Posted:
Plz read the note at the end!
Part 14:
Geet sat their crying... when she heard maan's voice:'Arey,geet..cry later otherwise..
whatever you just said will become real'...geet got up and started looking around and
said:'Maan,where are you?'..
M-Look down plz..
Obediently geet looked down..and surely saw maan hanging on the cliff...and geet who's
breathing was fast said:'Maan..th..thank God your safe...you cant even imagine..what
kind of thoughts i had conjured up...'
M-Geet i could here you..you thought i was dead..which is going to become true..in
a few mins if you DONT CALL HELP..RIGHT NOW!!
G-Oh sorry maan..i'll go and call...
Geet went and told some people..4-5 men agreed to help..they bought a rope with them..
and tied it around a tree...and threw it to maan..maan with the help of it...came up..
Geet and Maan thanked the men..and as soon as they left..geet started inspecting
maan's body..
M-Geet what are u doing?
G-Im checking if your hurt anywhere...
M(st)So my wife's worried about me..
When Maan's face started getting inspected...maan smiled evily..and suddenly put his
arms around geet's waist and pulled her forward..with a lurch geet's face hit maan's
shoulder and their chest's bumped...both their hearts started beating furiously against
their chests...their breathing became uneven...maan took one of his hands and put it
under her chin and bought her face in level with his..but his other hand was firmly around her
waist..pulling her close to him...and the hand on her chin slowly grazed her cheeks..
and in a husky tone bringing his mouth close to geet's ear..he asked:'So..Mrs.Khurana
is worried about her husband..?'..Geet so lost in the intimacy replied:'Haan'..
Geet could feel maan's hot breaths on her ear..she slowly let go of all her worries
and emotions and put her head on his chest with one of her hands on his heart feeling
his fast heartbeats..but it felt as those heartbeats were telling her a story..a story
of how much her prince-charming loved her...while maan too lost in emotions...locked
the embrace by putting one hand securely around her..while the other securing her
waist..which bought them both very close...and maan slowly questioned her..'Geet,u said
babji was taking away the people u love..was it true?..'
G-Haan,Maan if babji took you away too how would i survive?
Maan was so happy with her answer...then and there he knew she loved him but
because she thought by loving him she would betray rahul she didnt say anything..but
he became determined..(st)..geet i will find a way..u will confess your feelings to me..
Suddenly..there was a cough behind them which bought them back to reality..Geet pulled
away from maan..and maan let go...they both turned crimson red..and held their hands
behind their back like kids caught doing something wrong..when they looked up they saw
Armaan and Shilpa standing there..and their embarassment became limitless..
their friends had caught them in such an intimate moment..'SHIT'!!
Sh-Woh,hum log to yahe scenery dekhne aye the but..armaan we got sumthing even
better to see...
A-If u two love birds are done romancing toh can someone else start..
Sh-Armaaan..stop it...
A-And guys get a room...i mean public display of affection aint so good...
Maan and Geet were tongue-tied..they were embarassed till the core and their friends
werent helping them...
Armaan put his hand around shilpa's waist and bought her closer to him...and geet
on seeing this said:'Atleast we two are married..so its not that weird..what about
you two...not even married...aur itna public display?'
Now it was armaan and shilpa's turn to be embarassed and tongue-tied..
While maan was smiling like crazy at geet...and he knew geet will start a tantrum now
so he quickly put one arm around her waist..and dragged her with him and while going
whispered in armaan's ear:'Enjoy..'
And left smirking...
This time they both walked down the stairs of the temple with maan's arm around
geet's waist...Shivers were running down geet's spine and maan's hands were trembling
due to the proximity..but he tried to keep his hold firm...
They reached the car...geet went and sat down...so did maan..he started driving the
car..there was silence...Geet(st)-Geet what just happened there?...u and maan..
but thats not the worse part in those few moments you forgot rahul?..how could
this happen even before..stuff like this happened but rahul was always there in sum
corner he was there..but today i had completely forgotten him..forget he existed..
what is wrong with me?What is maan doing to me?
Maan(st)-Geet today u have to confess...and for that i have a plan...
They reached the hotel...geet went to freshen up..and meanwhile maan took..geet's
mobile and took all her friend's numbers and called them and informed them of his plan...
7:45pm:
Maaneet were sitting silently in the car...they were driving towards the party...
