MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 53

wow... kinza the part was fab

Amazing update

hmmm the kids are amzing ...amazing...

Great turn in their life, awesome update

awww.. kinzu... u made me Blush.. Blush☺️
such an cute n adorable update!
cant wait 4 next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

Wow👏
Nice update.😊
Plz pm me next time

Originally posted by: rapunzel_angel

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wil comment later aram se :)

EDIT:

ok this is the third time i am reading this update coz i am totally in love with it...

to begin with, the story is at a lovely pace, and yes, there's no hurry at all... the minute you rush with the story, the romance gets rushed and it appears only as physical bonding rather than an emotional one...

but here, i loved the way you brought out the maturity level... both are each other's emotional supporters and its nice that there is no more awkwardness... i loved the hug in the kids room and the pecks and the glances 😳 it looks realistic...

n i love the way they are beginning to behave like a typical husband-wife... (the scene where she is in a fix as to what she would wear and he picks out an outfit for her)

waiting for the next part i.e. the outing...

P.S. : may i request one small thing kinza... please try to show a situation where nupur talks about nitesh to mayank..(?) it has always been mayank who remembers kanchi and nupur feeling a tinge of jealously... plz try to create some kind of situation as mentioned above... 😊 would love to see mayank's reaction to nitesh's story...

but well, ur the writer. u know whats best for the characters in your story...

thanks a lot for the PM n sorry for the delayed reply... 😊

do update asap 😊 take care Kinza

yup kinza- i m agree with ria
me too wanna c mayanks reaction to Nitesh story

Its not the snale's pace Fanta, its the perfect pace.

Your stories are my getaway from trials and tribulations of life. Thanks a ton, for that!

Secondly, I love Mayank and Nupur over here. Losing the same thing sure binds two people, probably stronger than ever.

And now, I can see that they are discovering their new relationship. Its a real pleasure to read this, really.

Loved it. (:

Love and hugs,
You-Know-Who ;)