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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally u r updating. Waiting.
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Muskan, finally u r updating! Finally!! Waiting..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique



ohh gosh it looks like its been ages since u updated...
u have made us completely addcietd to ur lovely updates...
only we kno how we spent these days, getting tortured with no updates from ur side😆

thank god u back...
ab lagta hai mujhme jaan aa gayi hai

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very true! Waiting for aparichit since so long! Btw congrats reva for d new IF rank :-) i was used to seeing ur name in green, but red suits too:-) congo!
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

CONGRATS SWEETY...UR A IF-Rockerz NOW
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My Dream came true!!!!
i just checked ur thread hoping for an update.
This whole weekend i have been keep checking ur thread...
Eager to read...
Finish writing????
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Finally.. U r back...

me waiting for update...😍
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part 26


Maan - aap usse 7 baje ready rahenn ko kah dena
papaji - ji beta ji

at the breakfast table papaji informs Geet abt the dinner & tells her to be ready by 7pm.
Geet - lekin papaji
Rano - acha baat hain u will get to know each other better
Geet wondered why did he call papaji
thai ji - where saree & go
Geet - mujhe kanhi nahi jana
papaji - woh teehk nahi hoga. Maan had himself called & requested me. Mainne haan kar di hain.
Geet - shaadi se phelen aisen
thai ji - uff.. ladkiyan shaadi se phelen milne ki liyen marthi rahthi hain.. aur tum..
Rano - yehi sab karne keliyen theen din taak tum nahi kana khaya tha
papaji - aakhir tumhari problem kya hain
thai ji - kuch nahi .. Geet ko main khud ready karon ghi
Geet made a grumpy face & went back to her room. The whole day she spent in the bed wondering whether it is a good idea to go for dinner. She definitely can't say anything to him & she can't even stop herself from falling for him. The more time she spend with him the more it was difficult for her to detach & think independently. & then if something goes wrong every one just expects her to forget him.. even thats wat he expects. How could he!!! the thought itself brought tears in her eyes.


Some part of her wanted to be with him. Their close moments, his possessiveness, the way he claims her. Their passion.. just the thought of it made her breathless.. even more reason not to be close, she warned herself.


In the evening when thai ji came to get her ready Geet pretended to be ill.
Thai ji - beta aabhi hum Maan ko kya kahen ge?
Geet was irritated .. just tell him I am not well.. every one seem to always only worry abt him. No one.. no one really cares abt me.
Rano - teehk teehk hain.. if ur unwell.. u rest ..papaji will call him & talk to him.

Papaji called Maan
papaji - beta Geet ke tabyat abhi bhi teehk nahi hain
Maan got worried - kya huwa ussen ?
Papaji - kamzori hain
Maan - aaj hospital gayeen thi kya?
Papaji - nahi nahi she was at home
now Maan really got worried.

Later at the evening Maan came around to meet her. She was on her lapy catching up with her mails & chatting. Least she expected was Maan walking at this hr. She closed her lapy & stood up at once. Maan walked straight to her & hugged her tightly. He was feeling so guilty abt her health. His hug was warm not his usual sensuous she could feel the concern in his every touch. He caressed her back softly .. tum teehk hona? He softly whispered in her ears.. his voice was dipped in sorrow
She nodded her head falling every passing sec deeply in love with that voice
He cupped her face & his thumb softly caressed her cheek.. looking meaningfully into those eyes. How could she not fall for those eyes.. that concern. Her eyes all was filled with her struggles of fighting with emotions. Her willingness to trust, her fear of lust but not of love.. with all the emotions it still was filled with passion. Her eyes also told a story of past heartache and mistrust of her emotions. The sad thing was they barely knew each other but wanted to know it all, but not realizing all it takes was time to know more abt each other.

He reluctantly realized her from his hold, she couldn't take her eyes of his classy look. She noticed the tall and elegant Maan clad in a beautiful black Armani tuxedo that clung to his every muscle in a way that took her breath away. She couldn't take her eyes off him, as he moved little away to sit next to her. When he leaned closer to her to take her hands into his & slowly raised them to meet his lips , she knew she would never return to normal that day..after that moment. And her feelings for him had grown deeper just by that smile, that soft caress. How did he do that..every time all the time she wondered. But she promised herself not to get carried away.

Maan - tum rest karlo, hum dinner ke liyen phir kabhi jayen gen
like she was in any position to refuse to wat ever he said.. had he just insisted she would have obliged delightfully. He sat their by her side for a while, he was in no mood to leave her like this. Thai ji came & served him coffee. She eyed Geet to go with him. Geet ignored & tried to maintain her lie of not feeling well, though part of her just wanted to go out with him. It had been a while since they had spent time together. It was all so fine & OK.. papa - mama had also agreed to it was all so perfect but her stupid fear & more of hurt heart that held back. Thai ji gave up & left then alone.

Maan slowly leaned closer & kissed her forehead.. jaan I have to get going.. I am already late.
Without a word she leaned over & hugged him. She could smell his strong masculine perfume
she inhaled sharply falling in a trance & hugged him closer for that. He smiled & shrugged, his heart felt at peace. He looked at Geet again, he stooped hesitated & brought his face to hers, kissed her. He pulled away a moment, then kissed her again. She probably just forget all abt her fears & surrendered completely for that brief moment.

It was late.. almost dinner time, papa ji offered him to have dinner. He didn't want to refuse but then he had to. He pleaded sorry & left little later than 9pm. Every one at home was not happy with geets decision of not going with Maan for dinner to add upto misery rajji screamed watching TV... di di di.. jiju...TV main.. all of them left their meal half way though & rushed to see the live news from some event. Geets eyes popped out to see Maan charismatically walking the red carpet & the media questioning him all abt his new ventures. The reporters indirectly hinted ..questioned him for being late, he ignored it. Geet hide her face..
the reporters questioned him.. why he was alone for the event, where was his fiancee. Maan preferred to ignore that question.. it was too personal in nature.
Anther reporter irritated him .. is it true u broke up with ur fiancee for ur college love.
Every one at the home was fuming at the reporter now.
Papaji wondered how could they even say something like this.

Darji - that was so baseless. Kasien kasien baat karthen yeh log.
Rano - yeh log tho baat ka batangad bana dethen hain
papaji - phelen bhi yahi huwa hoga
darji - uff yeh media walen
Thai ji was really pissed off. She looked angrily at Geet - agar tum jaathi Maan beta ke saat aaj tho, yeh sab nahi hota. Lekin tumhe tho aapni zid padi hain na

Maan just refused to answer the reporters & walked straight in. Geet could clearly notice his irritated face, she was really guilty. She felt horrible. He wanted to take her for an event. This would have been so odd for him, answering all those people. All because of her. She ran into her room & cried.. cried hiding her face in the pillow, under the sheets. She felt forlorn. She hated herself. He wanted to her to be with him, he respected their relation. He was not ashamed. But all she could give him in return was embarrassment. All those fingers lifted on their relationship today because she didn't make it to the function. Ek bar to kaha hota.. she cried hugging his snap. Itna impt event & he was least concern, he was all the while worried only abt her health. She just hated herself for being so mean. Daadi ma ko kasien lagen ga.. oh God she felt miserable.

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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yey... U r back!!!!!

Me dancing...

Dhinka Chika..
Dhinka Chika..

Update sooon...

Waiting...since long time...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh loved it to the max !! 😃

So Geet will come and surprise Maan..wow can't wait!
Thanks di..do update soon plzzz
Edited by radiant_raisa - 14 years ago

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