'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143

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Selina

@Selinapiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#881

Awesome..mindblowing update...👏

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#882

awesome update
loved it
Piya's feelings were beautifully expressed
Abhiya and Angel talks were as usual superb
waiting for their honeymoon
Haseena and Abhay's convo was gr8
continue soon
thanks for the PM

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#883

omg...omg...omg...heena di...mere reports aa gae hai n asthma cnfrmd...🤣...wt n updt dear...⭐️m stl n ur drmlnd...😳abhay s sch a cheatr i tlu wn it cms to romance...pia ne apna promise pura kia fr vi he *ahem ahem*...m☺️nw...lv chaandeena...😳de r so suprtv...😛n dt dream...awww...ppoor pia...lvd d way abhay calmd hr dwn...yehi sb faede hote hai supernatural pati ke...😆😉n dt ring ya...hope abhay gts it soon...😲lvd angels convo...awww...c cmpltly gets me bowld ovr(just lyk hr dad😉)...bechaari bacchi...abhiya vi uski maasumiat ka accha faeda uthate hai...😆pia gt so worid wn abhay almost tld angel wt he ws upto last nyt...🤣ye dono...romance ka ek mauka nai chrte...😳thnk god oops...thnk heena di 4 dt...😆m eagr to c hw abhay kld david...😡n of course more ov ur superb👏abhiya romance...☺️...relly heena di...ur updts kp me dreamng l day n al nyt...haye...😍do cont soon...loads ov lv...muuuaaahhh...🤗

Edited by purple_shadoz - 14 years ago

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#884

superb update
liked abhay angel and pia's talk
super dose of abhiya romance...still blushing
hope abhay killed david
abhiya honeymoon...waiting 4 it

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#885

Finally...im commenting 🤓

I thought by the time I will come back here you must have added another chapter but good for me you are busy too 😕

Now, coming to the update... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Do I need to say anything else? well I do 😛

Umm.. my only comment about Abhiay romance would be thank god, Angel is here... i donno angel nehi hoti to kya hota 😛 ufff... super hawtt...super romance... very well written... me besharam... loved it 😆 😍 ☺️

poor piya... so much pain she is having.. Loved Angel as always

and finally... so Abhay killed David ha.. please do right how he killed David...would love to read more... and I can guess more danger coming on the way...

Chand and Haseena are such sweet parent-in-laws... superbbb

now, waiting for honeymoon ☺️ 😍

Luv u dear... 🤗

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#886

Yippeee.. Finally David is dead!! Happy happy :).. Thanks for the PM.. Please update the next part soon..!

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#887

Awesome update! I'm so glad that Abhay took care of David! And the Abhiya moments were very cute!😳 And of course, the Abhay-Piya-Angel conversation was so adorable! 😛 Waiting for Abhiya to go on their honeymoon! 😳 Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#888

Cant Comment
i am fainted

ahh now gain concious
awesome. . Awesomest update . . too hot to handle :P
worth the wait . .
i am blushing here and too shy too comment ...mein toh sharam se paani paani ho gayi .. Abhiya towel scene was superb. . Ab to CVs ko show mei bhi ek towel scene rakh lena chahiye ! Hehe

piya is one lucky girl .. . She has a loving husband. . Loving in laws n understanding friends. . Tabhi to austria ke tickets le aye. . Kia understanding hai. . Lol

abhay-pia-angel convo was super cute. . Loved it. . Abhiya's footballer on its way.. She kicks so much. .hehe

abhay ne david ka band baja dia wo bhi baghair band baaje ke. . DHINKA CHIKA . . DHINKA CHIKA . . DHINKA CHIKA . . Yuppee. . Plz , do write abt abhay n david's fight.

Waiting for abhiya's honeymoon. .lol
thanx for the pm. . Sweetz
continue soon
tc

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#889

AWESOME UPDATE...LOVED FATHER- DAUGHTER BONDING( THE WAY ABHAY CONNECTS TO HIS DAUGHTER..)...ABHIYA'S LOVE (WHICH IS NOT JUST LIMITED TO PHYSICAL ATTRACTION BUT HAS MUCH MORE TO IT... ). EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...GOOD LUCK!!!😃

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Nisha

@moonlitnisha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#890

Thanx a ton for the PM...and Awesome Update loved each and Every Bit of It especially the Abhay's Bond wid his ANGEL...you are a Fantabulous writter with Amazing Writting Skills...Keep up the Good Work and Continue soon will wait for your Next Update