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Wow superb part!!! i rly loved it!!! Great job! Plz continue soon!
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Part 50

After 2 Months!!!

It was Night and we see Angad and Kripa sitting in their room watching TV.Their room was decorated with Baby's toys and wallpapers all around the room.Angad was eating Popkorns and was trying to feed her a big glass of milk.

A:C'mon Kripa drink it all!

K:Angad tum roz raat ko mujhe ye milk de dete ho per kyon?

A:Because i want my daughter healthy..

K:Angad mein tumhe ye baat clear ker don ke i want a Boy..

A:No Sweetheart Girl!!

K:Anagd i want a Boy and thats final..

A:Why u wanted a boy?

K:Because boys are very intelligents and sincere..

A:So u mean i m a boy and i m also intelligent..

K:i never said that..but why u wanted Girl??

A:because Girls are very pretty and lucky for me..

K:So i m a girl that means i m lucky for u..

A(winks):well i never said that!!

Kripa was disappointed.

A:because i don't need to say that u r lucky because u r!!!

Kripa was Happy now.

A:Now please finish ur milk..PLEASE!!!!!

He makes a puppy face when Kripa screams slowly.

K:Ouch..!!

A:What Happen..?

Kripa cups his face from one hand.

K(smiles):Ur Daughter kicked me!!!

Angad was shocked and at the same time happy.He just hugs him while they both smiles.

A:I love u Kripa!!i really do!!!

After 1 Month!!

We see whole Khanna and Sharma family at Hospital.Angad was pacing the room worriely.In The mean time the doctor comes out.Angad rushes to her.

A:Dr. My wife?

Doc:She is Absolutely Fine Mr Khanna..and congratulations..U have a Baby Girl!!!

Angad has no end of his happiness.

A:can i meet her?

Doc:yeah but let us shift her in the ward room.

Saying that she leaves and after 15 mins,Angad runs to meet Kripa and all the family follows.Angad just hugs her.

A:Thanx Kripa...Ur the Best!!!u have given me all the happiness...i can't tell u..

K(putting her finger on his lips):sshhh..I know..

Angad just smiles to her and sees a small ward of baby near Kripa's bed.Angad smiles to Kripa again and picks her lovely daughter in his arms.He kisses his cheeks very softly.The whole family just kept looking at the most happy couple while Angad just kept looking at her daughter.

N:Aray bhai kya is Dadi ko apni Poti se milne ke liye appointment leini pare gi kya..

Aa:lagta hai ke ye log is ki Massi ko bhool gaye..

Ka:To Chacha ka kya hoga..i think chacha ko pehle milna chahiye..

D:Mein to phir bhi dada hon..i mean ise mujhe bhi to dekhna hai..

J:To mein kis khet ki Muli hon..

A:Tum muli nahi pura khet ho

All Laughs.

All Laughs again and they all get a chance to hold Angad and Kripa's daughter which was Un Named.

N:Shayad humein chalna chahiye..Kyon Dilip..?

D:haan in dono ko thora waqt deina chahiye..

J:Yeah right so see u sis..Bye both of u..

All leaves one by one by kissing their daughter.

A:Kripa i'll name her Tina..

K(smiles):Well not bad Mr Angad..tum ne pehe se hi soch rakha tha kya..

A:nahi mager humari beti ko dekhte hi aisa laga ke is ka naam tina hona chahiye..kyon acha nahi hai???

K:Nahi.....BOHUTTTTT ACHA HAI..Tumhari kahi hui cheez kabhi buri ho sakti hai..

Angad kisses her forehead.

The Whole week passes by visiting the hospital to meet Kripa while Angad stays with her.AFter a week,Finally it was the day when Kripa can go home.Angad packs for Kripa while Kripa goes to change after kissing Tina.She comes out after some time.

K:chalein..

A:haan chalo..

Kripa picks Tina up in her arms while Angad picks the stuff of Kripa.The reaches Khanna Mansion,Angad helps Kripa coming out.They both head towards the house.Naina opens it with a thali in her hand.

K:Aray ye sab..

N:Humare ghar aik naya sadasya aya hai kam se kam os ki aarti to utaarne do..kahi kisi ki nazar na lag jaye..

