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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan, when r v Getting the next update? Waiting.
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thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments
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ho dear u r updating..

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Originally posted by: febinyusuff

ho dear u r updating..

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Reading deewangi and waiting😳
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realy realy superb update didi...waitin fr next part.continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 25

Maan eyes was restlessly looking for his jaan. He knew she was still angry with him. He could do anything to make her feel better. It was his mistake, he misunderstood her. He never thought how hurt she was. He was really sorry & mam was in no mood to accept his plea.


papaji noticed maans restlessness ..
anu immediately covered it up.. Geet kanha hain
papaji - beta Geet kamren main.. jaake mill lo
maans expression was worth watching.. like being caught. Anu got up & pulled Maan along. He didn't have to but portrayed it so. Maan couldn't thank him enough. Raji walked them to the room. Maan already seem to remember his way. Anu teased him. Maan rolled his eyes. As they walked inside the room she immediately kept the pillow away that she was hugging to, least she expected was Maan walking into her room. Raji giggled seeing her amused. Geet frowned at her & warned her.
Raji held maans hand & pulled him in front..yeh lo.. aapki jiji
Maan mocked - jiji hogi tumhari.. meri tho biwi hain
Geet shot main a glare
Maan corrected himself.. hone wali
she twisted her lips & turned away.
Raji giggled again & gaped at her jiji & jiju
there was an odd silence. Anu immediately turned to raji..
anu - raji mujhe aapka hawali dehkna hain
raji promptly ..chaliyen

Maan stood staring at her until they left & then immediately came close to her. She inched away from the end of the bed where he came close to..it was huge double bed, that created a huge space between them. He sighed & went around the bed & came to the other end. She knotted her brows & looked at him coming around.. she slide her bump cutely to the other end. Frowning & making a cute angry face. He pretended to go around & came back immediately towards ..her she was caught off guard.. he pinned her against the pillow. She blinked randomly getting scared.. with his sudden action.. she looked at her rooms door that was wide open & then looked at him.. who was almost lying on her in her room.. on her bed.. pinning her.. & the door was wide open. She gulped hard.. her voice was caught in her throat. He smirked naughtily... looking into those beautiful now scared ..little frowning though slowly drowning into him. She shivered as she watched, frightened & fascinated at the same time. He didn't say or move he just tantalized her being so close fanning her lips with his breath..

She wanted to warn him but her lips felt paralyzed by the thought of his touch & she couldn't think anything except how it felt to be kissed by him. She suddenly realized she was angry with him.. she pulled her hand & covered her lips.. trying hard to move out of his grip.. it only made him fall more on her, pressing her further under him. Geet sucked in a breath..as those dangerous dark eyes fixed on her. Her eyes slid to his lips.. & back to his eyes. Her breathing stopped & they stared at each other. The tension between them shifted & morphed into something different more passionate.
Her lips trembled
Maan koi aa jayega
aane do
mama..aa jaa
he inched closer..
thai ji..
his lips almost brushed hers..
before she could part it to say anything.. he softly kissed them. She closed her eyes in anticipation. He softly lingered ' sorry.. he said again.. kissing again.. very softly. She inched closer lost in his touch. Her heart was thundering, her palms were sweating but she forced herself to focus .. she pushed him away.. snapping.. trying to raise. He held her wrist & pulled her back to the bed. She almost fell on him.. she swallowed hard & moved away holding her dupatta. Jaan sorry
she wondered why that word melted her so much. She tried to look angry..the blush on her face said it other way..& it was pretty evident to him.
Jaan '
before he could say anything they heard thai ji walking in.
he immediately straighten himself, Geet immediately pulled the spread covering herself until neck.
Thai ji - beta dinner lag gayen hain
Maan - ji
thai ji came around Geet & helped her raise.
Maan held her from the other side. She promptly shifted her weight away from his side & made a deliberate effort to inch away. He tucked his hand under her dupatta around her waist & pulled her closer. She frowned .. something he enjoyed.


After the dinner. Maan walked her to the room. She was still not talking to him.
Maan - jaan can I take u for dinner tomorrow
Geet - mujhe aapke saat kanhi nai jana
Maan - plz I promise to make it up to u
she kept quiet.
Maan - jaan
she was no where listening to him.
He couldn't persuade her.. as it was getting late & anu had already called him twice from the hall.
He halfheartedly left.

Next day he called her in the morning..
Maan - jaan I will pick u at 7pm for dinner
Geet - kaha na mujhe aapke saat kanhi nahi jana..
Maan - r u still angry?
Geet - nahi ..i just don't want all this before wedding
he was taken a back.
Geet - waisen bhi mama papa will not allow
since when it all that mattered he thought.
maan - pehlen tho aisen nahi tha
geet - tab ki baat alag thi.. she wanted to say.. u never removed ur ring then.
maan - aab kya badal gaya.. we are gettig married in a weeks time
geet - shaadi ke baat chellen ge
maan - tum aisen kyun bol rahi ho
geet - mujhe yeh sab teehk nahi lagtha
He didn't say anything. After the call he immediately called papaji
papaji was surprised with his call
Maan - papaji.. I wanted to take Geet for a dinner tonight.
Papaji - haan beta zaroor
Maan - aap usse 7 baje ready rahenn ko kah dena
papaji - ji beta ji
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precap
wonder if she will go for the dinner
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NEXT PART 26-
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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