MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#831

beautiful updt kinza
loving this mayank more ..this updt is one of them why I nominated mayank of this ff for most loved character male
thanks for the pm

Edited by gopi06 - 14 years ago

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#832

every time i becum short of words...

beautiful update...

finally mayank confess.how sweet...

i loved their relaion the way they both give space to eachother...

awsome...

cont soon.,...

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#833

Superb update Kinzu..
The confession was so magical
Something I really liked is that Mayank and Nupur are not being selfish and give each other space.They trust each other so well which is why they succeeded in building up their relationship beautifully.
Update soon

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#834

loved it ... thanks for the pm...

god bless take care 😊

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#835

Kinza, i knw i hadrly reply on ur FF, but that doesnt diminish the fact that u are my fav writer and i desp wait for ur pm.

This FF when it started, i was slightly disappointed and thats only coz i cudnt bear to read Mayank-Nupur's name with anyone else... (sorry)

But as it proceeded, i was once again, woven in the magic spell cast by ur words.

This FF will alwz be close to my heart, for the sheer innocence and sense of togetherness u have shown.

Two individuals, who had lost their 1st love, and how they slowly moved on in liife, it was beautifully and wonderfully depicted. The whole sense of losing and then being tied to someone, gradual liking and then sense of companionship...finally leading to love and a bond of lifetime...

at no point i felt that u have rushed or held back, it was PERFECT.

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#836

totally awesum

loads of love

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#837

it was superb amazing part😊

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shivi02

@shivi02

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#838

part 12

aww..such a sweet part...i loved this line by u-pains are shared when you want to, not when you think you have to..
the end was so romantic...nupur blushed for the first time*sigh*...ur description of nupur in white anarkali frock reminds me of mayank's first date
looking forward to the outing...the kids r so cute seeing their parents like dis..lol

part 13

okay..this wasn't a short update😆...omg kinzu...it was so mushy☺️..the way u wrote the whole rain seq gave me chills too..lolzzz...the outing was fun
u end it on a cliff-hanger but lucky me..no need to wait..jumping to the next update

part 14

this was a magical update🤗...from the romance to the strained feelings of the past haunting them back..u have handled it so well⭐️...it was touching how the rain reminded nupur of nitesh...but now she has found the lost love in mayank...brilliant part!

Edited by shivi02 - 14 years ago