MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 69

awww...thnk u sooo much for updating today...

I had expected something lyk dis..
how much ever u try to move on in ur life its diff to let go off ur past when u have so many painful memories..
hope that Nupur gets her answers soon

aww.. kinza..
beautiful update...
i luvd d way u describd MN's dance
bt dat 1 simple quesn... is it easy 2 move on???
ahh.. i cant wait 4 mayu's ans
update soon!
luv ya!

best part of the whole ff. I love it. plz kinza update daily

edited my comment on pg 101 ..

kizu the upd8 wwas fab...

Again a beautiful Piece of writing Kinzu

a milion dolar question...

part 1- firstly me 16 parts late but still need to congratulate u on ur new ff




this is a brilliant start...second marriage😲...so the relationship is fragile to start with but knwing u...magic is surely to come later on...u got me hooked!

part 2

u have written so beautifully👏...the flashbacks brought a lump to my throat...it was seamless how the story flowed from everyone's pov...i can see rahul going to have a hard time accepting nupur as his mom
"okay so now we'll behave like teenagers!, great!!", he said ... this line had me giggling😆 ...sarcastic mayank is the best

part 3

i thought i was watching a family soap...u have penned it down so realistic...the new found awkwardness...the sibling rivalry...hope pranav & rahul gel together to get over it...
u nicely showed the role of father in our lives- he brings in the discipline bit...we take mom for granted...nups need to show rahul mom's love...wht he's missing

diya gupta is just the best( i loved the title gupta😳...lol)...that letter is so cheesy but she has put in everything out so correct...haha...her last line ...she's so sweetly outspoken abt her wish