Kripa smiles and Angad too while Naina does the Pooja for them.She puts a small tikka on Tina's forehead and let them come in.Aaliya and Mishti hugs Kripa.

N:Tum kafi thak gayi hogi..jao thora araam ker lo..waise bhi shaam ko aik party rakhi hai..

K:ok

Kripa leaves with Aaliya,Anjum and Mishti to her room while Angad also wanted to leave when Prithvi , Kartick and Josh pulls Angad to the living room.

P:Yaar mein to ban gaya Chacha..

J:Me Mama..

Ka:Mujhe bhi Chacha bana diya..

Kartick pats on Angad's back really hard while the three of them laugh.

P:Yaar aik baat to baatao Josh..

J:haan..

P:Jab koi admi apni biwi se thori dair door rahe to pata hai os ki halat kya ho jati hai..

J:Kya?

P:Aray kitne bhole ho..bas Angad ko dekh lo to pata chal jaye ga..

They burst into laugh.

A:Hey hey..tum logon ko ho kya gaya hai.

P:Wohi jo hum dekh rahe hain..

J:fikar mat karo Angad..hum tumhare saath hain..tch tch bechare ki halat dekho...tum jao Angad..Jao..

A:Shut Up!

J:lo tumhari help ker raha hon..

A:thank for ur kind help mager nahi chahiye..

P:kyon?

Ka:aray choro na yaar..bechare ki kyon taang(leg)khench rahe ho..tum Jao Angad..

Angad leaves.As Angad leaves the three of them burst into laugh.Angad was entering his room when Mishti , Anjum and Aaliya comes out.

Aa:Aray bhai..jao jao..Kripa tumhara hi intezaar ker rahi hai..

M:Please!!!

Mishti let him go in while the three runs down.Kripa was swinging the small ward of babies for Tina when Angad hugs her from behind.

A(kisses her cheek from behind):I Love u..

K:me too!!

Angad kisses his neck.

K:Angad kya ker rahe ho..tumhe sharam nahi ati..apni beti ke samne hi shuru ho gaye..

A:Aray meri beti ka nam le ker mujhe blackmail karo gi..

He starts moving forwards to Kripa while Kripa moves back until she hits her body to the wall.

K:Angad leave..

A:Why!!

K:Angad koi aa jaye ga..

A:so what..u r my wife..

K:Angad please..

He moves more close.

K:uhh Aaliya..

Angad quickly turns around to see no one while Kripa just runs from there to the bed.

A:U.....abhi baatata hon..

He also runs to the bed and falls on top of her.

A:kyon..ab kya karo gi Mrs Kripa Angad Khanna!!

K:ANgad please..

A:Nope..now i m not gonna leave u..

Kripa closes her eyes while the camera goes black and u could no more see anything but can imagine.

We see someone sitting in black clothes but we can't see his face.

Someone:Kripa ager tum meri nahi ho sakti to kisi ki nahi ho sakti..u r only mine but if u r not mine then u r of no one!!

He marks a cross on her picture with red marker.On the other hand we see Kripa getting dress in a blue and yello contrassed sari with beautiful embroid work on it.She was simply looking gorgeus.She curls her hair(same like in the present episodes)Angad was earing a white suit.He was not wearing tie as usual because tie doesn't suits him.Kripa quickly takes out small clothes for babies and change for Tina.After 15 mins or so.

K:Wow..Angad u r looking sexy!!

A:well my wife is also looking stunning..as usual..

Kripa blushes.

A:Haye..hum to aap ki isi ada per fida hain....

He goes near to her and sits beside her.

A:mein shayer to nahi mager ae haseen...(makes a face like he don't know) Aage ki lines mujhe yadd nahin..

Kripa laughs continuously.

A:well ab hansti hi raho gi ya niche chalein..

K:haan chalo..

Kripa picks Tina in her arms.

A:wait!!

K:kya hua..

A:Tine ko mujhe de do..Please!!

K:Ok..

She hands Tina to him and leaves to down.As they were coming down,all the people which were down at the party were stunned by looking at the wonderful heaven made couple.They couldn't take their eyes off them.Mishti , Aaliya and Anjum runs to them.

An:u both r looking "Made for Eac other"couple..

A:Thank u..

Kripa blushes..

