MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#541

CLIFFHANGER! 😳 😡

Well, what do I say? I want the next update ASAP :P :P :P

That was a nice filler, a family day out.
and well, it had me smiling. So I have you to thank for that. (:

So whats gonna happen now? Will they snap outta it? Or will they go along?
Because I believe a relationship between two hurting people has passionate roots. Its like you know the other one would definitely understand what you're going through. I really really love this story for bringing this out, and that too, so beautifully.

CONTINUE SOON. (Yes i am screaming! )

Love,
Akki 🤗

Edited by You-Know-Who - 14 years ago

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#542

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wil comment after i reach :)

edited:

i loved it and you know that 😳

firstly, i loved mayank in that sadu avatar, where he first urges the kids in the car, and when they walk slow he says "thoda jaldi" 😆 and then glaring at nupur to sit inside 😆

and then the fantasy park, the toy shop and then the meal...

and then the final part... it made me forget whatever i read... it was so pretty and dreamy. but again, i dont want them to get carried away just due to the weather or some other factor. coz when they face each other the next morning, they will have regretted the previous nights moments.

i know i have been requesting for romantic updates too, but somehow , mayank seemed to get only physically attracted to her, specially when you used the line "the way it was sticking to her body, it was making him lose his senses" and "chilled drops fell on his body and instead of neutralizing the warm feeling arousing in him, it ignited it further", it gave me a feeling that mayank was physically attracted to her. and it would be too early for them to say "I love you".

Mayank has spoken his share of sorrow. i definitely dont want any misunderstanding between the two; too cliche. but i honestly dont want anything to happen between them right now. i would love to see mayank being her emotional support, just like she was there for him all the while. and then the consummation scene would be lovely.

but so far you have handled the fragile magic par excellence, im sure you'll know whats best.

thanks a tonne for the PM and the scrap. love you loads 🤗

P.S. Arjun too loved the story.

(when will you update next? i am already waiting for it 😳)

Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#543

kinzu what an amazing update!!!!!!!!!!😍 loved the family outing scenes!!!! the two angels and the loving parents!!!!! so beautifully expressed!!!!!!!! but what i love the last two lines!!!!!!! uff!! u know when i heard thsi song i wanted to ask to u use it in ur story but then well leave it!!!!! love u for adding those lines!! 😳

love u my pretty princess !!!!!!!<3

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago