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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Woww.. awesome..👏👏
luved it..
Continue soon..
n thanks for d PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
brilliant update dear
loved the update
think geet is confused about chosing her dress
so she is avoiding maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ...

loved part 3 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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continue soon waiting for more👏
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Part 4

Maaneet ff is pyaar ko kya naam du

In maaneet room

Geet apne dress ko leke confuse thi

Kya phne

Aur usse se jyada is bat pe itni jldi tyaar hone ko kyun kha daadimaa ne

Maan slowly came beside her and slipped his fingers into hers. She pulled her hand away and looked away.

Maan mummers isse kya hua , subh tk to sb kuch thik tha , achanak kya hua

Maan: geet

No response

Maan: kya hua hai, tum mujhse naraz ho kya

Geet firse koi jwab nhi deti

Maan held her from shoulders, she instantly moved away from his touch''..she looked at his grip on her shoulders with a disapproving look.

He reluctantly removed his hand from the shoulder


Maan: geet jbtk tum mujhe batayungi nhi to mujhe pta kaise chalenga



Geet: hey babaji,waise to ye khte hai ,mere bina khe ye meri saari baatein smjhte hai,

Aur ab

Maan: geet meri taraf dekho

Geet nhi dekhti

Maan again said: plz geet

Geet; baat to ase kr rhe hai, jaise inhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

Maan touched her shoulders'

Maan: geet sch mein mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

She tried to move out

But he held her wrist and pulled to the bed. She almost fell on him


Maan: geet meri aankhon me dekho,

Geet look in his eyes

Geet ab mujhe batao , meri mishti mujhse naraz kyun hai

She doesn't spoke

Geet tum janti ho na, mein tumhe khudse naraz nhi dekh sakta

She swallowed hand and moved away helding her dupatta

Maan came from behind and hugged her

Maan: bolo na geet

She snapped out of his grip

Geet: maan apne mujhse kl raat ko kya vaada kiya tha

Maan mummers itni se baat ke liye itna gussa

He teased her

Maan: kaunsa vaada geet

And turn

Geet: ab kaunsa vaada?

Dekha babaji inhe koi farq hi nhi padta , kl raat ko mujhse khte hai "geet tumhara gift tumhe subh milenga"

Aur yha subh se saam hone ko aayi, aur gift ka kuch ata pata nhi hai

Maan: bs itni si baat geet

Geet: ye aapko itni si baat lagati hai, abhi batati hu

He held her by waist, inched closer to her.

Maan: batao na geet,

Kya batana chahti ho

Geet: wo mein'.

Maan: wo mein kya geet

Geet, wo mein'.

She blushed

Geet mummer geet control her self, to inse naraz hai

At other side

In hall

Daadi: annie aapne geet aur maan ko unke kpde diye, jo unhe abhi phnne hai

Annie: pr daadimaa wo to aap dene wali thi na

Daadi: humne aapko kaha tha

Annie: sorry daadimaa, mein thoda confuse ho gyi thi, mujhe laga aap hi dengi

Daadi: ye kya hai annie, itna km time hai,undono ko abhi tyaar bi hona hai

Annie again says sorry

Daadi: its ok beta, ab chaliye jldi aur jake unhe kapde deke aate hai, undono ke liye ye acha surprise hoga

In maaneet room

Maan: geet, me sun rha hu

He inched more closed

Geet kya hua

Geet: chodiye mujhe , mujhe aapse koi baat nhi krni hai

Maan: geet tum sch mein chahti ho, mein tumhe chod du

Geet: hmm...

Maan: to thik hai

He loose his grip

Jao geet

Geet mummers ye hai hi pure ke pure dust danav,

Maan: geet tumne kuch kaha

Geet: nhiii

Maan: geet

Geet( in angry voice): kya hai?

Maan: jane se phle aapna gift to dekhti jao, whi bed ki side wali table pe rkha hai

Geet take her gift and open it

Maan gifted a very beautiful blue color sari

Maan : gift kaisa laga

Geet: hmmm'..

Bhut acha , aapko jb pata tha to phle kyun nhi diya,

She put her hand around his neck

Maan: apni mishti ko pareshan krne me jo mja hai, wo kisi aur cheez mein kaha hai

Geet: really?

Maan: hmmm

Geet: to jaiye

Geet moved out



But he held her again by waist, inched closer to her. He tucked the hair falling on her face, behind her ear, and softly kissed on the nape of her neck, it sent a burning sensation to her, his gaze went to her lips .

He inched more closely. But they had to break apart, when they heard a knock on the door.

It was daadi'''.

Precap: guess the surprise

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey everone
mujhe aap sb se kuch ouchna hai
aap sbko pm milti hai ya nhi
btana mujhe

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update
but i havent recieved any pm
nxt time do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Part 5

Maaneet if

Is pyaar ko kya naam du

Maan : gift kaisa laga

Geet: hmmm…..

