Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
Why did u stop at such a moment dear?
It's not fair to leave us on a cliffhanger.
I wonder what decision Riddhima has made.
I knew she must be at Pablo's Muse.
shanky has emotionally blackmailed her.
Loss of his son was terribel but it does not mean that AR have to pay a price for it.
I'm glad that Armaan finally found Ridz.
Waiting for the next part eagerly.
I hope u may update soon.

Why did I stop where I did? yeah😆 so you'll tune in to the next one ;) That much is a given by now, PM is where she would be so no attempt to hide that at all. What do you think Riddhima's decision will be? Should she go against her father? or stick to what she wants?

I will update soon, sort of the reformed me, when it comes to update frequency...stay tuned for Ridz's decision. And Thank you for sticking around this ff, and for commenting.

cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: imshveta
The loss of a child is a terrible, terrible loss that a parent has to go through. One never really recuperates from it completely. It is a void nothing can fill, not even the other child. And Shashank is right in feeling whatever he does. Ofcourse he has to have a huge huge heart to accept AR's relationship. It will be a nightmare for any parent to accept someone in the family a glimpse of whom will always remind him of the child he lost.
Very well written, the emotions of the father are very well brought out. Good job.

Love
Shveta

I agree, having seen how it shatters parents when it does happen. All I can is that it is a terrible loss which is hard to recover from. Thats where this gets tough isn't it, Riddhima being Riddhima would have a tough decision to make. But I'm hoping my Riddhima is different from the show's ;) Let's see how everything plays out. Thank you for your lovely words and for sticking around with this ff for so long, almost there to the finish line now.

Thank a lot.

Cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: sonia_92
God woman! what took you so long?
anyway, brilliant update as always! ridhimas getaway spot being pablos was obvious and I'm glad armaan found her! I feel sorry for shashank but my heart beats for AR and I really hope the decision ridhima has made is in armaan's favour! the little things seem so special through your writing, thr simple hug in the end had my heart running faster!
I really hope the next update is faster

And here i was thinking, I beat my own update record best with this one😛 Yeah, you do feel for the father but he cant really expect to hold them hostage to the past, but its not a simple situation is it? Or perhaps, the answers to all our problems are within us...the moment we let go of things, we free ourselves of the burden of the past? Let's see how things shape up...will update soon. Thank you for your encouraging comment Sonia, at this stage, you have no idea, how inspiring all these comments are to me, to carry on writing, so Thank you again.

Cheers,

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Thank you Riddss :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: desire_20
Loved the update! Loved the last scene where she is just sleeping and he comes to give her comfort, and glad that shashank reached out to armaan, continue soon!!

Thanks a lot Desire. Will update soon.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: -Dee-
That last moment - there, I am still there.. and can't bring myself to get out of the trance. Absolutely wonderful, A!

Losing a child isn't easy but then I don't think it can be used as a reason to get in another child's happiness. But then everything is fair in love and war. Haha!

Thank you Dee. Agree with the bolded text, its not easy but can you really keep them hostage to the past? May be its better to let things go because it will make things easier? I dunno, its something to think about, obviously something like this you can never truly move on from...not a nice place to be in.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

^^Life would be easier, if they let go of the ghost of the past but I don't think it's that easy to you know, let go. Ha! I agree, certainly not a nice place to be in and not one anyone if given a choice would like to.

Edited by -Dee- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: bushrayou
a deep deep deep sigh is what followed that update...

how could he play that card? she is going to break up with him isn't she? nothing good is going to come of this... He completely played the emotional card. I couldn't even argue for her in my head against his words. The death of a child and stating that your lover is a constant reminder of my failures and loss... yeah not going to work!!

I wish Padma spoke to him first! i wish that conversation happened before their conversation. I saw hope in him for the first time to set things right and maybe fix things...

But if you make R the character that will fight for her dad, that will sacrifice, that will let go... god I will die!
They will give each other this time and then go...

god I am going to just keep thinking of the worst possible things till you update again...

SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

You think so? after everything that they have been through? But do I agree, nothing good is going to come out of this. How do you even attempt to fix something like this, is it even possible?

What's the worst that could happen, she walks out on them? hmmm...

will try n update over the weekend..touchwood.

Thank you! Always look forward to read your comments.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: bary
not fair yaar,u just got that exact damn moment to stop the part
this is going to be hard???so that mean riddhima made up her decision? and i am sure is not in favor of armaan which it should be...after all,in movies only the go against your parents looks good,in real i am not so sure coz some times leaving them makes the thing we left not worth it...well i am old fashioned in that sort of way i think...🤔 wishing to have to both is one of the best gifts
though shashank did blackmailed her i did think he kept some of the grudge and irritation to himself which made him difficult to move on
plzz some how release the riddhima being shashank's adopted daughter issue too i hope some drama there for me to lighten up and more to read😃
thanks for pm
swetha

Hello swetha, I dont know where I am with this story anymore. been so long. but i hv still not given up on this yet. just things getting in the way. riddhima has made up her mind, so has armaan...now its up to them to see it through. you are right, it looks great in the movies, real life is not the same thing. esp. when you want everything... but you cant always have everything, choices...are tough but we all make them at every step of the way.

hopefully soon.

cheers,

aria

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