'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 87

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when u r going to update ...plz tell me haa...u know naa reservation karna hai🤣
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Your ff is really awesome and amazing...šŸ˜ welcome to my thread dear n thankuu so much for ur comments
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when u r going to update ...plz tell me haa...u know naa reservation karna hai🤣

most probably by tomorrow afternoon or evening!!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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most probably by tomorrow afternoon or evening!!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

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Eagerly waiting for your update. Of all the FFs I read till now, yours is the best. Had you been the scriptwriter of PKYEK, it would have topped the TRP chartsā­ļø
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Eagerly waiting for your update. gonna update widin 5 minutes Of all the FFs I read till now, yours is the best. omg...u made me speechless dear...it means alot to me u said this, thankuuu so much Had you been the scriptwriter of PKYEK, it would have topped the TRP chartsā­ļø what should i say, i m totally humbled...thankuu so much for ur such warm words😊

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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

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note:nxt update is covered widin two posts, so do check d post below this one
part-18
nxt morning was reli beautiful
pia slowly opened her eyes n instead of dat angelic face she found a note near d pillow n something was written on it in beautiful script!!

my sleeping beauty

av some more sleep, i wl b back soon!!!

love

abhay!!

pia kissed dat paper!!!

pia(made a sad face)- bt i m nt feeling sleepy abhay!!(she was talking to dat paper only)

pia looked down at herself n smiled shyly, her bare figure was still covered wid dat sheet!!

then she saw her sari n other stuff were properly placed on d couch, in a very tidy manner!

she smiled thinking of abhay n thought-he must av done it bf4 leaving!!

she went to d washroom covering herself frm dat sheet only, she took a warm bath n came out tying a towel around her, water was dripping frm her black curls, she came n stood infront of mirror, she was moving her fingers in her wet curls, when she noticed a love bite on her shoulder, she touched dat part of her shoulder n smiled looking down , red colour soon got painted on her cheeks remembering last nite incidents'

her head was still down when she found two strong arms encircling her waist, his cold chin on her shoulder, she quickly looked into mirror n foundhis reflection in mirror standing there, holding perfect smile on his face!!

Abhay( wid a smirk)- wiffy u r looking smashing hot!!shit I missed something reli hot!!!

Pia's jaw dropped n soon she realised dat she was standing there in towel only!!

Pia- abhay leave me'I need to change!!

Abhay(still holding a smirk)- pia ur husband is telling u, dat u r looking hot in dis outfit n u talking abt leaving!! Nt so soon hun, I cn't afford to lose such a beautiful moment!!

Pia- abhayyy stop being so naught n let me go!!

Abhay moved her curls frm her back n slid them on her shoulder n slowly placed a kiss there , his eyes were on mirror looking pia's reaction n then he said- pia u aven't seen my naughtiness yet n brought his hand near d end of her towel

Pia's eyes literally popped out n she held his hand wid her there only!!

Pia- abhay stop it!!

Abhay (again smirked)- do u reli think just by saying u cn stop me!!

Pia- ok tel me, how cn I stop my naughty n seductive husband

Abhay(wid whole naughty smile)-wid d same seductive way u cn stop me!!

Pia who was looking at abhay through mirror giving him "no way" look!!

Abhay ' as u wish pia, bt then don't complain later on dat I didn't warn u n was abt to open her towel, bt pia quickly said- ok fine'tel me wat I av to do??

Abhay- dats like my gal , I m nt going to demand much pia, just want a kiss n don't u dare trick me, I want a perfect kiss just like last night one!!

Pia smiled n looked down , abhay turned her around holding her frm her both shoulders n saw blood colour was rushing to her cheeks!!

Abhay smiled looking dat pure, innocent soul infront of him, he made her look into his eyes n said- I want my thing n I cn't wait specially when u r looking so irresistable!!

This time pia smiled n n moved her hand on his eyes, letting him closed them, then he brought her face close to him, abhay supported her by holding her frm her waist firmly

Pia closed her eyes n kept her soft lips on his cold one's n as soon as their lips met, abhay didn't let ny space b/w them, he took over her action n slowly n smoothly ,all lost in their kiss only abhay pinned her to d wall 'after sometime abhay left pia gently, letting her gasp some air, pia's eyes still closed bt she was holding a beautiful smile on her face'

Abhay noticed her beautiful smile n then a red mark near her neck!! He gently rubbed his thumb on it n pia's eyed moved towards his finger!!

Then she looked into his deep blue eyes, which were full of mischievousness, she couldn't stand his strong gaze n started looking down shyly when abhay slowly said pia while admiring her rections n this time pia just hugged him tightly

Abhay(in her ear)- dats my hickey!!

Pia just smiled holding him n abhay removed dat little distance b/w them, by letting her towel left her figure n pia surrendered herself n closed her eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''.

After almost 3 ours abhay-pia reached home'abhay made pia had her breakfast in d way back to home!!

Pia hugged chand-haseena, it was a very warm n parental feeling for her to b wid them'.n then they both hugged abhay!!

Haseena was reli happy for his son n her daughter-in-law n d beautiful glow on pia's face was enough for her to tell d whole story!!

Haseena- abhay took pia to d room, she must b tired!!!

Abhay took pia to d room n she changed herself in some light stuff n soon after she dozzed off in abhay's arms!!

Abhay carefully put her forehead on pillow n came outside , where haseena n chand waiting for him!!

Chand- abhay I don't want to beat d bush, coming straight to d point, who was d vampire who attacked pia??

Abhay's expressions changed n eyes got filled wid anger, he just kept looking them for while n then replied straightly- david!!!! - he did all this!!! N I wl make it sure, he wl pay big time for his sin, for keeping his eye on my love!!

Chand n haseena felt d volcano of anger inside abhay!!! N it was hard to believe for them , dat david did this!!!

Bt haseena had her own things in her mind- abhay wat abt pia nw??

Abhay looked at his mom n understood where she was heading- i knw mom u r worried abt pia, I knw we need someone frm this supernatural world who cn keep pia n angel both safe during her pregnancy on medical terms n I knw whom I cn trust nw , I knw he wl never betray me, he is d only whom I cn trust wid pia's case'.bt bf4 dat I av to deal wid david !!

Haseena- chand 'together, abhay abt whom r u talking abt??

Abhay- u knw him very well!!!

Haseena- no way abhay trusting a werewolf, it wl cost us very high

Abhay- mom I av already seen d results of trusting a vampire n u knw I trust him wid my life!!!

Abhay left widout saying nything else, his mind got occupied wid so many things suddenly!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago

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