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Part 8

Is pyaar ko kya naam du



At other side

Adi: sirrr

Sir ko kya hua hai

Maan ki nazre nhi ht rhi thi geet se wo kaise aur kisi ki baat sunta

Annie came beside the maan

Anie: sshhh

Adi: sir ko kya hua hai, kuch kh kyun nhi rhe hai

Annie: relax, ab khenge

(In loud voice at the near of ear)

Bhaiii

Maan came back from dreams and shout on the annie

Maan: ye kya mjak hai anie

(bechara adi to drr ke mare kapne laga)

Daadi see the all act and came near towards the maan

Daadi: bete kya hua hai.

Aap itna gussa kyun lag rhe hai

Maan: kuch nhi daadi maa

Pta nhi kya ho gya tha

Annie: sory bhai

Maine aapko khwabo se bahar nikal diya isliye

Daadi: kaunse khwab

Maan: kuchj nhi dadimaa

Ye anie yuhi bakwas kr rhi hai

Anie: ha daadi maa ab to bhai ko meri baatein bakwas hi lagegi

Making a baby face

Adi: hehheheheh

Maan: adi

Adi: sory sir



Maan: hmmm

Daadi: bte itna gussa

Maan: wo

Daadi: bte ab chliye mahurat ka time ho gya hai

Maan: hmmm

Maan take steps towards geet

Maan held her hands with pure love and care

Geet mein tumse kuch kha chahta hu

Meera: jiju abhi khena hai

Hume hi kh dijiye

Hm kh denge geet ko

Maan: mujhe geet se hi khena hai

Geet: maan abhi , is waqt


Maan: ha geet, phle bi khehna chahata tha, pr us waqt mere

khne se jyada krna jaroori tha

Daadi came near to the both

Daadi: bte, jo bi khehna hai baad mein kh dena geet ko

Abhi muhrat ka time ho rha hai

Maan: nhi daadimaa, phle hi bhut late ho chukka hai, aur nhi

Daadi: thik hai bte, jaise aapki marzi

Meera dev aap aaye na hamare sath

Dev: ji daadimaa

Maan held her hands and came between the hall


Geet: maan asa kya hai jo aap khehna chahte hai,

Maan jldi khiye na, mujhe darr lg rha hai

Maan pressed her lips with his fingers'

Maan: chup bilkul chup


All lights off

Spot light highlighted the moment



Maan distant his finger from her lips

Maan: geet jb maine tumse shaadi ka fasla liya tha, toh

tumse pucha tk nhi

(geet kuch khan chahti hai, lekin)

Mein janta hu geet tum kya khan chahti ho, mera fasla shi

tha

yhi na

She nodded

Pr geet fir bhi mujhe puchna chahiye tha

Geet: maan asa nhi hai


Maan: geet mein janta hu, us waqt mere liye sbse upar

hamara pyaar tha,

Aur aaj bhi hai,

Us waqt bs mein apne pyaar ko naam dena chahte tha,

Tumse puch tk nhi ska

Geet: maan , aap nhi

"Hum" apne pyaar ko naam dena chahte the

Maan smiled

Aur aapke hr fesle mein aapki geet aapke sath hai

Mein us waqt bhi aapke sath thi,

Aaj bhu hu maan

Maan: mein janta hu geet, tum hamesha se mere sath ho

"Tum kb meri zindagi mein shamil ho gyi,

Kb in saanso ka hissa bn gyi,

Is dil ko pta hi nhi chla

Geet tumse kb meri zindagi jud gyi,

Iska mujhe ehsaas hi nhi huya,

Bs aaj mein itna janta hu,

MAAN GEET ke bina adhura hai,

Uske pyaar ,

Uske sath,

Ke bina wo kuch bi nhi hai"

Tears fall down from her eyes

Maan: geet ye kya , mujhe laga tha tumhe acha lagega

Geet: maan

He understand her feeling very well

Maan: geet aaj mein sbke samne tumse kuch khehna chahta

hu

Tumhari marzi janana chahta hu,

Maan bent down on his knees and take her hand in his hand


Geet: ye aap sbke samne kya kr rhe hai


Maan: geet maine abhi tumse kuch kha tha

(geet chup ho jati hai)

Maan: Will you marry me

Again'

She silent

Maan: geet bolo na, mein tumhare jwab ka intzaar kr rha hu

She nodded

Maan: geet ase nhi

Geet see in his eyes "fir kaise"

Maan: jaise maine kaha geet

Geet: maan,

Mera jwab "haa" hai

He stands and says

"I LOVE U GEET"

She blushed

Maan: geet, kaho na

You love me or not

Geet: maan sbke samne

Annie: common bhabhi

Kho na

Bhai ne itne pyaar se prupose kiya hai


Meera: geet common yaar


Anurag: I am impressed maan singh khurana

Mujhe nhi ptya tha aap itne romantic bhi hai

Tani: geet

Geet see in his eyes and after this look down

Maan: geet meri aankhon mein dekhe

He cupped her face from his fingers


Maan: jb maan singh khurana sbke samne kh skta hai, to

mrs

khurana kyun nhi

Geet: I love you maan

I love you 2



She blushed more and hugged his tightly

maan(whispers in her ear): sbke samne I love you khne me

itna sarma rhi thi,

aur ab to sbke samne gale lga liya,

Waha meri mishti

He hugged her more tightly'

Abhi kitne roop baki hai aapke dekhne meri mishti

Lights will open

Daadi: bte hum sb bhi yhi the

Both take steps backward

Dono dur ho jate hai

At other side

Pinki: wow sir kitne romantic hai

Hume to pta hi nhi tha

Adi: heheheheh

Ha pinki

Annie came near

Annie: hume bhi kaha pta tha

Adi:hehehehe



Precap: marriage

Kiski

Hamare maaneet ki

And one twist

Guess kr skte ho to karo

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
wow me first to comment
i loved ur update