Maan-(st)Omg she is looking so beautiful in this attire...geet had worn a baby pink..and
slightly voilety saree...with stone work on the pallu..with that she had worn a
simple locket..a few bangles..and a 2 inched soft purple and pink heel..she had worn
delicate earrings..her saree was revealing but she looked amazing in it...
she looked stunnigly-beautiful..maan was left speech-less...he was totally mesmerized
by her beauty..it was like an angel had come from heaven..
Geet(st)-Maan looks so good-looking in his casual black shirt with the top 4 buttons open
and slightly tight jeans...with slightly pointed shoes..with his watch losely hanging..
on his wrist..and hair gelled up...he looked perfect..
Maan thought geet just looked perfect because her hair which was left open..it teased
her as it came and rested on her cheeks..but what they didnt know they were playing
with maan's senses..he was going breathless..seeing geet's soft fingers pushing those
hair strands away...Geet suddenly looked up and saw maan gazing at her..her heartbeat
quickened seeing the passion and love those eyes held for her...
Suddenly someone honked and they both jerked and looked staright ahead..blushing at
having being caught at staring at each other..
After some time they both reach the cottage..the cottage was dimly decorated with
candles...and soft music played...it was decorated with flowers..mostly in red..
the table covers and all were red..it was a perfect romantic setting...they both went
further inside..and geet asked shilpa:'Yaar,itne romantic setting kyun hai?'..
'Woh this is a couples special..seeing we all are couples...we thought why not..'..
'But we all are not couples i mean arjun isnt he single?'
Ar-Arey,that doesnt matter...
G-Haan its k...go and sit on that table all alone..and he left..
And she saw all her friends were seated with their loves at their table..and soon
the only one's standing were Maaneet..then maan
spoke up:'Shall we sit?'..
G-Haan,lets go..
When suddenly there was a slight knock on the door and a beautiful girl wearing an
red anarkali entered...damn she was beautiful with slight kohl in her eyes..a tinge of blush
..a light eye-shade..and bangles tinkling against her skin..and her earrings..softly
bringing out the shape of her face...well..she was totally beautiful..all the guys there
went gaga over her..but she went towards maan and hugged him and said:'Hey sweety..
how are you?'...Geet at seeing this felt a stab of pain in her heart...who was this girl
calling her maan sweety..how dare she?
She heard maan replying:'Im fine...honey...how are you?..
G-Who is this maan?
M-Woh,um geet yeh Arohi...my
Arohi-His girlfriend...we have been in love for a long time and today is our 5th anniversery
so we wanted to celebrate it...
M-Haan,geet!
Both arohi and maan left for another table..with maan's hand around arohi's waist..
she felt angered and remembered the evening when that hand had been around her
waist...she shivered at remembering the electrifying feeling she had felt...
she felt broken...but wasnt she the one..who had told maan..she couldnt be the wife
couldnt love him?..she had made sure he stayed away from her then what were these
feelings she was experiencing?Jealousy?..Love?What?...she was all confused..
When...shilpa came and sat across her and asked:'Geet kya howa?'
G-Kuch nahi,baas wondering what to do...
Sh-Muskaan i can clearly see that your smile is with that guy your looking at...
Geet your in love with maan...we all can clearly see it..
G-No,i love rah..
Sh-No,Geet you dont...even back then you just cared for him..and respected him..
for what all he had done for...you were comfortable with him...but the passion and
the fury of love i see in your eyes now for maan..it was never there for rahul..
G-But how can i break my vow..
Sh-There is no vow anymore..rahul wouldnt want you to mourn him when life is
giving you all the happiness...Geet God did all this for a reason to unite two lovers he
took one's life away..geet dont throw all this away..
G-But shilpa..my promise..
Sh-Geet aab yeh sab uthar do..the mask you wear to hide your feelings remove it
admit the fact that your in love with maan..
G-Shilpa..no this cant be happening..what about rahul?
Sh-Geet i care for rahul..i may sound mean but raat gaye baat gaye..same way
rahul gaye..promise bhi gaye..stop being a coward and accept your feelings geet...
and with that she got up and went back to her table...
Geet was thinking of what all shilpa had said...was she really in love with maan?was it
really care and respect with rahul?..She did feel a difference here only maan's
happiness mattered..there her happiness was always there..here she felt complete
with maan..there she felt atleast she had someone...
