MG ff:Thirst for revenge 1, link to thrd 2 on pg 1

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

i hope he doesnt stoop low with geet so he can get revenge

fabulous start

love it

waiting eagerly

ty pm

dont dare stop this FF

ur doing great job

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Neha

@ISHQSalmanSe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

OMG faboulous update girl!👏 and what you talkin about about stopping?😳 That is so not cool😆 Okay after reading it...I had some questions: How did the murder happen? How did Maan know that Lala had done the murder? If he wanted to take revenge so badly then why did he wait for so long?😉

As far as his characterization goes, Maan is indeed a stone so can I conclude that his hatred has taken over his life?Also is he going to impregnate her?😭 That might be a cheap way to take revenge😡 I hope you come up with something unique for this. You have set your standards quite high😃

For Geet I like how you made her simple but please dont make a crying 24-7 girl after he does something to her. Me want a strong Geet😳

You have created a picture in my mind and hats off to you for doing that. I would fix some spelling errors /bc its is sometimes distracting. 😃Also to attract more viewers, I would decorate the first page more...first impressions are always important! Your writing is really good but if the first page does not stand out, people might ignore it😊

P.S. I hope you got your constructive criticism😈🤣

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

good one.. waiting for more..
I hope Maan doesn't hurt Geet thou.. It is not good.. :(

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393794

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

fab update

do continue

and update soon

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naamteeg

@naamteeg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

loved your character sketch of Maan... can't wait to see how you are going to pen Geet's character.. I love all your ffs... you are a wonderful writer... looking forward to reading this new ff

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Really fab update!maam is such an evil soul,i wonder if he will change wid the luv bug!

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640118

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Loved the update..

if maan and geet fall in love, and then he finds out tht she is a Handa.. then there will surely be the end of the world

how can maan be soo mean to dadi😡😡😡😡😡poor her😭😭

buhhh loving it so far...

pls continue soon

~Jessica😃

Edited by _Jessi_ - 14 years ago

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

very interesting and different...im all for the dark love story as long as it is still a love story...lol..

JAZ

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

amazing update...

wondering what is maan upto...??

hope he don't do something very bad..

thanks for pm..

count soon...

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Oh God Geet is so sweet and nice- a pure angel and Maan the devil incarnate!!! i feel really scared for Geet..Brilliantly written Kathie..The story idea is so thrilling..can't wait to read more...

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