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He was not ashamed but all she could give him in return was embarrassment. All those fingers lifted on their relationship today because she didn't make it to the function. Ek bar to kaha hota.. she cried hugging his snap. Itna impt event & he was least concern, he was all the while worried only abt her health. She just hated herself for being so mean. Daadi ma ko kasien lagen ga.. oh God she felt miserable.

Maan called her late at night after the party. She didn't have a face to talk to him. She really felt ashamed of her act & he spoke to her like nothing happened. She was scared he might be disturbed abt the media but he sounded more concerned abt her health. She didn't say much but answered in in yes or no's.


Next day he called to check on her, she just broke down & started crying. He didn't know wat exactly was disturbing her. He got really worried..jaan kya baat hain.
Every time he said jaan she just felt like crying more.
Jaan plz rona band karo.
Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?
She sobbed silently trying to hide her cry..but her hiccups gave way.
Plz.. stop it.. he was getting restless.. he would have shouted.. he almost did.. she immediately became silent... He closed his eyes..calming himself. He really didn't know how to handle her when she cried.
He could make out she was still in tears.
Kya hum mil sakten hain aaj he urged. It was more of a plea. He knew he could console her better if he was with her. She was in no position to refuse. She herself wanted to meet him. She nodded ..
he repeated again..plz jaan kya hum aaj mil sakten hain?
He really sounded desperate now.
Thats when she realized she was nodding her head. She immediately softly said yes.
Can I pick u up
umm
kitne bajen?
Hospital ke baad
teehk hain
she wondered how on earth was she going to spend all these hrs without seeing him.

Geet got ready to go to hospital. Every one in the home was bit disappointed with her decision of not going with Maan last night for the party. As such she was guilty & all this glares & disappointed look only made her feel verse. She half halfheartedly grab an apple & went to Sanjeevni.


Maan caught up with his work but some part of him still wondered wat would have gone wrong. He was already hurt her enough & now again he has gone & done something that has made her cry. It was the first time in his whole life he has remained so disturbed on personal level.


Afternoon Sanjeevini
Geet was sitting the cafeteria & staring at her sandwich.
Amy came & took the sandwich..agar tune nahi kahana hain tho main kha letha hoon
she smiled weakly.. khalo
amy was taken a back. Had it been another day she would have fought back, pulling & snatching the sandwich. Geet got up to leave. He held her hand & pulled her back.. kya baat hain.
She blinked her lashed couple of times to hide her tears..kuch bhi tho nahi
amy - main ne socha tha ki, every thing was sorted between u both
she nodded
amy - phir ?
She didn't know how to explain her insecurity & now that led to all this media problems for him again. She just hated herself.
Ridz came & placed her coat on the table. She looked at amy & questioned lifting her brows. He seemed as clueless as she was.
Ridz squeezed geets hand softly caringly - kya huwa bolna
she cried out ..he wanted me to come for that event last night
amy - woh page 3 wala
Geet - umm
ridz - u didn't go.. & all this media thing.. & don't tell me he is blaming u for all that.
Geet looked down feeling pathetic.. nahi.. how she wish he blamed her.. atleast she would have felt less miserable
amy - then
she kept quite
ridz - is ur parents again worried abt the media stuff
Geet - nahi nahi
I didn't go with him because..I was feeling scared to get close to him.
Amy - why? U don't like him?
Geet - I love.. she paused & hugged ridz.
Amy & ridz patted her back.
Geet - I don't know how to tell him or ask him wat he feels. I don't know anything abt him.
Mujhe dar lagta hain.
Amy - dar kis baat ka pagli
Geet - wat if somethings goes wrong again
amy - nothing will go wrong, just relax yaar
Geet - tum log nahi samjhogen
ridz - asien kyun bol rahi hain
Geet - u know amy loves u & he knows u love him.. I don't know anything abt wat he feels.
Ridz - offcourse he loves u yaar.
Geet - thats why he just broke the engagement. He didn't even think abt me once.
Amy - tumne bhi tho break kiya tha
Geet - we were not that close then
amy - how close exactly are u now?
Geet looked away, she really didn't want to discuss that. She was guilty that she lead to his defame.
Ridz - give ur self a break sweety. Just for once give ur relationship a chance.
Amy - tum log dono baten kam break up jyada karthen ho
Geet really felt odd. Thats wat she has seen them doing then why was it so odd abt her & maan, just because it is an arrange marriage. She knew they won't understand her. No one seem to understand her. she just tried to keep herself aloof rest of the day.


