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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maaneet ff is pyaar ko kya naam du


part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44584142�


Part 11

Geet: maan aap ase kya dekh rhe hai.

Maan hugs her from the back, sliding his hand on her stomach. Geet felt the shiver.

Maan: tumhe geet, jitni baar bhi tumhe dekhta hu to asa lagta hai phli baar dekh rha hu.

Geet smiles and turn and slides her hand around his neck. He gave her a small peck on her cheek.

She realized.

geet(in loud voice): maan aap yha

maan: achanak tumhe kya hua geet

geet: aap jaiye yha se, annie aati hogi

maan pressed her lips from his index fingers.

Maan: chup bilkul chup.

She parted her lips to say something, he doesn't remove his finger.

He didn't want to say anything at that moment; he just wanted to feel the every minute.

He removed his fingers and placed his lips on them.

In hall

Daadi: annie, ye dono kaha rh gye,

Saare guest aa gye hai, ab unse milna chahte hai

Annie: daadimaa, mein jake dekhti hu

Daadi: hmmm

Anurag bte maan to aapke sath the na, wok ha rh gye

Anu: daadimaa, ha wo mere sth tha, pr usse ek phone krna tha, bs wo aata honga

Daadi: thik hai bte

In maaneet room

She moaned as his lips brushed pass her lips to her cheek.

Maan could feel the rising heartbeats between them; it felt like it's the loudest thing round, geet whispered "maan".

He inched more closely. But they had to break apart, when they heard a knock on the door.

It was annie''''''..

Annie: bhabhi

Geet: ha annie

She broke out of his grip; he grabbed her and tucked her into his strong arms.

Annie: bhabhi, aapka sb niche intzaar kr rhe hai, chliye.

Geet: annie tum chalo mein aati hu

Maan please chodiye na annie mujhe bula rhi hai

Maan says no

Maan: phle tum mujhe kiss karo

Geet: what?😳

Abhi to kiya maan

Maan: wo to maine kiya😊

Annie: bhabhi door to kholiye

Geet : annie mein bs 2 minute mein aayi, tum jayo mein aa rhi hu

Annie: thik hai bhabhi

Annie mummers ye bhabhi ko kya hua hai door tk nhi khola

Geet: maan

Maan: ha geet mein sun rha hu

Tum kaho

Geet (in angry voice😡): maan aap chod rhe ho ya nhi

Maan: nhi'

Aur waise bhi hamare pass 2 min hai😛

😆

Geet: kya

Maan aap

Maan (in lovely voice): mein kya geet

Geet: maan aap pyaar se nhi manege

To thik hai

Maan: tum mujhe dra rhi ho

Geet: aapko kya lagta hai

Maan: ki mujhe tum dra rhi ho

He tightened his grip.

Geet: shi lagta hi

Aap chod rhe hai ya nhi, ya mein daadimaa ko bulau

Maan loose his grip, and stand in anger.

😊

She came from behind and kissed his cheek.

Her touch was so soothing, he almost forget own anger.

She ran to the door.

Geet: maan aap aa rhe hai ya nhi😛

She left the place.

He smiled.😊

Geet tum bhi na

She stands near the door.

Geet: mein kya maan

Maan: abhi btata hu

In hall

Mrs. Chopra: savitriji, aapki bahu aur pote nhi dekh rhe hai.

Daadi; bs wo dono aate honge

Aap aaiye na

Mrs. Chopra: ji

Daadi: annie bte aap unhe bulane gyi thi na

Annie: ji

Daadi: to wo kaha hai

Annie: bhabhi ne kaha bs wo aa rhi hai

Dekhiye daadimaa bhai bhabhi aa gye

Both came forward to the daadi and bent down touches her feet.

Daadi: khush rhiye bte

Aap dono kaha rh gye the, yha sb aapke baare me puch rhe hai, hum unhe kya jwab de.

Maan: daadimaa, mujhe ek imp. Phone call krn atha, bs ussi mein time lg gya

Daadi: bte hr waqt kaam

Maan: daadimaa sorry

Daadi: hmmm

Aur geet bte aapko

Geet: ji wo mein

Daadi: ab ye sb chodiye, aur guest se jake miliye

Geet: ji


Note: sorry 4 changing the precap

But don't worry wo time bhi jldi aayenga

Hope u like the update

Do comments


Precap: dance

And sr

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WADA KARKE TODNA ...🤢YEH ACHHI BAAT NAHI HAI...😭 ANYWAYS, AABKI BAAR MAAN BABU GEET KO PAKAD KE RAKHHNA CHODNA NAHI 😉....HE HE HE..😆..NICE ONE PRIYA,👏 LOV U🤗

AARE ME 1ST 😛...CHALO IISHI BAAT PE DHINKA CHIKAA...😃👏⭐️
Edited by 810Kankana - 14 years ago

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