MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#851

awww i loved it kinza.. right from the start to the end... 😳

aye haaye, i loved the sweet, simple confession... it was simple and yet beautiful... loved the post confession part too ☺️

awww the way the past crept up on nupur was fab! her fears, insecurities, anxiety was so evident when she hugged him... luckily you dint prolong that part... mayank came back and was with nupur again... 😊 😊 😊

awww yay, nupur is pregnant... they are gonna have a daughter, they are gonna have a daughter, just like dia predicted

and im sure nupur will be able to convince mayank that the past will never repeat...

haaye i am in love with the update... a very sweet part of the story 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

very well written kinzu... do update the next part soon... waiting for it 😊

God bless you, take care 🤗

PS: Next part mein thoda romance include karna math bhulna 😃 😳

Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#852

They are Handling very well the fears of their past, as They are their for each other, Very Nice update and u know i checked the End ist of this update, Thnk God The End was not written..😆

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#853

loved it alot

loads of love

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#854

wow just beautiful part

loved it

wating to read the next part

😊

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#855

so realistic!

love dit so much!

u described all things so beautifully!

cant wait for next!

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#856

Beautiful update kinzu ... once again!!!
aww... d confession ws shooo cute!😳
luvd it wen u showed deir fears... n how it wont repeat again!😳
omg... nupur's pregnant... yay!
luvd it!
cont soon!
luv ya !🤗

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#857

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! kinzu u know this was the best part soo far!!!!!!!

i love the simple but sincere confession but more then that i loved the way yet again u portrayed how easily this family ahd gelled together into one family... because they knew how to love!!! <3

and then the fears part was just amazing!!!!! howmany times, just when u stand up, u r reminded of the fall u just had and its difficult to get over it!!! but Nupur did get over her fears!! and i m sure she wil be able to help Mayank get over his!!!!

beautiful part kinzu!!!!!! with beautiful feelings!!!! <3

u know i dont ususally go for second chance stories!! i m frightened of them, bcz i dont think one can ever get over thr firts loss !!! and i was not very apprehensive of reading thsi story!!! but u changed that view of mine!!! i would still go for first chances but now i will atleast believe in second chances too and thats all becasue of the way u wrote this story!! so naturally that it reaches the heart!!!!! <3

kinzuu finally i commented through computer!!! :p

it was so irritating commenting through mobile!! :s

love u kinzuu!!!!

and tahnks again for the wishes!! <3