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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maaneet if

Is pyaar ko kya naam du

Part 2

Maan : geet mein bhi dekhta hu tum kbtk mujhse dur bhagti ho

After some time

Geet came out from the washroom


geet(self talk): thanks babaji wo yha nhi hai

khi unhe bura to nhi lg gya

pr babaji mein to mjak kr rhi thi

subh se unhone mujhe wish bhi nhi kiya hai

pr geet tunhe bhi kha kiya hai


maan come from behind and hug her





maan: acha to wo mjak tha

and rub his cheek to her


geet: maan daadimaa, hmara intzaar kr rhi hogi, aaj bhut late ho gye

geet turn and see his face


please maan chodiye

maan loose his grip



geet tried to moved out, he pulled her wrist and held her back . he turned her body to him and slowly pulled her back, it as so natural to just get carried away then he touched her ceek



geet: maan

maan: sshhh

his hand was warm. She closed her eyes blushing. His hands slowly slipped behind her ears

She chuckled, he long fingers caressed her scalp softly and then griping her hair pulled her closer to him. His other hand carnally grabbed around her waist. She touched her belly and almost stops breathing. He madly kissed her cheeks, shoulder, neck, ears. She clung on to him, crumbling his shirt harder in her fist, her eyes closed tightly.

geet(moaned): maan

maan: hmmm



daadi come across near to the maaneet room

daadi: maan bte

maan aur geet dono gbra jate hai

Both feel embarrass


Daadi: kya hua, aap dono ase kyu khade hai

Maan: kuch nhi daadimaa

Daadi: tu chaliye jldi se niche aaiye

Hm sb intzaar kr rhe hai


Geet :daadimaa, hm abhi aate hai

Daadi leave the room

Maan: tumhe bhut hassi aa rhi hai

Abhi batata hu

Geet: maan

Daadi

Maan turn

Maan: geet ruko

Geet leave the room

In hall

Daadi: aa gye aap dono

Annie: bhai, apne kitna time lga diya

Apko bhabhi ko lane beja tha, na ki khud wha rukne ke liye

Daadi: bs bi kriye annie

Waise maan bte itna time kaise lg gya


Maan: daadimaa

Daadi:ok ,ok hm kuch nhi puchte

Geet bte hmare pass aaiye

Geet : ji daadimaa

Daadi: bte ye aapke liye

Annie: wow daadimaa, kitna beautiful necklace hai

Aur bangles to aur bhi sunder hai

Kyu bhai

Maan: hmmm

Geet: daadimaa iski kya jaroort thi

Daadi: jaroort kaisi nhi hai, aaj hm sbke liye itna khushi ka din hai, chliye ab hume phnke dekhaiye

Annie: bhai bhabhi ki mdad to karo

Maan: hmmm



Precap: party

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely ...do con

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff
and great update
waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...

plz ,... yaar wen evr u give an update ... edit n add d pg no. n d part no. on the title tab ...

so that it becomes easy 4 us to read n follow ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 2



Maaneet ff- is pyaar ko kya naam du

Part 3

In hall

Daadi: aa gye aap dono

Annie: bhai, apne kitna time lga diya

Apko bhabhi ko lane beja tha, na ki khud wha rukne ke liye

Daadi: bs bi kriye annie

Waise maan bte itna time kaise lg gya

Maan: daadimaa

Daadi:ok ,ok hm kuch nhi puchte

Geet bte hmare pass aaiye

Geet : ji daadimaa

Daadi: bte ye aapke liye

Annie: wow daadimaa, kitna beautiful necklace hai

Aur bangles to aur bhi sunder hai

Kyu bhai

Maan: hmmm

Geet: daadimaa iski kya jaroort thi

Daadi: jaroort kaisi nhi hai, aaj hm sbke liye itna khushi ka

din hai, chliye ab hume phnke dekhaiye

Annie: bhai bhabhi ki mdad to karo

Maan: hmmm

Annie: bhai, bhabhi pe ye necklace kitne sunder lag rha na

Maan: hmmm

Daadi came forward and kissed forehead and blessed her

Daadi: hmari bahu bhi to utni hi khubsurat hai

Geet bte apko pata hai

Geet: kya daadimaa

Daadi: ye hmara necklace hai, hume hmari saas ne diya tha,

aura b hum aapko de rhe hai, pta nhi kb hmara bulawa aa

jaye

Maan: daadimaa, ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Daadi: are bte jo sch hai wo sch hai

Geet: daadimaa plz ase baat mt kariye

Annie: daadimaa

Daadi: ok

Ok , ab aap sb emotional mt hoiye

Chliye breakfast tyaar hai

Annie: chliye bhai,ya yhi khde rhne ka irada hai

Daadi: inhe yhi rhne dijiye

Annie: chliye aap yhi rhiye mein bhabhi ko le jati hu

Maan: annie meri baat to suno

At afternoon

In kitchen

Geet : nakul, sb kuch achi trh check krlo, kuch bhi kmi nhi

rhni chahiye

Nakul: yes madam sb kuch shi time pe tyaar ho jayenga

Geet: thik hai

Daadimaa enter in the kitchen

Daadi: geet bte aap abhi tk yhi hai

Aap jake tyaar ho jaiye

Geet: pr daadimaa, abhi to sham bhi nhi huyi hai

Daadi: bte huyi nhi hai to kya hua, ho jayengi

Aap aapne kamre mein jaiye aur tyaar ho jaiye

Geet: thik hai daadimaa

Geet left the place

In hall

Maan: adi, mujhe aajki saari detail kl aapne table pe chahiye

Adi: yes sir

Annie: kya bhai, ek din office nhi gye , to ghar ko office bna diya

Adi: heheheheehe

Maan give angry look

Maan: adi

Adi:sorry sir

Annie: adi sir , aap jaiye overall evening mein party hai

Aap jaiye

Adi look towards the maan

Maan: annie party evening mein hai

Abhi nhi

Annie: to kya hua bhai

Bhai daadimaa ne kaha hai mujhe

Maan: pr kyun

Annie: daadimaa se jake puchiye

Maan: adi ab jao

Pr jo kaam maine tumhe kaha hai wo bulna mt

Adi: yes sir

Mtlb no sir

Maan: kya?

Adi: sirrr kaam ho jayenga

Maan: hmmm

Annie: kya bhai apne staff ko drake rkhte ho, bechare adi sir

Jbtk aapne nhi kaha gye hi nhi

Maan: annie

Annie asa nhi hai

Kaam nbhi to jarroori hai'

Annie: pta hai bhai

Aap apne room me jaiye abhi daadimaa wha aati hi hogi



In maaneet room

Geet apne dress ko leke confuse thi

Kya phne

Aur usse se jyada is bat pe itni jldi tyaar hone ko kyun kha

daadimaa ne

Maan slowly came beside her and slipped his fingers into

hers. She pulled her hand away and looked away.

Maan mummers isse kya hua , subh tk to sb kuch thik tha ,

achanak kya hua

Maan: geet

No response

Maan: kya hua hai, tum mujhse naraz ho kya

Geet firse koi jwab nhi deti

Maan held her from shoulders, she instantly moved away

from his touch''..she looked at his grip on her shoulders

with a disapproving look.

He reluctantly removed his hand from the shoulder

Precap: any guess geet naraz kyun hai

And

Kuch khti mitthi nok zhok

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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m first...yipeee
Awesome n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Thanx for the pm do continue soon
Edited by palakchopra - 14 years ago

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