She got out of these thoughts when she saw maan go to arohi's side...go on his knees
take a box out of his pocket and opens it and says:'Since the day i saw you the first
time running around giving orders..i fell deeply in love with you..and since then all
that has happened between us...has made me fall more deeply in love with you..both of
us in the shower...our first hug..u wet my whole shirt..then when i carried you in
my arms...first kiss...and our first dance..all this made me fall more in love with you..
When maan said all this geet remembered all their moments related to these things:
The time he had pulled her with the towel..and both of them in the shower..and
the time she had cried and hugged him...then when i got hurt he carried me and
after that our kiss and that dance..
By the time she went back to hearing maan again he was saying:'So Arohi..will you
become Mrs Arohi Maan Singh Khurana?..
At this geet couldnt control anymore..she said go to hell with my promise..i cant
let this happen maan is only mine..
Maan was about to slip the ring in arohi's finger when geet went and stopped maan's
hand...Maan got up and asked in anger:'Geet what is all this?..what are you doing?'
G-Oye miss.Arohi..whoever you are back off there is only one Mrs.Maan Singh
Khurana here and that is Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana..get it?
Arohi-What?
Geet ignoring her turns to maan and holds his collar and shouts at him:
'Apko abhi bhi sharam nahi aye aap apni biwi ke samne kisi aur ko propose kar rahe hai?
How dare you..?No one else can be your wife except me...understand...You are only
mine understand Mr.MSK?..And i never expected u to do this after what all we had..
Maan in anger asks her:'What did we have geet?haan tell me what was there
between us?
Geet screamed back:'O wat about today when i said i couldnt survive without you..the
time we kissed i responed Goddamit..i responded to your kiss...When u carried me
today..when u held me by my waist did i protest did i?...When i was telling you
not to flirt with other girls and all..what was that?wasnt that care?...
Tell me maan what else proof do you want that i am your wife...?'
She started hitting his chest with her fist amd started crying..and saying:'Im your
wife maan and you...'Maan couldnt control any longer he put one hand around her
waist..and one around her head and pulled her face towards his and crushed his
lips on her soft one's...he held her waist tightly and slowly started pulling her closer to
him so close that there bodies were almost interwined...Geet was resisting at first..
trying to get away but atlast she gave in responeded to it..let him enter her mouth..
now maan had full access to her mouth and his hand was roaming her back..while
his tongue fully explored her mouth..geets hands were locked in his hair pulling it..which
resulted in the kiss becoming more deeper...they were so close their heartbeats were
in perfect symphony with each other..their breathing played the same tune as each other..
they slowly and gradually stopped kissing because they were breathless..geet could still
feel the traces of his touch and lips on her...she could still feel the shivers which
she felt when he had held her..and the electicity that flowed through her veins
when he had kissed her..Maan was still in the trance...
he could still feel their tongues which were blended as one...
They were still thinking about all this when armaan said:'Guys get a room...'
And they both turned red...and then arjun said:'Finally..i can spend the rest of
the evening with my fiance..'
G-What..whos ur fiance?
Ar-Arohi..
G-What but i thought that?
Sh-that all was a plan by maan to make u confess your feelings..
Geet stared at maan in anger...
M-Sorry geet woh...
G-You wait Mr.Khuruna do you know what i went through seeing all that...just wait..
Si-Now everythings fine na lets enjoy...
M-Guys how long are you guys here?
E-Umm..3 more days y?
M-Well...i thought why not we meet tomorrow again go out for a picnic atleast?
E-haan,good idea!!
While maan came and whispered huskily:'You wanna go back now?'..
Geet who was lost in maan's hot breath over her ear just nodded her head..
and after that maan announced to the gang:'Guys me and geet are kinda tired so
we're going back i hope its okay..i mean we'll meet tomorrow for the picnic at
the same restaurant at 7am and then from their for a picnic..hows the idea?
E-Sounds like a plan...
M-Okay..bye guys have fun..
G-Bye guys see you all tomorrow...
E-GUYS..HAVE ALOT OF FUN!!
Geet blushed at this and maan smirked and held geet by her waist and lead her to
the car...he opened the door for her..she sat down...he went and sat down and
started to drive...and then maan switched on the radio..when the this song started to play:
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Pehli Pehli Baar Hai
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai..
