56

Angad hesitatedly takes out his cell and dials a number.Anand picks up the phone.Angad talks to him for a while.

A(On Cell):Hi Anand...Meine tumse zayada baat karne ke liye phone nahi kiya hai bas ye kehne ke liye phone kiya hai ke aaj mere ghar lunch karo...per yeh Kripa chahti hai.....mein chahta hon ke tum aaj yahan na ao....Undertsood...You Better Be!Bye

At Lunch Time,Josh comes with Anjum to the khanna house.Angad and Josh start to talk while Anjum and Kripa goes to the kitchen.Anjum takes Tina and plays with her.After few minutes,Anand knocks on the door.Angad goes to open the door and was frowned that he came.

A(in a low voice):Tum?

Ana:Kyon mein yahan nahi aa sakta..tumne invite kiya aur ab anjaan ban rahe ho..

A:meine tumhe kaha tha na ke tum yahan nahi ao ge--

Anand hugs Angad tightly.

Ana:I missed you yaar...kya karta kaam hi bohut zayada tha..

Angad was about to push him when Anand whispered.

Ana(whispered):Kripa is just standing before you far away...ager ose pata chala ke ye sab natak hai to kya hoga...

Anand aparts from him.Angad was confused and looked behind.Kripa was standing there smiling with Anjum.

K:ANgad ab Anand ko ander bhi bulao ge ya bahir hi baatein karte raho ge..Come Anand...

Anand comes inside while Angad follows him.

K:Mein khana lagati hon..

Kripa goes to the kitchen while Anand comes and hugs Anjum.

Ana:Hi Anjum..kaisi ho..

Anjum was surprised at his behaviour.

An:umm..Kripa mein bhi aa rahi hon..

She leaves while Josh angrily comes to Anand.

J:What the hell was that?

Ana:What..i was just greeting her..

J:we don't need your greetings..

Ana:loo..i was just showing sympathies..so Kripa can't guess that i m acting..

J:We also don't need your sympathies...Just stay in ur limits...or else i'll..

A:Josh..calm down...Kripa is here...(To Kripa)Wow here comes food..

Kripa place the food on the table.Anjum and Kripa serves them food.Anand takes a glass of water and without being anyone noticed,he puts a tablet in the water that dissolves in it.All of a sudden,Kripa start coughing.Anand quickly hands that glass of water to Kripa while Kripa dranks it all.Anand smiles mischeviously inside him and all thinks goes well.While Kripa was serving the food,she feels her head paining.Her imagination start revolving.She holds his head.

Angad notice this and stands up.

A:Kripa are you ok?

K(holding her head):Yeah..

A:But you don't seem ok...come with me..

K:Angad i m fine..

A:Just come with me...Anjum please take care of Tina..i will just be back...

Angad takes Kripa upstairs to their room.Angad makes Kripa lay on the bed and the leaves downstairs.After they finish eating the lunch,Anjum handles the dishes and things to clean up.Anand leaves and Angad and Josh takes a sigh of relief that today Anand didn't made a scene and does anything wronge.

Angad excuses himself to check on Kripa.When he enters his room,he sees all room messy.He was shocked to see Kripa sitting in the corner hugging her knees.Angad bends down to her and taps her shoulder.Kripa quickly lifts her face up with red eyes.

A(worried):Kripa?

K:Nahi..mujhe nahi...woh...mein...nahi...ah..oh..

She started making such noises that Angad can't understand.He was clueless about her behaviour.

A:Kripa what happened?

She kept on saying such words that were like "ah"or "oh".At last,Kripa became unconcious.

A:Kripaaaa

He quickly picks her up in his arms and rushes downstairs.Josh and Anjum worrily runs to them.

J:What happen?

A:I don't know..she just faint..

An:Take her to the hospital now...!!!!!!!!

A:Please Josh..i m going in hurry...please take Tina with you..

Angad rushes to his arm and drives to the same hospital of where Kripa was admitted before.He enters the hospital and lays her on the stretcher and requests to meet Kripa's previous doctor.But later he comes to know that the same doctor which was treating Kripa is shifted to New Delhi and now there is another Psychiatrist.

Angad hurrily runs to the cabin of the new doctor.

A:Doctor my wife...she is outside..

Doc:Yes..but--

A:Doctor...i will explain you afterwards...please first check my wife..please..

Doc:ok..

The doctor checks Kripa and gives an Injection to her.The doctor comes out.Angad runs to him.

A:Doctor?

Doc:Please come to my cabin..

Angad follows him to his Cabin and was dying to know her condition.

Doc:Mr Khanna...Your wife is sufferring from deep wound in brain right..

A:Yes..

Doc:But her condition is like she don't want to live...her brain has stop working....like she don't want to think or don't want to live..

A:But doctor...just before 2 hours she was fine...but all of sudden now how can she be--

Doc:A body doesn't take much time to survive...the same case is with her....i think she is not taking her medicines properly...

A(Loudly):you are a doctor...and you don't know how to treat a patient....how you doctors can be sooo careless...

Doc:Mr Khanna...If you will also Co-operate with us then i think we can make your wife to live...

A:Sorry!

Doc:But..we can't give you any permission to take her home...the previous doctor let you take her to the home but not this time...she will be here under observation 24 hours..

A:Thanx Doctor..Can i stay with her..

Doc:No..no one is aloud...

A:ok

Angad leaves the cabin while the doctor makes a call.

Doc:App ka kaam ho gaya Sir...Where is my Money?

The next person on the phone smiles and says.

Someone:Tomorrow you will get the money with a check...but don't forget...you have to work more for me..

He smiles again.

To Be Continued..

Preview:Who is this mystery Man?
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it must be Anand; its a awesome part plz do continue

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