Bhut acha , aapko jb pata tha to phle kyun nhi diya,

She put her hand around his neck

Maan: apni mishti ko pareshan krne me jo mja hai, wo kisi

aur cheez mein kaha hai

Geet: really?

Maan: hmmm

Geet: to jaiye

Geet moved out

But he held her again by waist, inched closer to her. He

tucked the hair falling on her face, behind her ear, and softly

kissed on the nape of her neck, it sent a burning sensation

to

her, his gaze went to her lips .

He inched more closely. But they had to break apart, when

they heard a knock on the door.

It was daadi……….

Geet: maan gate pe knocks ho rha hai, mujhe chodiye jake

darwaza kholiye

Maan: geet

(Make a baby face)

Geet: maann, jaiye

(With angry voice)

Maan: hmmm

Maan opened the door with halfheartedly

Maan: daadimaa kuch kaam tha

Daadi: bte aap yuhi hume darwaze pe khade rakhenge ya

andher bi aane denge

Maan: aaye na daadimaa, ye koi puchne ki baat hai

Annie:bhai, puchane ki baat to nhi hai pr

Maan: pr kya?

Annie: pr bhai ye

Aap rashte se hatenge nhi to andher aayenge kaise

Kyun bhabhi

Geet nodded

Maan mummers abhi isse bhut mja aa rha hai na, baad mein

btata hu

Annie: bhai, kya soch rhe ho, kuch khena chahte ho

Maan: nhi

Daadi: to bte ab hume aane bi dijiye

Both enter in room

Annie: bhai ek baat bataiye

Maan: hmmm

Annie: bhai darwaza kholne me itna time

Maan: annieee

Annie: sorry bhai

Daadi: aap dono ye sb chodiye , hm jis kaam se aaye the wo

kaam batane dijiye

Geet: khiye na daadimaa

Daadi give a lehnga

Geet: daadimaa, ye kisliye

Annie: aur ye jewellery aapke liye

Geet: pr ye sb

Daadi: bte hmari ek khwaish hai , aur hm chahte hai aap

dono wo puri kare

Maan: daadimaa, aap bs khiye , hm wo puri jaroor karenge

Daadi: hm chahte hai aaj aap dono ki puri riti riwaz ke sath s

haadi hm sbke samne ho

Maan: pr daadimaa, hm dono ki shaadi to ho chuki hai na,

Fir ye dobara kyun

Daadi: bte, jis shaadi mein na mantr pde gye ho, na bdo ka

aashirwad ho, wo shaadi to adhuri rhti h na

Maan look towards geet

Wo us waqt geet ke unkhe lafz bhi smjh gya, uske dil me


kitni kasmksh (ulzan) chl rhi hai, wo daadi se kya khe, usse

phle wo kuch khti

Maan: pr daadimaa

Daadi: hm jante hai bte aap kya khan chahte hai, aur hm

smjhte bi hai, us waqt court marriage hi thik thi

Geet ki asi halat nhi thi ki wo…………………..

She paused for little time

Un sb baation ko chodiye, bs ab wo kriye jo hm chahte hai

(Maan geet ki aankhon mein khushi dekh skta tha,

Wo janta tha geet is waqt kitni khush hai)

Daadi: annie maan ko room se bahar leke jao, aur inhe inki

dress dedo

Maan: daadimaa, room se bahar kyun,

Ye mera room hai

Daadi: hm jante hai, pr abhi yha geet ko tyaar hona hai,

Kyun geet bte

Geet looks down, she blushed

Daadi: annie

Annie: ji daadimaa, chliye bhai, aap dulhe hai, chliye jldi se

tyaar ho jaiye


Khi asa na ho dulhan tyaar ho, aur dulhe ka kuch ata pata na

ho

Maan: annie, tujhe to mein batata hu, subh se dekh rha hu

Annie: bhabhi bchaiye mujhe

Geet: maan ye sb kya hai

Maan: maine kya kiya geet

Geet in sweet voice: maan (plz jaiye na)😊

Annie: wha bhabhi aapne ek baar kaha , aur bhai maan gaye

Maan give an angry look and left the place

😡

Daadi: annie ab aap phle maan ko dress dijiye jake, aur fir

khud bhi tyaar ho jiaye

Annie: ji daadimaa

Daadi: geet bte bus beautician abhi aate honge, tbtk aap

apni jewellery select kr lijiye

Geet: ji

Precap: doctor to maan: inki asi halat pichle one week se asi

hi hai,

Ye kuch bi react hi nhi kr rhi hai

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Yayy mee first
Woww luved it..
But ye precap.. m scared..
continue soon..

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