Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

God woman! what took you so long?
anyway, brilliant update as always! ridhimas getaway spot being pablos was obvious and I'm glad armaan found her! I feel sorry for shashank but my heart beats for AR and I really hope the decision ridhima has made is in armaan's favour! the little things seem so special through your writing, thr simple hug in the end had my heart running faster!
I really hope the next update is faster

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desire_20

@desire_20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Loved the update! Loved the last scene where she is just sleeping and he comes to give her comfort, and glad that shashank reached out to armaan, continue soon!!

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

That last moment - there, I am still there.. and can't bring myself to get out of the trance. Absolutely wonderful, A!

Losing a child isn't easy but then I don't think it can be used as a reason to get in another child's happiness. But then everything is fair in love and war. Haha!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

a deep deep deep sigh is what followed that update...

how could he play that card? she is going to break up with him isn't she? nothing good is going to come of this... He completely played the emotional card. I couldn't even argue for her in my head against his words. The death of a child and stating that your lover is a constant reminder of my failures and loss... yeah not going to work!!

I wish Padma spoke to him first! i wish that conversation happened before their conversation. I saw hope in him for the first time to set things right and maybe fix things...

But if you make R the character that will fight for her dad, that will sacrifice, that will let go... god I will die!

They will give each other this time and then go...

god I am going to just keep thinking of the worst possible things till you update again...

SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Edited by bushrayou - 13 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh
Amazing update :)

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: sisgeo
Beautifull

Glad you liked it, Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: neelu.apr18
awesome update...!:)..will wait for d next one!

Glad you liked the update, Thank you!! Will update soon ;)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: rtjks
Lovely part.

Thanks for PM.

Update soon...

Thank you and you are welcome for the PM :)

Will update soon ;)

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

not fair yaar,u just got that exact damn moment to stop the part
this is going to be hard???so that mean riddhima made up her decision? and i am sure is not in favor of armaan which it should be...after all,in movies only the go against your parents looks good,in real i am not so sure coz some times leaving them makes the thing we left not worth it...well i am old fashioned in that sort of way i think...🤔 wishing to have to both is one of the best gifts
though shashank did blackmailed her i did think he kept some of the grudge and irritation to himself which made him difficult to move on
plzz some how release the riddhima being shashank's adopted daughter issue too i hope some drama there for me to lighten up and more to read😃
thanks for pm
swetha

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: DMG fan
Very nice part. You have done complete justice to everyone's emotions and it clearly shows how subtly but surely you are bringing all involved together. Awesome writing.
Rt

Yeah, trying to bring in everything to its logical conclusion now. Thank you Rt., :)