M:Aray Tina jee kaisi hain...

Angad hands her to Mishti while Mishti plays with her with Anjum.

J:Hey buddy..hi sis..

A+K:Hi..

J:Hey sweety..

He kisses Tina.

P:Well Angad aaj shaam hai waqt hai..

A:aur mein yahan khara hon..

They all laughs.

P:nahi yaar seriously..chal kuch gana wana ho jaye..

A:nahi yaar...

J:aray Kripa ke liye to ga do..

Angad looks at Kripa and then he smiles.

A:(tune mujhko deewana kiya kuch is kadar
ek tere siwa kuch na aaye nazar - 2 ) - 2
tu hi tu dekhu jidhar
ek tere siwa kuch na aaye nazar - 2
Angad sings while walking around Kripa.


ho teri adaa sabse juda main ho gaya tujhpe fida - 2
mera dil anjaana, bana tera nishana
zakhm aaisa laga hain
mushkil hain batana
tera mera afsaana
tere yaadon main khoya raha shamo saher
ek tere siwa kuch na aaye nazar - 2

Angad picks Tina in his arms and plays with her while Kripa sees them playing and start singing.

K:Tu humsafar tu zindagi maine kiya tujhpe yakeen - 2
Toot ke tujhko chahu, jindagani lutau
Bas teri dhadkanon ko apne dil main chupau
loot jau meet jau
tere pyar ne kuch aaisa kiya mujhe bekhabar
ek tere siwa kuch na aaye nazar - 2
tune mujhko deewana kiya kutch is kadar
ek tere siwa kuch na aaye nazar - 4

A:Ek tere siwa kuch na aye nazar

K:ek there siwa kuch na aye nazar..

They both hug each other while Tina was in between the two.

(Song from the Movie Yakeen , Tu Ne Mujhko )
Note:If someone listens the song then don't add the first two lines of the song which is in real song in low voice.

Song Link:
http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/17 /s/movie_name.7902/

To be Continued..

Preview:An Accident with Kripa again that affects her brain.

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Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
i am frist one to comment so sweet they had a girl so sweet
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey that was wayyy tooo good.....awesome continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was amazing!!! so sweet n so cute!! how do u cum up wid such stuff???? just gr8 n cont. soon....my prediction: although everything appears to be fine, my predicting instincts tell me that kripa's lifeline doesn't appear to be that strong!!! sumthing is gonna happen to her!!! prove me rite or wrong by cont.ing soon!!!! once again, good job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwwwwww wat a sweet and a fabbbbbb partttt 😳 😳
cant wait for the next partttttt
cont sooooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part! i loved it!it was all so cute! cont soon!wut will happen to kripa?
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 51

They both hug each other while Tina was in between the two.AFter the party,only Anagd , Kripa , Kartick , Dilip and Naina were left.

A:Mom kya mein Kripa ko drive per le jaon..?

N:Angad itni raat ko..

A:Please Mom!!

D:Jane do na Naina..donon aik dosere ke sath waqt guzaarna chahte honge .. Angad tum jao..

Ka:Tina ko mujhe de do..mein ise apne sath sula donga..

Angad hands Tina to Kartick and leaves with Kripa.They both sits inside the car and Angad drives.On the way,Angad looks at Kripa.

A:Aray kya hua Kripa..Kaha gum ho?

K:Tina ke future ke bare mein soch rahi hon..

A:Future mager itni jaldi?

K:Angad tina ko kabhi na kabhi to bara hona hi aur..

Angad stops his car.He covers him in his protective arms.

A:Kripa...tum itna tense kyon ho rahi ho..just leave it..aur socho ke ab humara baby boy kaisa hoga..

K:WHAT!!

A:Haan..ab mujhe aik larka chahiye..

K:Angad..tumhe sharam nahi ati..

A:Aray apni biwi se kya sharmana..

K:Shut up!!Shameless..

A:acha ager mein shameless hon to os waqt tumhe kya hua tha..

K:Kab?

A:shaam ko..jab tum ne apni ankhein band ki thi aur..

K:Angad nahi..nahi..don't say it..don't

While she was saying Angad just hugs him.

K:Angad!

A:hmmm..

K:I m thirsty..

A:What!!tumhe is waqt pyaas lagi hai...

K:Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A:ok theek hai..mein dekhta hon shayed pass hi koi stall ho..

K:theek hai..

Angad kisses Kripa on her lips quicly and leaves.Angad goes a little far to check.On the other hand Kripa comes out of the car and sees if Angad was coming.She stands in the middle of the road when a truck comes from behind.Kripa turns around when the head lights of the truck makes Kripa's eyes shut.She puts her hand near her eyes to look when the truck comes nearer to her and drags with her while Kripa flies in the air and falls far away hitting her head hard on a rock.Kripa's sari which was sky blue and yellow contrast was now turned red from her shoulder by her blood.Angad was coming to his car while he didn't got any water.He sits inside and sees no one.He gets worried and comes out.He yells her name but their was no sign of Kripa.He searches for Kripa but can't find.Just then he sees a sandal of Kripa.He runs to the sandal.

A:ye to Kripa ka sandal hai...KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAA

He then spots another sandal and goes nearer to it when he sees also a foot in it he goes more closer and sees Kripa.He quickly rushes to her.

A(Out Loud):KRIIPPAAA...MEIN TUMMHHEE KUUCCCHHH NAHII HONE DONGA..

He was almost like crying.

A:Kripa..please utho..Kripa...

He quickly picks her up in his arms and runs to his car.He makes her sit on the seat and drives the car to city hospital(sorry can't think of any other hospital).He quickly picks kripa in his arms and heads inside.

A:Doctor.....................Doctorr..

Doc:Aray Mr Khanna aap..

A:Doctor please Kripa ki jaan bacha lijiye..

Doc:aik minnute...ward boy..ward boy yahan ao..and bring the strecture..

He lays Kripa on the strecture while some ward boys and the doctor takes her to the operation threatre.Angad calls home.

A:Hello..

N:Angad..kaha ho..kitni dair laga di..

He start crying on the phone..

N(worriely):Angad...Angad kya hua tum ro kyon rahe ho..

A:mom..mom Kripa ka accident ho gaya hai..

Naina was shocked.

A:mom aa jaldi se city hospital aa jayiye..

Naina just runs to tell all and leaves to the hospital while Angad puts off the phone and cries her heart out.He sits on the near bench and holds his face in his both hands.He was crying very much.In the mean time,Angad's whole family and Kripa's family comes running.

G:Angad kya hua hai meri beti ko..

J:Bolo Angad..

Angad tells them what exactly happened but don't know how Kripa got this accident.Gayatri just falls on the bench and start crying.Josh was almost teary while SUrybhaan calms Gayatri.Naina who was holding Tina also cries.All of a sudden,the doctor comes out.ANgad runs to him.

A:Do..doctor Kripa!!

Doc:Mr.Khanna ur wife lost so much blood..we need B Positive Blood as soon as possible...ager jald hi humhe khoon nahi mila to oun ki jaan khatre mein ho sakti hai..

Angad runs to Josh.

A:Josh..Josh..tum..tumhara blood group B Positive hai na..tum tum khoon do ge na Kripa ko..

Josh cries while saying yes.

Doc:Great!aap mere sath under ayiye..

They takes Josh inside while all of them were had a hope for Kripa.After one and a half hour Josh comes out.

A:Josh Kripa..

J:Pata nahi...ounho ne kuch baataya nahi..

Angad then puts his hand in his hairs and combs them with his fingers back.After another hour,the doctor comes out with a terrific look.

Doc:Mr Khanna..hum aap ki wife ke bare mein kuch nahi keh sakte...hum ounhe aaj sari raat under observation rakhen ge..lekin Hum kuch nahi keh sakte...ounhe osi jaga chot pohonchi hai jahan meine aap ko pehle bhi kaha tha ke ager in ka dobara accident hota hai aur unfortunately wohi chot lagti hai to ounhe psychiatrist ki zaroorat parh sakti hai ya....bas ab sab aap logon gi duaon per depend karta hai..

