MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#691

Congrats on completing 100 pages you so deserve it🤗 this is by far your best FF and your writing has improved a lot too🤗
coming to the update love the way you described how she was looking the description of her coming down and all was beautifully done 👏 love the kids saying you're looking hot😆 so cute and adorable😛 and the scolding they recieved for it was great too😆 Her getting upset was sad and it was super sweet how he sensed her being upset straight away👍🏼 the dance was nice and I love their Convo and like roshnee said you can move on and keep the past alive in your memories which is being really beautifully portrayed in this ff by you👍🏼
thanks for the pm🤗

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Raindrops.

@Raindrops.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#692

i just want to say this is your best ff ...infact not only yours but the best piece of writing i have read in recent times in short i love this ff ❤️

i really wish it would go on like it has been, everything is so amazing,pace of the story is good aswell...i dont want it to end soon,just carry on the way you have been doing...you know it best

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#693

nice parts, sorry for the late comment.

the moment on the terrace was really romantic :) but nupur backed off, that was weird.

oh, so nitesh and her shared the rain, and she couldn't give it to someone else. aww :) n mayank understood that! so sweet.

she woke him up in the morning, and they kissed again, aww! ..even nupur kissed him back, so thats good.

nupur and the kids surprised mayank in office, aww. and he was so happy to see them!

mayank was invited to a party,and he didn't want to go since he knew nupur wont be comfortable with the dress code.

but she was, and they went together. the kids even called her hot ;)

nupur felt weird on being adressed with mayank's name, she was too used to having nitesh's name. she felt weird, but she didn't show it.

mayank realized it, though. he asked her for a dance, and he told her not to let go of the past, but the question she asked was quite important and hard to answer.

thanks for the pm

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np18

@np18

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#694

👏 👏 👏

for the last three parts.
touching , romantic what not esp the 14/15 parts.

i esp liked that nupur kissed him back as much as he did. 👍🏼

Edited by np18 - 14 years ago

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#695

awsome part!

cant wait for next!!

pls update ASAP.

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krish_arti

@krish_arti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#696

Loved ur update👏
Plz pm me next time

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#697

awesome updt
thanks for the pm

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shivi02

@shivi02

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#698

part 4

His eyes were huge and silent. Demanding and deprived. Questioning and hurt. She had never seen anyone with eyes which could speak volumes. The emptiness in his eyes pricked the deepest chord of nupur's heart.

this part is so beautiful❤️
ah...so rahul has problems adjusting with nupur..but she's determined to break the ice

part 5

wow...this was so touching...from why mayank got the habbit of smoking to how mayank & nuput tried to fill in the voids of their new children...they still rem their own parents & the hug of support & solace at the end was described so well

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#699

hmm kinza...hope this question of moving on doesn't break Mayank's heart! Nupur still felt bad hearing their names together...this means something is still a miss in their relationship & i knew something like this will come.coz everything in their story was moving on so perfectly tat sometimes it looked unbelievable!!!! they understand every single detail abt each other, their kids gel perfectly with them , they share same pain, they show same care towards each other, they hv same respect & trust for each other ...may be there was a bit too much of good thins they were doing for each other to make this relationship work...real couples do fight, misunderstanding also happen,they face struggle & yet emerge from that...so i guess this time its mayank & nupur's turn to face the struggle, the struggle to accept that their past is a part of their life & will always be, but they they will hv to move on from that past! Hope they will come out as a "couple" from this in its true sense!
*sigh the best part of the day for me just got over...i finished reading ur update kinza.these days life has become so hectic, so much tension around, i only feel peace when i read ur update! so plz try to update soon!!! thanks magician!!!!!🤗