Nothing seemed to reduce her guilt. She didn't know how she was going to face him. When Maan came to pick her up she was quiet. He came & hugged her warmly.
Maan - how r u feeling now?
he asked moving to run his hand gently over her cheek. She liked that, his hand felt warm and also made her feel a special. A warmth inside, the amazing feeling of being loved something she was craving for. He began to softly stroke her hair looking at her in love & care. She smiled back weakly, a light blush on her face as she continued to bask in the lovely warm, content feeling she felt when he held her close to him in his strong arms though the guilt was just killing her deep inside.
Geet - better now
he sighed in relief. His gesture, his concern just made her feel more quiet.
He walked her to the car. She silently followed. He got back behind the wheels & waited for her to settle. He watched her closely, she looked disturbed. He tried to be at his best behavior. He was really scared deep inside, he knew she had all the right to be angry on him for breaking the engagement, when their relationship had already gone way beyond just exchanging rings.

She remained silent even after they had coffee & took a walk along the park. She answered him in umm.. haan.. . While walking back towards the car their heart was feeling heavy. They sat in the car. He settled behind the wheels. His hand reached towards the ignition. He turned the key on & then immediately turned it off. She looked at him & he exhaled sharply. He turned to look at her. He raised his arm to lift her chin so he could look her in the eyes. She took one last sniffle before looking down. Tears welled down..before even he could say anything. She hugged him & cried.. I am sorry..meri wajahse u had to face all that. His hands where stuck in mid air before hugging her. He was shocked with her sudden act. It took him couple secs before he could understand wat she was trying to say while sobbing continously, wetting the cotton of his shirt & part of his arm.
Maan - tumhare wajah se nahi jaan ..he tried to console her
she inched away...fearing his anger. She looked down on the car floor.. I didn't want to come with u anywhere before marriage. Her throat went dry when she said that & tears just continued to flow. she wanted the world to end before she could even had to face him now.
he was angry... not because of wat she said but because of her drawing away. Because of the sudden shiver he felt losing her warmth around him.
Jaan tumhari galthi nahi hain
she looked at him in shock
Jantha hoon tum mujhe se naraz thi.
She wondered he didn't even mind in fact he seemed justifying her.
He lifted her chin her again.. main tumhari jagha hota tho pata nahi main kya kartha? her eyes twinkled in with simple sentence he said. her cheeks lit up in deep blush
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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AFTER SO LONG

ME FIRST
i AM SO HAPPY
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Beautiful part!!!

But why the Family Member's are giving that look ...when they are the main reason.

For the first time ridz has talked sense than increasing her insecurity or confusing her.

Her insecurity is rising & falling ...wonder when it will come to Zero.

How Maan ll react now???

loved the update

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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lovely update di...
geet told maan that she din want to go with him nywea b4 marriage😲...wots gonna happen nw???
she is repenting now on her decision...!!!
but it was a lovely update...
geet is just insecure...she does nt want to go thru all that pain n hurt that she went thru during those events that took place...she's right...she just wants to be sure of all this...!!!
hope maan understands her this time n does not end up getting angry on her...
oww so he was not angry on her...thank god nw aalll iz well...😳
update sooon😉
Edited by bansipatel - 14 years ago
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Loved the update Di... Awesome!!!!

Awww poor Geet..crying n crying 😭 😭 😭 N she thinks that nobody can understand her situation...not even Armaan n Ridhima...

Loved the way Maan shouted at her to make her quiet 😳 😳 😳 He cant see her crying!!!!

Finally..she confessed it... But I'm scared to c Maan's reaction as the last line says that Maan gets angry 😕 😕

Thanx for the lovely update Di...
Cont sooon

------edited------

Thanx for the addition of last few lines Di...

I was really wondering if Maan cud really get angry at her!!!!! But U made me really happy by Maan's reaction!!!! He's such a sweetheart to undrstand her condition so nicely...

Love U Di... Cont sooon...!!!
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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