The doctor leaves while Angad just left their shocked.He wanted to die because even he was breathing but living a dead life.Angad just leaves from there without saying a word.He goes to a small mandir which wa sin Hospital.Angad didn't said anythin but just stood their quietly.The Background Song

Yaar Mangiyasi Rabba Dekho Roke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Yaar Mangiyasi Rabba Dekho Roke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Marjaande Marjaande
Marjaande Ki Sida Mainu Hoke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi

Haaye Kinniya Duawa Mangga Koyi Vi Na Manni Jaaye
Haaye Kinniya Duawa Mangga Koyi Vi Na Manni Jaaye
Haaye Kinniya Duawa Mangga Koyi Vi Na Manni Jaaye
Kuano Roz Roz Din Sano Toke Kedi Mein Khudai Manglayi
Marjaande Marjaande
Marjaande Ki Sida Mainu Hoke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi

Just Then Kartick comes running to him.

Ka:Angad...Kripa ko hosh aa gaya hai...

Angad was shocked but at the same time happy.He quickly runs with him to the ICU.He sits next to her.

A(in a low voice):Kripa!

Angad puts his hand on her cheek but Kripa was trying to move back.Angad was confused while the doctor comes in running.The doctor checks her.

A:Doctor Kripa aise behave kyon ker rahi hai..

Doc:I m sorry Mr.Khanna...Aap ki Wife...ki Yaddash nahi rahi..

Angad was still.He didn't moved a little while so was the all.He can't believe his ears.The Background Song


Pyaar Mere Kar Rabba Mere Hawale Yaar Bin Dil Mera Kaun Sambhale
Yaar Bin Dil Mera Kaun Sambhale
Cheez Apni Hi Mangi Maine Tuhjse Kedi Mein Paarai Manglaayi
Kedi Mein Paarai Manglaayi
Marjaande Marjaande
Marjaande Ki Sida Mainu Hoke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi

Josh comes from behind crying and hugs Angad while Angad just didn't hug him back.All were crying so was Tina.Angad looks at Tina and holds her.He kisses her cheeks.(Again the background Music)


Mera Yeh Naseeba Hai Meri Nahin Sunta
Sapno Ke Jaal Yeh To Roz Roz Bunta
Sapno Ke Jaal Yeh To Roz Roz Bunta
Kabhi Sunle To Meri Bhi Duaai Kedi Mein Khudai Manglaayi
Kedi Mein Khudai Manglaayi
Marjaande Marjaande
Marjaande Ki Sida Mainu Hoke Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi
Kedi Main Khudaai Manglaayi


Just then the screen goes black.

Next Morning,We see Angad and whole family entering the hospital.They enter the ward and sees Kripa trying to get up.ANgad runs to her but Kripa moves back.

A:uhh..Yeh hai meri family..

He introduces all the family.

K:aur mein?mein kon hon?mujhe kya hua hai?

Angad just looks away with tearful eyes but controls himself.

A:Tumhara naam Kripa hai..tumhara accident ho gaya tha...

K:aur aap?

Angad doesn't answered her question.Naina comes and tell her.

N:Ye tumhara pati hai Angad.

Kripa was confused.

N:Aur ye tumhari beti hai Tina..

Naina makes her hold Tina.

Kripa was still confused and doesn't know what to say.

A:Tum araam karo..mein doctor se mil ker ata hon..

Angad leaves to doctor and enters his cabin.

A:Doctor May i?

Doc:oh yes My Khanna..Please have a seat..

A:Thank you..Doctor Kripa..

Doc:Mr Khanna she is absolutely fine..

A:What fine...she is not fine Doctor..she is not...os accident mein os ki yaddash chali gayi aur aap keh rahe hain ke she is fine..

Doc:I m sorry..

A:its ok..mein ose ghar lejane ki baat karne aya hon..

Doc:per aap ounhe nahi le ja sakte..

A:per mein lejana chahta hon...

Doc:Ok..Please kuch formalities bhar dijiye ga..

A:ok

Saying that he leaves slamming hard the door.

To be Continued..

(Song From the Movie Kaante,Yaar Mangiyasi)
Song Link:
http://www.musicindiaonline.com/l/17/s/movie_name.1076/year. 16/

Preview:Kripa's First Day at her house but feels really awkward between them as she didn't remembered anything!!
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yay i am the first one to comment! awesome part! cont soon! i hope kripa will be allright! i feel so sorry for all of them!
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Amazing part!!! It was great! Cont soon!

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