Maaneet FF-Hand in Hand-Part 26 Update! - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
iam new reader
i read all chap
awesome and superb
i loved it
and if iam not wrong dadi is in icu just guessing plz say right or wrong
promo is quite interseting
plz pm whenever u update
thanx
Edited by meena.. - 14 years ago
Danina thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

iam new reader

i read all chap
awesome and superb
i loved it
and if iam not wrong dadi is in icu just guessing plz say right or wrong
promo is quite interseting
plz pm whenever u update
thanx


ty:)
thankyou:)
well...u have to read d next update you may be right:)...
i will pm you:)
thankyou:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update & thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part9 was sweet,geet packng for maan n smilng
luvd it
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet feelng j dueto AH,maan was also teasng her.nice prt
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow de confesse,maan teasing her repetedly.awsome prts
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Posted: 14 years ago
just caught up with last 2 updates...
awsome...:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 15:
Geet started packing..and maan went and changed his clothes...then maan started
packing and geet went and changed...Maan had finished all his packing when he felt
geet's hand on his shoulder he turned to look at her and she asked him:'Maan,howa
kya hai?'
M-Geet,woh dadi,she's in the ICU,and she's very critical..and with that tears slid
down his cheeks...and Geet made him sit on the bed when Maan put his head in her
lap..she started stroking his hair and saying:'Dont worry,everything's going to be
alright'...
(Okay guys this twist was only there so Maan could trust Geet with his emotions...and
all...you know he needed a break-down kinda thing...let his emotions flow...and
because i dont want to go in writing this sad track...coz there are many sad tracks
coming up...so yeah i skipped the details...)
1 month later:
Everyone was happily sitting on the breakfast table...dadi had completely recovered
from the heart-attack she had...she started her normal life again...she and anvesha
were sitting on the table waiting for Geet to bring the breakfast...when Maan walked
down the stairs..his eyes scanned the table and upon not seeing Geet there..he knew
she was in the kitchen so he went there but dadi stopped him..
D-Maan,where are you going?..U have to have breakfast
M-Umm...woh dadi i was just going to go get a glass of water for myself..
D-Oh okay...
But she thought MSK going to bring water for himself..weird when anvesha spoke up
'Dadi,Geet bhabi's in the kitchen thats why maan bhai is going to get water..'
D-Oh,acha...toh aaj hum bhi dekthe hain..what water maan is drinking?
With saying this she winks at anvesha and motions her to follow her...
While Maan entered the kitchen and saw his beautiful wife cooking breakfast...
she was wearing a simple red churidaar with a frock,with kohl in her eyes and soft earring
and a few bangles which clinked when she moved her arms..maan was too stunned
to speak...she looked breath-taking...getting out of the trance..he quitely went behind
her as she hadnt seen him yet and placed his hands on her waist and pulled her closer
when she said in a low tone:'Maan,aap... what are you doing here?'
M-I came to drink some water...
G-Toh,go drink water na..leave me...
M-Haan,im drinking water na...
G-Maan,the fridge is there not here...go and drink water from there and leave me..
M-But,Geet im thirsty...
G-Toh,go and drink water na...its in the fridge..stop disturbing me...
she was trying to get away from his grip...but he was too strong for her and on top
of that he put his chin on her shoulder...
M-But,Geet im thirsty for you..
G-WHAT?...MAAN AAP BHI NA...LEAVE ME!
M-Nahi,i will not...he gently started tracing her neck with his lips...and tightened the
hold on her...
Geet was blushing like hell right now..she was still trying to get away but the proximity
was slowly starting to work its magic on her and she relaxed a bit..
G-Maan,yeh kitchen hai koi ajayega...choriye mujhe plz...
M-I dont care...whoever wants to come can come...whilst planting small kisses on her
jawline...
G-Maaannn...plz na leave me...
Thats when they heard:
Dadi-Ahem Ahem...
They both sprung apart...they were as red as beetroot...they had been caught and
that to...'SHIT'...
D-Geet i was wondering if the breakfast was ready but as i see your busy i'll come
later...
G-Nahi,Dadi woh umm...its ready..and woh ummm..
Anvesha-Bhai,u finished drinking water?
