Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all sorry for late commenting.
awesome parts!!!!!
i am glad arman is fine and recovering fast.
loved the AR romantic scene in the hospital.
i agree with Ananya.
Shanshank should talk to riddhima and at least try to know arman more, before reaching to any decision/conclusion about him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part... so finally the truth is out... n shashank has to deal with it... i hope he doesnt create more than existing problems for them...
n i liked the way ananya defended n supported armaan :)
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_92

and finally she updates! FINALLY! Where the hell were you lost all this time woman? I had started to think you had left my favourite mysterious AR story hanging!
I hate you so much for letting that thought enter my mind! but God I love you so much, it's impossible to hate such a talented writer, hence you are forgiven for the extremely extended delay :p how I missed this, how I missed the love of my life, my FAVOURITE armaan, YOUR armaan, the mysterious owner of pablos muse! hayeee!
what an update love! what an update! you sure know how to make up to your readers! I have to say I like armaan's mom, strong woman! I like her position in his life, I like how the woman understands and respects her son's decisions, his life!
Oh God I'm so happy! finally shashank is going to have the much needed conversation with his daughter!
you better not delay the next update! it has to come soon
thank-you so much for the update and the pm love
mwah!
love you lots
Sonia


See I'd like to think I'm getting better with my update frequencies - I was going through the index on Page 1 - when I realised I have like 4 updates this year - compared to ummšŸ¤“...last year's updates! šŸ¤” doing much better this year :D... Will you feel less angry if I tell you the next update is just around the corner!? ;)

Jokes apart..I'm glad you enjoyed reading this part...and esp. Armaan's mom - she was a little difficult to write about in a way... but isnt this how you'd imagine Pablo's mom to be? And yes we're there ...you know, Shashank has to face the truth...let's see how he deals with things. Thanks a lot for reading and for your wonderful words Sonia :)

TC,
Aria



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Wonderful update and am hoping the next one will not be too long in coming!


DMGFan-2b-not2b, Welcome to this thread. Thank you for reading and commenting. It's a pleasant surprise to see you here :)

Will update soon.

Aria
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss

awesome part
continue soon


Thank you Riddss.
Will continue soon :)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bary

Avengers?? seriously? i dont think in your ff three years happen yet...lol but i happen to use the chance to say i loved avengers..even with being obsessed over romance in books and movies..i love superheroes and action even more...too bad they should have consider "Wolverine" in the part too...Iron Man and Wolverine ahh i am already imagining it soo good
so i read u are completing the ff soon and all parents interaction is important but i always wanna ask u about the first plane meet of AR...i made many probabilities on how their convo goes on...though i get that his muse of hers eyes starts when they were in danger...well write if u feel like about it wanna read ur point of view
u know i recently started watching gossip girl where one of the pair happen to be in accident i so remembered this ff when i was watching it,thinking u can update soon but i wish it has more AR or a bit of AR
lovely part
thanks for pm
swetha


Yes Swetha, I'm working towards wrapping this FF now... slowly but getting there. Avengers was just a little reminder of how long this thing has been running...and that I really need to wrap it up. šŸ˜† and well sort of an Atulish thing to do as well. Couldn't help it really.

@the bold , you mean those two talking abt that first meet? ...or what he felt like? cause if its that, i have written about that somewhere...briefly but yes it is there. But they did have a little bit of an interaction before the shaky stuff...if you remember? ;).we'll see...but it is where things start for them...so not something I could just leave...if you know what I mean...

Thanks a lot for commenting. Will update soon :)

Aria
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh the long update looks so beautiful ;P as i was reading it, i expected it to stop short at some random point but i gotta say Aria, i'm glad to see more and more longer updates =)
appropiate choice of quote for this chapter btw, i'm sure there is more to discover of these characters

i really liked this chapter: it had humor, little snippets of sweet romance and i definitely liked the interaction between shashank and mrs mallik..that was treat to read. she's definitely not a woman to be messed with especially when it comes to her son.
LOL i have to say that comment riddhima made about the bug made me think of the cliched "rather be a fly on the wall" but i liked your different approach to idle bugs šŸ˜†
and atul's comment, even if anjali didn't vocalise her typical "shut up atul" we know it was in her eyes. i lve that you manage to get in little interactions of each character in whatever update you write

superb update Aria, i always look forward to reading your writing. keep up the great work, this ff is coming along really well!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: olive.green


Yes Swetha, I'm working towards wrapping this FF now... slowly but getting there. Avengers was just a little reminder of how long this thing has been running...and that I really need to wrap it up. šŸ˜† and well sort of an Atulish thing to do as well. Couldn't help it really.

@the bold , you mean those two talking abt that first meet? ...or what he felt like? cause if its that, i have written about that somewhere...briefly but yes it is there. But they did have a little bit of an interaction before the shaky stuff...if you remember? ;).we'll see...but it is where things start for them...so not something I could just leave...if you know what I mean...

Thanks a lot for commenting. Will update soon :)

Aria


i thought to wait to reply but couldntšŸ˜†
it is totally atulish thing...remember the dhoom machale moment him like johnšŸ˜†
do u have other ffs?though i think u have this arman,armaan,aarmaan ff,oh god i forgot the ff name and it is totally on you..is it running or over?though i didnt understand half the thing i am reading me being totally greek amateur then or may be even now and it looked no less than trojan war for mešŸ˜†no offense
@yes their meeting was soo brief about placing stuff before the shaking stuff and u never mentioned any thing happened during the plane shaking,all i remember is riddhima remembering the chaos,armaan thinking riddhima and her eyes and the pain she went through then and explaining MOMENTS to her happen once,that's all i thought they didnt have any interaction after the first one but may be i thought to confirm it once and all
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Posted: 13 years ago
god it just keeps getting more intense!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dee-

I liked the quote in the beginning. AR's love is somehow going to remove grudges and 'stuff' which some people wouldn't think they could live without - even AR.


Shouldn't Armaan's mom not be a Malik?? Just asking.

I liked how it all suddenly turned awkward and Riddhima buzzed - 'where did his mum come from??.." I know, it's rude to like it but I liked it. šŸ˜†. Avengers??šŸ˜‰

Anyways, Ananya Malik seems to be a wonderful and a cunning mother. šŸ˜† The discussion between Armaan and his mum was nicely based. The fact that she made it plain that the AR relationship was a tough and a bad choice was good and well-settled. I liked it. The whole thing and the part that Armaan says that Riddhima's the one for him and the falling in love part just happened. And for them it did. The face-off with Shashank seemed inevitable and quite required. It is necessary that some issues be settled. And Shashank needs to be cleared off who Armaan is - not just the owner of a quarter of the hospital.

The sketch book's back to its owner?? 😃

I see you are tying loose ends. Update soon??😊


Reserved for response :)

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