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#43
no guesses rite now dear

waiting for ur next update
great job dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Awesome...❤️
lvd it...
cntnue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Woww.. nice update..
TWIST!!!??
kyaa hai yaar.. wish kuch zyada bura naa ho
Continue soon :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
its awesome update.loved it.keep it up

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MAANEET IF'IS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DU

part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1712902/maaneet-if-is-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-du?pn=11


PART 9

He cupped her face from his fingers

Maan: jb maan singh khurana sbke samne kh skta hai, to mrs khurana kyun nhi

Geet: I love you maan

I love you 2

😉

She blushed more and hugged his tightly


maan(whispers in her ear): sbke samne I love you khne me itna sarma rhi thi,

aur ab to sbke samne gale lga liya,

Waha meri mishti😊

He hugged her more tightly'

Abhi kitne roop baki hai aapke dekhne meri mishti

Lights will open

Daadi: bte hum sb bhi yhi the

Both take steps backward

Dono dur ho jate hai

At other side

Pinki: wow sir kitne romantic hai

Hume to pta hi nhi tha

Adi: heheheheh

Ha pinki😆

Annie came near

Annie: hume bhi kaha pta tha

Adi:hehehehe

😆

Daadi: ab bte shaadi ki rasam suri kare

Maan:hmmm

He looked at geet who was still smiling.


😊

In mandap

Pandit: jaimala ki rasam suri karte hai

Phle dulhan vr ko jaimala phnayengi

Maan rise for jaimala, the exchange for garlands'

She had to rise on tiptoe to reach him

Tani (in lovely voice): onu

Anurag: hmmm😛

Tani: onu, maan ji ko niche utaro

Anu: ha

Dev: anurag wha mt dekh

Aur kya ha kr rha hai

Anu: wo mein'😳

She again tries to reach him

geet(mummers): inhe bhut mja aa rha hai na mujhe pareshan karke

geet turn her face

maan try to look in her eyes

Maan(mummers):lagta hai meri mishti naraz ho gyi

So,

He bends down willingly for her.

The exchange of garlands interestingly done between both of them.

After this

The wedding ceremony began with a small offering to the god of fire.

Maan held her hand.


Geet: maan , hath chodiye, koi dekhenga to kya sochenge.

Maan: kya sochenge

Yhi na maan apni geet se kitna pyaar karta hai

Geet: maan

Pandit: kanyadhan ke liye kaun aayenga

Geet look in his eyes

Maan again held her hand and say

Geet udhr dekho

Geet's dad: ji hum

Then papaji came forward to kanyadan . This was the emotional part as papaji gave her hand to his.

She cold and almost numb, He held her hands with pure love and care.

Maan: geet

Maan ka naam lena hi geet ke liye kafi tha

Geet: hmm

She control her feelings

(Geet us waqt apne maa aur papaji ko hug krna chahti thi, unse mafi mangna chahti thi, unhe batana chahati thi usne aap sbko kitna miss kiya hai, pr ')

Pr khushi uske chehre pe saaf jalak rhi thi

Geet: thank you

Meri shaadi mein jo kami thi , wo bhi aapne puri kr di

Maan:phle shaadi to ho jane do

She smiled.

Aur rhi thank you ki baat to geet , uski koi jaroort nhi hai.

Hamare beech thanks khne ki koi jaroort nhi hai.

She nodded.

When the pandit asked them to rise for sath pheras, he held her and supported her with his compassion.

They walked around the fire.

While pandit explained and narrated the sath vachans, their soul spoke to each other.

It felt with every phera she was losing her self again completely to him.

Now they sat together again,

geet (mummers): thanks babaji, inhe meri zindagi mein bejne ke liye.

Pandit: ab aap inhe mangalsutr pehnaiye


Pandit asked him to fill his ring with the sindoor and fill her mang.

Pandit: Shaadi puri huyi, ab aap dono apne bdo se aashirwad lele.👏

Both rise for taking aashirwaad.

Firstly, both touched daadi feet.

She blessed the both.

Daadi:jite rhiye bte, and kissed them on forehead.

After this, both take aashirwaad from geet dad and mom.

Papaji: khush raho.

Geet hug the papaji and cry

Papaji: bte, aaj to itna khushi ka din hai, ek aansu nhi,

He wipes her tears.

Mom: sada khush raho.

Geet hug the mom,

Mom: beta sada khush raho, aur ho sake to hume maaf krdo

Geet: maa, galti meri thi aapki nhi.

Daadi: ab purani baatein chodiye, aur enjoy kijiye

She nodded

Daadi: ab aap dono jldi se tyaar hoke aaiye

Byi party abhi baki hai

Both smiled.

Dono jane lagte hai

Daadi: ek minute

Maan: ky hua daadimaa

Daadi: annie idher aaiye

Annie: ji daadimaa

Daadi: aap geet ko le jaiye

Aur jldi se tyaar krke laiye

Bs baaki ke guest aate honge

Annie: ji

Daadi: bte aap kisi aur room mein tyaar ho jaiye

Maan: daadimaa

Daadi: bte party abhi hai, kl nhi

Aap smjh rhe hai na

Annie smiled

Isi bich, itne saaro mein se ek awaaz aati hai

Mr.: ye kya geet, tum mujhe kaise bhuk sakti ho, maan se phle hq bnta hai mera

He come forward and hugs geet.

And say: tum kaisi ho

Precap: mr. kaun ho skta hai

And

dance

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
shadi ho gayee...aab..aham aham...kab hogi?? blush blush***********
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awesome ... loved d update ...

par give little longer updates ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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