Tu Na Jaane Aas Paas hai khuda!ARff!Ch2||pg9||30/8 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
I dont know what to say Srishy but i miss ya alooot
I love ya when are u gonna come back i hate my luck all those whom i love are drifting away from me:(
best of luck to you
-laddoo

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: kash_laddoo.anu

I dont know what to say Srishy but i miss ya alooot
I love ya when are u gonna come back i hate my luck all those whom i love are drifting away from me:(
best of luck to you
-laddoo


awh dear..I miss you too...alottt...*pouts*

*hugs*

Thank you for the good luck...*muah*

when me come back?...-> when my dad changes his so-harsh-and-not-acceptable-restrictions ...though i will be sneaking for a minute or two to see the messages n inbox and to see that u all still missing me alot or not!

:p

love you loadzzz...muah...tc...xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: -KaShti-


awh dear..I miss you too...alottt...*pouts*

*hugs*

Thank you for the good luck...*muah*

when me come back?...-> when my dad changes his so-harsh-and-not-acceptable-restrictions ...though i will be sneaking for a minute or two to see the messages n inbox and to see that u all still missing me alot or not!

:p

love you loadzzz...muah...tc...xx




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nice update! Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
nice concept
awesome part
loved it
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update Time!

Tu Na Jaane Aas paas hai khuda!


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Chapter-2


*knock*

The knocking on the door made her come back to present.

She turned around on hearing the creaking sound of the opening of the door.

There was a pin drop silence for whole two minutes but then,

"Aaahhh" the shriek filled the atmosphere.

So what happened was the group of three-two boys and one girl entered the door and
That was followed by the shriek made by the girl who just entered which was followed by Riddhima who was still digesting the fact about what just happened followed by goofy grin on boy's faces with finally the girl rushing towards Riddhima giving her a tight bear hug almost choking her breath out in her lungs.

Well that's happen when FRIENDS meet after long gap.

Riddhima has always lived a life that has given her nothing but Emptiness within. But there were some in her life who she got close with. With whom she could be herself. Fortunately they became her best of friends but unfortunately she was not allowed to hang around as soon as her college was over.She was not allowed to contact anyone, why she was treated like this she dint knew but all she knew then was This is her life that woks on others dictations.

Today was her marriage and she least hoped that in her marriage her wish at any point would be considered and so she dint thought at all about if she will be given the chance to invite her only friends at her own marriage.


"Anjali!"
Riddhima whispered while hugging her friend.

At loss of words.

She was more than happy and glad to have someone by her side, on her marriage, whom she can call hers.

She was happy that they were at least invited for her marriage. She was not allowed to keep any contacts. Soon after her exams the marriage was fixed and she was away from her friends since then with no exchange of pleasantries or news.


Today while getting herself ready to be presented as bride, she was all alone with just the parlor girls and few distant cousins of hers who rarely cared.

She wanted someone by her side at least for this moment. And having her true friends with her she was really happy and thankful to god for at least this time her pleads was heard and cared upon.



After having the friends' moment, Atul and Abhi went downstairs leaving the girls together.


"Are you ready?" Anjali asked Riddhima.


Not knowing what to answer Riddhima looked up at her waiting for an answer. But Riddhima just sighed looking into her friend's eyes.


Anjali, well aware of Riddhima's present conscience state, she got up from her place and went uop tp Ridhima hugging her tighttly as if assuring her that all will be well.



Few minutes later,

Riddhima decided to speak up.

"I never thought you guyz will be able to make it up till here..." She spoke with those slight blurry eyes, her bottom lip pressed hard by her teeth preventing the trembling and wobbling. She was all shivering. Till now she was well successful in suppressing all those new-lonely-to-be-bride's feeling but with Anjali being there, solely for her made Riddhima loose herself and let herself out.

Anjali knew if Riddhima cried now she will be much better as crying always made Riddhima feel better because she rarely speaks her heart out to anyone.


Anjali sat there beside the bride on her bed. With Riddhima hugging her hard and Anjali's hand back at Riddhima's back as if to soothe her if it can help. Anjali kept on whispering that all will be well and pleasant talks to make Riddhima calm.


This was the view Padma(Riddhima's mother) saw as she entered Riddhima's room for purpose. A sudden guilt stuck her, seeing her daughter relying on her friends rather than her mom at such crucial time of her life. But what more could Padma do. She knew she has been a terrible mother to Riddhima. And later when she realized her duty towards her daughter she felt too guilty and shameful to accept her guilt and go back to her daughter.


Being herself, Padma not showing her inner voices, she entered the room making Riddhima and Anjali aware of her presence.


Anjali stood up and was silent. Riddhima stood up and had a look at her mother. For the second time today her mother has shown her face.


She came once in the afternoon letting in some parlor women and asking Riddhima to get ready and now she is here.



Padma moved forward, towards Riddhima.With no expressions she simply had a look at the two girls and announced that the baarat will be there within half and hour.



Padma after announcing turned towards the exit but then stopped midway. All of them stood motionless fr a minute when Padma turned, her face showing pain and guilt which was deep hidden behind. She again took her steps toward Riddhima and asked Anjali to move out for a while.


Riddhima unknown to what will happen next; she just took a deep breath and motioned Anjali to go out. Once Anjali was out, the uncomfortable spread in the air between the mother and daughter. They both stared at each other for a while. And then Padma spoke, "Riddhima..." after a long pause she continued, "Humesha khush raho." She blessed her to be happy always while keeping her hands over her daughter's head. Riddhima look up at her mother's eyes trying to find something, but then soon Padma lowered her eyes and started looking all over the place.



She then handed her the piece of cloth, to be precise the ghoonghat. Padma kept I in her daughter's hand and turned when, "Maa!" Riddhima spoke. Padma turned to see her daughter with her longing eyes. She knew that her daughter will never question or demand for anything. Padma then spoke, "Riddhima! That(pointing towards the ghoonghat) is given by your in-laws. You have to wear that over your dress." Padma wanted to herself to make Riddhima wear that, she finally gain some courage and moved forward but then loud, music and drum beats made her step back.

She looked at her daughter and spoke, "I guess the they are here. I have to go down and be there. You get ready."


She turned and almost ran with her fast pace.


Riddhima stood still with tears in her eyes and voice long lost...a hope raised in her heart to be in the arms of her mother before leaving but that was again crushed. She looked down at the piece of cloth in her hand. It was a long choli(dupatta) like of deep red color with heavy golden colored embroidery. It was beautiful. She then faced the mirror behind her and unfolded the ghoonghat and slowly placed it over her head all by herself.


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Writer's note:


Thats it for this part.

Sincerely waiting for your reviews.

...Please...
Likes and comments
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Thank you!

Cheers,
Srishti (Sri)



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Edited by -KaShti- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
res! *edited*
Woww Sri! that was great!
atleast riddhima had Anjali to rely on.. but i also feel bad for her mom
so shes actually getting married..no turning back..unless ofcourse she runs off😆😛
i soo wanna know who the groom is! i want it to be armaan :P
i loved it!
continue soon x
Edited by zARqaa_X - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
@zarqaa & Sab...aapki shraddha hai...ki aap yahaan padhaare...main...main...i...yeah... main dhany hui... :p
PS i actually dint accepted any comment at this anytime soon(not even "res" ):p


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Edited by -KaShti- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: -KaShti-

@zarqaa & Sab...aapki shraddha hai...ki aap yahaan padhaare...main...main...i...yeah... main dhany hui... :p
PS i actually dint accepted any comment at this anytime soon :p


;)

lol well Sri you can never expect the expected with me😆

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