MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Kinzu..
Dnt be so cruel yaar..u stopped it at such a crucial point..
The outing was wonderful..kids must have had the time of their lyf..
update soon and dnt forget to pm me coz u pm me only alternate tymes..and i dun want to miss the next update😳

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Not fair

I hate such cliffhangers

But it was amazing

Totally loved it

Cont soon

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#553

AWESOME!!!!!!
do cont soon soon soon &a looong one..!!

ps..-love u lots!!*hugs*

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#554

it was amazing...kids were too cute...nd waiting for next part

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Sara

@immayurfan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#555

The family's day out was sweet

Hope mayank and nupur go along

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#556

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 nothing much to say...enjoyed this update...

CONTINUE SOON...

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#557

beautiful updt
loved family outing
thanks for the pm

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#558

awesome update

plzzz continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Res!! Will edit soon!!

~Edited~

Whoa!! Cliffhanger!! 😕 😡
U really need to update the next chapter AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! 😈 😆
The update was super-duper-mind blowingly-amazingly-fantastic as usual!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
Mayank was too cute, the way he was glaring and all made me laugh!! 🤣
The kids are TRULY the angels.. They were holding each others' hands & walking quietly as they were scared of Mayank.. Their hearts were pumping when they reached the Fantasy Land yet they were silent.. Awww!! 😳 😳
Nupur giggling at Mayank's angry-young-man style!! 😆 😳
The whole family outing was super-awesome!! 😃 😃
The last part 😲 .. I didn't expect it actually!! 😛
Mayank was getting attracted to Nupur!! The way you described Mayank's feelings when he saw Nupur in the rain gave me goosebumps!! ☺️ ☺️
And you know what? I'm hearing that song (which you used at the end) from the past a week.. My most fav song.. Thanks a lot for using that over here!! 😃
Perfectly matched with the situation!! 😳
But I have a fear - if they consume their marriage and after that, if they regret then my heart will break into a billion pieces, seriously!! 🥺 🥺
I really want them to fall in love first and then take their marriage to the next step! 😳
Anyways, lets see what you write in the next chap!! Waiting!! 😍

UPDATE REALLY SOON!! 😃

Lots of love,
Bidushy!! ❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago