'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 86

Originally posted by: peehu24

it was soo beautifully written...m still blushing at ur words ☺️...damn hot scene ☺️...fab update.thankuuu so much peehu..abhiya was soo passionate...and abhay making pasta...aww...so sweet...glad u loved it dear

so...i think its david...abhay is surely gonna kill him..ya he wl.

update soon sure wl try...m eagerly waiting for ur next update...

Originally posted by: luvingshubhu

superbthankuuu so much😊
😊😊love it...glad u loved it
grt abhiya scenethanx once again😊

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

oh my god what was that😲 hehehehe shivani dat was an update wid a waring above😆
😆i never ever in my wildest of dreams has thought that u will write a suhaag raat scene😳 hahaha even i wasn't sure bf4 writing this whole scene dat whether should i add this or nt, coz o technically , i don't knw how much it was right to add this scene😉
😉especially when pia is in this state
but u really handled it well gosh the scene was really breathtaking😳😉
i m still blushing☺️ glad u said dat!!
u wrote everything in so much detail and so beautifully that while reading it i was feeling goosebumps in my stomach😆😳
that was really mesmerizing i wish i will also get someone like abhay in my life😉 just kidding yaar i know there is only one abhay and he is of pia truly now😆 i want d same, bt fantacies in which v live r far away frm d real life which v face!! bt still i believe God has must sent some abhay for us also on this earth
well jokes apart i loved this update really u r truly one of the best writers on the forum when it comes to romance👏👏👏👏👏 omg shivani i m totally humbled by ur warm words
can't even remember anything else than that scene
but ya finally u have revealed that david is the culprit n very soon he wl b out of story also😉
😉well waiting eagerly for angel abhay convoin nxt part i wl write abhay-angel convo
thanks a ton for the pm and a gr8 update ma pleasure n thanx alot for ur beautiful comments
please update soon i hope their honeymoon will continue for the time being😆😉
hahaha, bt honeymoon part wl b frm nxt to nxt update!! give them n me some rest...writing this whole romance give me some ewww feelings😆😆😆😆and that maithali😡will not spoil their magical momentsnt xactly!!

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

oh my god..oh my god..oh my god..HEENA..I FEEL I SHOULD STOP WRITING ANYTHING..YAAR YOU PEOPLE ARE SO SO SO AWESOMEdi its honour for me u said this, bt i cn't even think of writing like u, i m still far away frm ur skills of writing abhia moments, they r totally best ..YAAR..at THAT DREAM HOUSE of Piya was exactly like what I was dreaming about their house too.awww.🤗 I am exreamly sorry for a late reply..I dint log in frustration after what Piya said last night..yaar.i cn understand di, it was heart wrenching, bt thanx alot di for ur comments.

Originally posted by: luvd

cld u plz add me 2 ur PM list ofcourse dear n welcome to my thread😊😊

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Awesme updatethankuuu so much dear.Abhiya scene ws breathtking.plz continun soonsure wl try n welcome to my thread😊.

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Haye maar dala.no i m reli angry frm u, why r u so much missing frm my ff??..Heena ne...Romantic Abhiya se...😆😆😆 gosh u r too good wid ur rhyming thing!!...Cnt say anything morethankuuu so mcuh yaar for ur comments...i was hell missing them...waiting 4 the postmortem of Dr...Ishsponshored by Abhayure nxt update me kar dega...😆😆😆...

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hi!! Nice update!! it was really hot :).thankuuu so much dear.glad u loved it I'm still blushing 😳 Could you please add me to your PM list ??? ofcourse my pleasure

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

love your FF very much.welcome dean n thankuuu so much n glad dat u loved it You are a gifted writer.omg...dear i m humbled by ur words...i cn't xpress how much this means to me Please add me to your PM list😊 ofcourse , my pleasure