(They both started blushing and maan looked at geet and geet turned her head away)
Uski Nazar, Palkon Ki Chilman Se Mujhe Dekhti, Uski Nazar
Uski Haya, Apni Hi Chaahat Ka Raaz Kholti, Uski Haya
Chhup Ke Kare Jo Wafa, Aisa Mera Yaar Hai
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai ...
(Then when maan was driving slowly geet..started looking at maan and kept staring at him
the moment maan looked at her she turned her head away)
Wo Hai Nisha, Wo Hi Meri Zindagi Ki Bhor Hai, Wo Hai Nisha
Use Hai Pata, Uske Hi Haathon Mein Meri Dor Hai, Use Hai Pata
Saare Jahan Se Juda, Aisa Mera Pyaar Hai
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai...
(Geet and Maan both looked at each other and maan slightly nods his head as if saying
that words in the song are true and as if geet understood she smiles at him and then
shies away)..
The song stops and so does the car..
Geet was feeling extremly shy and thinking..:'This is how it feels..to be in love..wow
its a beautiful feeling..i've fallen in love with LOVE...
M-Geet we're here...
G-Hmmm...
Maan got out of the car..went opened Geet's side and held his hand out to geet...
Geet looked up and saw the hand...a blush was creeping into her cheeks..she was
nervous..maan grew anxious and his heartbeat was racing like mad..and then slowly..
Geet put her hand in maan's and maan squeezed her hand as if assuaring her...
Im with you...
They both made their way to their room...They entered it..
G-Mein change karleti hoon..and was leaving when maan caught hold of her wrist and
pulled her back...and her back banged in maan's chest...Maan slowly put his hands
around her waist..holding her tightly against him..Geet's heartbeat was going crazy..
her breath was becoming uneven..Maan's hold gave her electrified shocks that ran
in her viens..and made her body shiver...Slowly Maan put his chin on her shoulder...
geet felt electricity coursing her body...Maan felt his heart race...the feel of geet's
body against his was too much too handle...but he controlled...and asked:'Geet,what
were you saying in the party?..Your the only one who can be my wife..Did you mean
all that?..'
G-Maan,mujhe jane dijiye..maan plz...
M-Not until you answer me..
He started placing soft kisses on her neck..
Geet shivered..his breath on her neck..made her breathing go heavy..and her beat so
fast..it felt it may come out any second...
M-Batao na Geet...who are you?..Why did you stop me proposing Arohi..
Geet her emotions out of control now due to the proximity...
G-Maan,because your a married man..and im your wife...and im the only one..who
has all her rights over..you..Aap sirf Geet ke Maan hoo...
M-aur tum sirf Maan ki Geet hoo...
His kisses grazed her neck...she closed her eyes...and breathed in a huge amount of air..
his hands travelled from her waist to her back...she was going to lose all her
self-control any moment...
'Tring..Tring..'the phone ring bought both of them back to earth..and maan loosened
his grip on geet...which allowed geet to push maan away and run in the bathroom..
While Maan cursing the phone..went and picked up..it was dadi:(guys only one sided-convo
M-Haan dadi...yeah we're fine...yes enjoying...haan..woh geet's in the bathroom..
yeah we'll call tomorrow..okay dadi bye take care...love you..say hey to annie..haan
we'll take care of ourselves...bye!
Maan kept the phone and started thinking about the moment Maaneet just had..and
he started grinning...his wife was just so awesome...he looked at the time and
saw it was already 11...(st)-Geet must be hungry...i should order some food...
He dialed room service ordered food...and was sitting on the bed..when he heard
the bathroom door open...and maan turned around to see geet...(st)She just becomes
more prettier by the second...
She came and sat on the bed...Maan came closer to her...and she just kept her head
between his shoulder and chest..and said:'Maan,you want ever leave me na?'..
M-No,Geet..nothing can take me away from you...
G-Maan,i just want you to know..that i will try and become the wife you want to me to be..
M-You're already the wife i want...
G-Acha..(hitting him on the chest)..that's why you go around flirting with other girls and
then you propose to other people..Maan u trouble me alot..She pulled away..turned
her back towards him...and pouted in anger..
M-Geet,im sorry na..i was just kidding..
G-I dont like such jokes...
M-Plz...Geet..mujhe maaf kardo na..plz..
G-Nahii..
Then Maan placed..his hands on her waist..and bought his mouth close to her ear and
whispered:'Plz forgive me...
