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eesha ahmed

@ssidra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Nice update!

feeling bad for riddhima... I hope the person she is marrying treats her well.

thanks for the pm

cont soon

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Anu

@DulceAmor

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Loved it Sri. I felt so bad for Riddhima. You described her sadness and loneliess so well. Do continue soon.

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Wow!!! I loved the update!!!! :)

Continue soon please! :)

Love,

Kriya <33

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Pritha Das

@DarkerThanNight

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Lovely part..
Loved how you described Riddhima's loneliness..
It's really unbelievable how a mother be away from her child knowing she is going away forever..
But thank God that she actually got some true friends..
Hope she gets everything she wants in her new life..
Please do update soon..cant't wait for the next part.. 😊

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

hey srishti nice part..but very short..i felt that its ended in the starting point...agar tum riddhima ke expressions ko aur thoda jyada describe karti to achcha lagta ..its makes this part more beautiful cause i know u are a great writer,who can portrayed every emotions beautifully .plz. ud a long part as i can make a big comment...

punam