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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by abina03 - 14 years ago
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~PART 24~


Daadi kissed geets forehead & blessed her. Aisen nahi karten beta..
is nalak ke liyen tumne 3din se kaya nahi..
Maan frowned at Daadi. She smiled & teased him.
As Daadi & darji began to talk, Maan slowly came beside her & slipped his fingers into hers. She pulled her hand away & looked away. He made a baby sorry face.
She was really hurt no ways was she going to listen to him.

Darji went out to finish the formalities. Daadi left them alone. The moment Daadi left Maan eyed anu to go out. As they left Maan looked back at her with concern, aware that she was bottling up some strong emotions & he wanted her to confide in him. He watched her lovingly. He was just too damned tempting, with the way he looked at her, with that magnificent shoulders and that truly guilty face she thought, but she didn't want to let her urges break the guard she was trying to built around her heart.


The smoldering eyes of hers which looked at him like they would eat him up alive without her even realizing that she was doing it! In the end he was only a man, and with that much temptation on offer' How could he resist? He immediately turned & hugged her looking around one last time to be sure no one was watching them, he took those lips into his. She protested hitting his chest. He held her hitting hand & turned them backward, he frowned a knotting her brows. His other hand went behind her head & pulled her closer. She tried to wiggle out of the grip.. he pinned her against himself. Soon they were lost in the passion that ignited their nerves. I am sorry he said kissing her yet again. She snapped out of his grip & looked away.

He tried to come close she turned away. Aap kis haak se mujhe cho rahen ho.. she asked in pain & anger.
He cupped her face forcefully.. mujhe haak nahi tho kisen haaq hain
she broke out of his grip.. kisi ko nahi
he grabbed her & tucked her into his strong arms.. mujhe haaq hain ..sirf mujhe... his lips forced on her soft trembling lips. His tongue emphasizing his claim. A creak of a door made them step back from one another. Geet looked at Maan and could see the claim & determination in his eyes, he wanted her and she was pretty sure if they weren't interrupted then Maan would be still thrusting is lips on to hers. Both of them tried to calm their breathing. She tried to look not flushed but her cheeks deceived her. She took her pallo & slowly wiped her face, slowly pushing her curls.


Darji - challo beta ..tumhara discharge formalities ho gaya
she tried to rise & fell back. Maan immediately held her from the waist & kept looking at her. He couldn't believe she actually stayed without eating for 3days because him. Her body flushed up with a burn of his arms around her waist.

His dark eyes narrowed as he was leaning on his on her. He was huge compared to her slim slender structure. She was still angry ..he could make out as she was stealing glances though they were so close.. I'm sorry. I'm sorry, he didn't give her a chance to resist him as he grabbed her around the waist and lifted her back, Geet's shock and annoyance disappeared and a low chuckle rippled through her as well as a prickling heat that hit between her legs and her n**** tingled with his breath fanning her curves as he raised her.

She immediately straighten herself feeling conscious with the elders around watching them. Before she could realized her legs were swept off the floor & she was floating in mid air in his arms. She closed her her eyes & opened instantly fighting against his action. Darji & Daadi looked away giving them the room. He carried her to car.
Geet was embarressed - yeh kya kar raho hian ho.. sab dehk rahen hain.. mujhe nech uttaro.. plzz. Maan.


She cutely weakly protested. He could just eat her up alive now.. she looked so cute in his arms... flushing & yet fighting. He could see wat effect his touch had on her & the anger that again was because of him.
Maan - tum kya chati ho.. tum chakar ka ke girthi raho aur main bar bar tumhe pakdoon..

she made a baby angry face as he made her sit in the back seat of the car.
Darji - beta ghar challo hume aap se baat karni hain.
Maan looked at Daadi breaking his glance away from his jaan who still seemed to be angry with him.
Daadi nodded.
Maan looked at darji - ji

Maan, anu & Daadi followed them in their car.
Darji called papaji on the way & informed him abt the whole situation. Papaji was more than happy & delighted. He immediately informed rest of the family members. The arranged for a warm welcome & dinner.