Geet's anger was fading away...his hot breath on her ear was just killing her...his
close-ness was causing her body to tremble...but she tried to hold the firmeness
in her voice and said:'Nahi,Maan..no..'
But she knew any moment she would break down and melt in his arms...his breathing
slowed down causing her heartbeat to race...she was pulling herself to get up..she had made
it out almost..when maan said:'Jaan,plz forgive me na..'
And her heartbeat stopped at that moment..what had he called her..'Jaan'..she felt
she would just melt right now..she was on cloud nine right now..a smile escaped
her lips..which maan noticed and keeping his chin on her shoulder said:'Am i forgiven?'
Geet just nodded her head...she was still in la-la land..Geet(st)-He called me
Jaan...my husband..called me...Jaan..
And she placed her head back on his chest...and relaxed in his arms...she put her
hands on his and said:'Aap ne kya kaha?'
M-Sorry..
G-No,before that..
M-Sorry...
G-Maan...plz...aapne kuch aur bhi kaha tha..
Maan was seriously confused...what was geet talking about..he tried remembering what
he had said...but all he could come up with was:'I just said sorry geet'..
G-Nahi,you said something before that..
Maan went in deep thought what had he said?
OMG MSK..doesnt remember what he said..not possible..
while geet got pissed and stood up...and said:'Chado..aap ko toh kuch nahi ata...'
and stomped towards the sofa in anger...
M-Arey what did i say..
He was thinking when suddenly it clicked..he had said:'Jaan,plz forgive me na..'
(st)..so geet wanted him to call her Jaan...acha..but i wil force u to admit it..
He went to her:'Geet tell me na what should i say?'
G-Nahi...u should understand it yourself..
M-But geet i dont...
G-Chado..i dont want to talk to you...
M-Geet...now if i dont get it..whats my fault?..you can tell me na whats the big deal?
Geet murmered to herself..:'Chi,Chi...babji...inko toh sharam hi nahi hai..mein asi
baata kaho...babji..plz give maan some sense how can i say such stuff to him..'
Maan listened to herself talks and smirked and thought:'Geet ab ayega maza...'
There was a knock on the door..maan went and opened the door..their dinner had come..
he took it in and went and put it on the table and said:'Geet ajao..dinner has arrived...come
eat'..
G-Mujhe nahi kana...
M-Geet...zidd maat karo..come and eat now...arey,geet if you dont tell me what should
i say then how will i say it?..
G-Maan..apko samjh hi nahi..chado i dont want to have it...
M-Plz geet...
G-Nahi...
Maan thought:'Oho..i always have to giveup infront of you geet..aab mujhe kehni hi
parega..but i love to lose infront of you'..
he went taking the plate of rice with him and took a spoonful and held it infront of
her mouth:'Geet kalo'..
Geet just turned her face to the left..maan took the spoon to the left-side:'Geet..plz kalo..'
She turned her head to the right-side..maan took the spoon to the right-side and
said:'Jaan,plz kalo na..'
Geet suddenly looked up..her heartbeat had stopped again...maan had just called her
Jaan,that means he knew all along what she was talking about..and he was messing
with her..but she felt so happy he had called her Jaan..but she kept her mock anger
in place and said:'So you knew what i wanted you to say?'..
Maan nodded his head guiltily...
G-Maan,you're so mean...
M-Geet...i was just kidding..aab plz kalo..
Geet opened her mouth and maan fed her...then geet took a spoonful of food and fed maan
M-Hmm...aaj humare biwi acha mood mein hai...
G-Maan,no shararat...
M-Okay...Jaan..
Geet shied away...
M-Haye,an expression worth dying at...
When maan's phone rang again..he went and picked it up and said:'Hello..What?
How?When?..We're coming...
M-Geet,we're going back to delhi noww...
G-But,Maan kyun?
M-Geet just start packing..
Precap-Maan she's in the ICU...she's critical...
Okay,guys...i hope u like this update..and yeah plz give your feedback...and tell me
if u liked this part..if any of you found any fault...plz do mention it..i want to
improve myself...because this is my first FF thats why it may not be that good...
so plz give your feedback...and yeah...there are many twist's and turns...but i want
you guys to tell me one thing...do you think that the FF is moving really fast?
I mean should i take it slowly..slowly...or the story is going fine?
Plz tell me...
Sorry for any spelling and grammatical errors!
Guys i read all your comments thankyou...thankyou so much for the comments:)
ILY ppl:)
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
38