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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#311

its getting too scary ...cont. soon

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#312

Ever since I read the first update of this story, I wanted Neel to die. Period.🤢

But sadly, in our country, crimes like this does not necessarily lead to capital punishment legally.😒

But, after a murder, an attempted murder (hope Maan will be fine), rape and years of sexual abuse...Neel deserves to be hanged even in the eyes of law.😡😡

One sincere request to Lena: Please give us an end where Geet herself will lead Neel to his deserving end...I dont mind her cutting his head off...but thats too far fetched.

Can we hope for a happy end and a love-making between Maan and Geet which will erase bitter memories of her past.😳😳

Let Geet survive here with her Maan...no more sufferings.😃

Yes its violent and gives goosebumps...but one of your best piece of works so far...brilliant stuff...👏👏

Thanx for the pm...🤗

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#313

nice update...

it scares though...

do continue...

chao

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Errrggh that neel is just a pyshcopath!!
Oh no hope nothing has happened to our maan,,he better not be dead...
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

Fantastic update! Beautifully described! Loved when Maan made Geet meet the girl he loved! Aww too cute! Made me blush! The last part is scary though! Ugh that bas***d Neel is a sycho! He needs to go to hell ASAP! Maan is injured! Can't see him like that! Now I wonder what Neel is gonna do with Geet! Super worried! Pls continue really soon! Thanks for PM!

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Bidushy! <3