When they reached home.. Brij carried Geet to her room. Rano rushed with a juice glass.
Rano - aab to peelen
Geet looked away .. she wondered why every one was behaving like it was her will to marry maan.. god sake they selected Maan for her...
thai ji - aab to sab teehk ho gaya na.
Geet was still very upset with Maan. How could he remove the ring. He never loved her, bas haaq jatana aata hain.
Rano forcefully fed her. Thai ji got some light food to feed her, since it won't be good to have something heavy all of a sudden.
Raji came in running - jiju aur Daadi aa gayen
Geet was excited but then she was supposed to be angry. She didn't want to talk to him. But she wanted to see him .. she wanted to be in his arms.. she wanted to feel him.. complain to him.. tell him she why she was angry. She pulled her pillow & cuddled up feeling helpless at her plight.

MY PAIN AND MY LOVE
how did i lose myself to you?
This question haunts me each day!
Each other we barely knew,
Yet being with you makes my day!!
When did you become evrything for me?
The only reason for all my glee...
So different, yet so endearing,
So unknown, yet so deeply known!!
when did this heart stop beating for me,
Agreeing to beat only for you...
When did my senses become so numb.
Getting alarmed only when close to me they found you!
Why did I let you into my heart?
Why did I let you get embedded in my soul?
Why did I become addicted to you?
Why it was just you who could make me whole?
I don't even know what i mean to you...
Yet the thought of losing you kills me within!
Though deep down my heart claims to know,
The four letter word still eludes me though!
Someone coming close to you-burnt me in jealousy,
Yet your words were enough to make me see my fallacy...
My trust on you was never shaken,
Its just the possessiveness that had spoken!
Yet how could you put my faith aside?
GHow could your ego put up a fight?
How could you just stand silently?
How could you let this relationship break violently?
Days passed you never called,
was that it? Was that all?
I was told its all over,
Yet waiting for you my eyes would hover!
When finally I saw you in front of my eyes,
What you spoke just jabbed my insides...
You questioned my trust, when you had lost yours,
YET STILL THIS HEART SCREAMS-I AM ALL YOURS!
BY
SWATI

They handa family welcomed Khurana's with all due respect. Papaji was little upset with all the misunderstanding & very softly he indicated his dislike.
Papaji - beta kuch bhi baat hoti hain batya karo.. abhi tho hum ek parivar huwen na
Daadi - ji beta. Actually media bhi na..uff aisen batein bahut hoti rahti hain.
Anu - media ko tho ek mauka chahiyen Maan ka naam uchalen ka liyen
Maan eyes was restlessly looking for his jaan. He knew she was still angry with him. He aould do anything to make her feel better. It was his mistake, he misunderstood her. He never thought how hurt she was. He was really sorry & mam was in no mood to accept his plea.
-BLOG aparichit part 24-

precap
a formal dinner date
-PREV
PART 23 NEXT PART 25-
Thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments & support
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow! Me first today. Thanks Muskan! sweet update. Maan has still to manaofy his jaan. I love his boldness and strength in front of the elders. Loved that she is giving him some attitude, I was hoping he would be the one to feed her. Chalo, nice rootna scene, ab jaldi manana bhi dikha do.So cute, the first pangs of love are. The special looks, the rootna, the intezaar, you bring it all out from the memories, muskan. Please update soon. LOVED IT.😊
Edited by ucompleteme - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeee... Me second...

Good one Geet.. Maan bete.. Long way to go... manao apne Jaan ko...😆

Geet baby dont give up so early.. let him work hard...😉😉😉😉😉

Loved the update Muskan.. as usual awesome part..👏👏👏👏

Loved the way Maan kissing her with full haaq...😳😳😳😳😳

Precap is making me greedy.. Muskan one more update Please...

waiting eagerly...
Edited by PoojaMishty - 14 years ago
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Ur fiction is like a drug...highly addictive. 😊 😉
Simply d best...
Edited by Shiya1206 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part still in the hangover of today's episode and ur update made me officially dead continue soon with these type of romantic updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan jus cant control himself around geet!! loved the update!! jus wanna see how maan will make it up to geet!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovly update muski...
wud b interesting to see how he will manofy her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Maan and Geet on an official dinner date?! Can't wait! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part.
Geet was so so angry with Maan.
She was resisting herself so much.
Maan's way of saying sorry was so unique.
He was the one who was supposed to be guilty and again
he got angry when she tried to push him 😲.
The way he claimed her though forcefully was beautiful.
If not for the interruptions he would have never moved an inch away from her.
Though geet is hurt and is trying to resist she seems to be longing too to be in his arms.
Maan has a lot of making up to do once he gets hold of Geet.
I liked papaji's words of wisdom to Maan.
Hope he follows them and tries to speak out.
Waiting for the dinner date.

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