Maan glared up at anvesha but he was blushing so bad..
M-Umm..woh haan i finished and was about to leave when Geet said she needed my help..
Geet's eyes widened...she shot Maan a glare...she never expected MSK to lie...
A-Bhabi,Wat help did you need that too of bhai woh bhi in the kitchen?
G-Woh,nahi i just umm..told him to pass the milk from the fridge...
D-Its okay beta if breakfast is ready,then do serve it dont forget us...
A-Haan bhai,plz dont forget us in your thirst..giving them both a wink..
Maan felt he could kill his sister right now...he was so embarassed..
Geet felt she could kill Maan right now because of him she had to face all this...
Geet had a knife in her hands and turned towards Maan and said:'Maan,apko
paani chahiye?..'
M-Geet,woh toh mein baas...
Geet went and pointed the knife on his neck and said:'You are so dead Mr.MSK'
M-Geeettt..you are threatning MSK?...how dare you?
G-Ji,haan i am...look just because of you i had to face all that..you are dead..
M-I would die a thousand times if you were the muderer...
Geet's face flushed up and she looked down and Maan seeing his chance snatched
the knife away from Geet and put her hands behind her back and said:'Toh,Mrs Khurana
murder ke mood mein hai?'
G-Maan wasnt that enough choro na...plz
M-Mood nahi hai..
G-Maan...when suddenly she was silenced with the pressure of Maan's lips on hers..he kissed
her tenderly yet slowly and passionetly...but due to her anger on him she was resisting it
she was not responding...she was trying to pull away..but Maan deepened the kiss..
but Geet was determined not to let him get his way...but then Maan's hands started
travelling up her waist..to her back...then one in his hair and one on her waist..
she was loosing the battle...she knew it her lips parted slightly and that was enough
for Maan...he kissed her harder and this time Geet responded with equal passion..
they didnt want to stop but they were out of breath and they put pulled away gasping
for air..but Maan still had his arm around her waist and she still had her hands around
his neck...when Maan touched his forhead wtih hers and whispered:'Toh,you want to
continue this...?'
Geet blushed so hard:'Maan abhi nahi we have to have breakfast na...'
M-Nahi,Geet im already having my 'special' breakfast...and i want to have some more
G-Maan,aap bhi na...you're always joking around...come on we have to have breakfast
now..let me go and with that she pushed maan backwards and started taking the breakfast
to the table...Maan just stood there admiring his wife...she was so perfect...he walked
out of the kitchen and went and sat down on the table when dadima spoke up:'Maan,
beta woh aaj apko aur Geet ko dinner ke leya jaana hey...woh Mr.Chopra ki party mein'
M-But dadi kyu?
D-They invited you for dinner to discuss the project details...
M-How do you know all this?
D-Adi called while you were busy drinking water...while saying this she gave Geet the
look
And Geet just looked down...blushing...
D-Toh you guys have to go
M-Haan we will...Geet be ready at 7..i'll come and pick you up we'll go..okay?
G-Okay..
Anvesha winked at Dadi...they're plan was working...
They finished their breakfast...and Maan got up and took his file,keys and mobile..
and walked out the door...
Geet was feeling hurt he didnt even say bye to me?..That was so rude of him..
Theek hai if he wants to behave like that i will too...hmfhh..
She went and sat on her bed...and was started reading a book..when her phone rang
Geet looked at the caller id and saw Maan's name..and mumbled:'Pehle toh bye bhi
nahi kiya now he's calling and he expects me to pick up?..Nahi,i will not!Infact i will
not speak to him only...!
On the other side Maan was wondering what was wrong with Geet why wasnt she picking up?


Precap-I hate you!

Okay guys im sorry i know this update was short plus i didnt update from a few days..
i was kinda busy and i was finding it difficult to write this part...as it had a leap
so i didnt know how to explain what happened in the month...dont worry i will tell you
whatever happened in the next update!
Plus i know this part aint that good...but plz bare with me:)
THANKYOU ALL MY READERS I READ ALL YOUR COMMENTS..SORRY CANT REPLY
TO EACH AND EVERYONE BUT I READ THEM ALL THANKYOU:)
PLUS LINK TO MY OTHER FF-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1725356

Edited by Danina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update. I'll be waiting to read what happened in that month. Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear
loved it
update soon

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