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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

EPISODE:-7

Present...

Delhi ke air port par jyada der tak wait nahi karrna pada Prisha ko... Arjun kafi jaldi hi aaya uss k paas...sath me ek aur aadmi bhi tha... sayad driver tha...

Prisha ka luggage usi ne uthaya...!!! kuch der baad...dono Chandan pur ki taraf rawana hue...!!!

Chandanpur ki sadko par Rajeev ki car chal rahi thi...Prisha khidki se bahar jhaank rahi thi...sab kuch use naya naya lagg raha tha...!!! wo iss soch me dubi hui thi apne soch me...ke...

'wo akhir yahan kyoun hai...??? wo toh janti bhi nahi hai ke uss se Rajeev kya kaam karwana chahta hai...!!! par phir bhi wo yahan pe hai...kyoun...??? paiso ke liye... ya Rajeev ke liye...??? ya phir abhi bhi ek aas baki hai uss me ki sayad phir se Rajeev aur uss ke bich wo dosti se thoda gehra jo rishta bann gaya tha...phir se wohi bann jaye...!!! par Rajeev ko toh main yaad bhi nahi hun...wo sirf apni hi duniya me khoya hua hai...!!! lekin uss ki duniya...achanak badal kaise gayi ke...wo yun smoke karrta hai...itna drink karrta hai...???"

ek suddern break lagya driver ne...Prisha ne chaunk kar dekha...!!! samne ek car achanak se aa kar ruki thi...accident hote hote bache the wo log...

Arjun bhadka hua lagg raha tha...phir achanak shant ho gaya...kuch bhi nahi bola...car ke bahar aaya Ashwin...aur driver ko gali dete hue bola:-"dekh ke nahi chala sakta tha kya...

itna keh ker uss ne car k driver ka coller pakad kar use car se bahar nikala...sath hi Arjun bhi nikla...aur kaha:-"dekhiye Mr Ashwin Rai...car aap ki wrong side par chal rahi thi...!!! galati hamari nahi...aap ki hai...!!!"

Ashwin:-"ohh...Arjun...toh tum ho...!!! toh yeh car Rajeev ki hi hogi...

Arjun:-"of course...unhi ki car hai...

Ashwin:-"lekin tum raub to aise dikha rahe ho jaise Car tumhare baap ki ho...

:-"jee nahi...Car Arjun ke baap ki nahi...Rajeev ki hai...!!! par ye jiss rashte par aap apna raub jama rahe hain na...wo definately aap ke baap ki bhi nahi hai...m i right Mr Ashwin Rai...

Ashwin ne dekha...!!! car ki pichli door ko khol kar ek khubshurat si ladki khadi thi...jeans n white colour ki ek shirt me...ankhon me sun glasses...halka sa make up...

Ashwin dhire se Prisha ki kareeb aate hue kaha:-"aap ki tarif...

Prisha:-"baht lambi hai...sarr se paao tak sirf tarif hi tarif hai...par kya hai na...abhi dene baithungi toh 1 saal toh lagg hi jayega...Mr Ashwin rai...!!! to filhaal...main ajnabiyo se baat karrne me zara bhi intrest nahi rakhti...!!! 2 min ke ander apni car hamare car ke samne se hatayiye...warna...driving seat par main aa jayungi...!!! and for your kind information...main car bilkul bhi achhi tarah se nahi chalati... isi liye aage jo bhi hoga aap ke car ka uss ke liye aap zimmedar honge...

Ashwin ke chehre par ek shaitani hassi thi...uss ne kaha:-"aap ko kisi ne kaha hai ke...aap gusse me jyada achhi lagti hain...

Prisha:-"haan...kai baar yeh maine road side romeos se sunn chuki hun...aur unhe kharcha pani bhi de chuki hun...!!! aur yakeen kijiye... kharcha pani dete hue bhi main iss se jyada khubshurat dikhti hun...!!! kyoun lenge kya...

Ashwin ki nazar...sirf Prisha ke well tonned body ko ghoore ja rahi thi...jo ki Prisha ko bilkul achha nahi lagg raha tha...

wo aayi samne...driver aur Arjun ko ishara kiya...baithne ke liye... Arjun ko kafi maza aa raha tha...!!! Kyoun ki wo khud Ashwin aur Mitali ko pasand nahi karrta tha n Rajeev ke ird-gird inhe dekhte hi uss ka khun garam ho jata tha...

Prisha baithi...driving seat par...Arjun uss ke paas baitha...aur driver... owner ki tarah piche baitha...

Prisha ne Car thoda sa reverse me liya...phir kafi tezi se aage chalati hue thoka...Ashwin ke car ko...uss ka head lyt toota...

Prisha car chalate hue aage badh gayi...piche turn kar ke dekha bhi nahi...

ek jagah car rokkte hue Prisha ne driver se kaha:-"abhi aap car chala sakte hain...aur car ka jo bhi nukshan hua hai...uss ke bare me fiqar matt kijiye... main Rajeev jee se bol dungi ke yeh maine kiya tha...

Arjun:-"iss ki jarurat nahi padegi...iss baat ko main handel kar lunga... tum baitho...

Prisha ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ke Chandan pur aate hi uss ki mulakat iss tarah se Ashwin se ho sakti hai...!!! uss ka chehra bata raha tha wo kitni gusse me thi...

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car aa kar ruki...Rajeev ke ghar ke bahar...!!! Prisha ki ankhon me halke se anshu the...!!! last time wo Rajeev ke birthday par aayi thi...aur uss ke baad...

Arjun:-"tum mere sath ander chalo...pahle Sir se mil lete hain...

Prisha:-"hmm...

Arjun n Prisha ne main-door se ghar ke ander kadam rakha...

pata nahi kyoun par...Prisha ko kafi akela...par achha bhi lagg raha tha...

Arjun ne use hall me ek jagah par baithne ko kehte hue kaha:-"tum yahan baitho...main sir ko inform karrta hun ke tum aa gayi ho...

Arjun chala gaya...Prisha sofe par baithe wali thi...uss ki nazar padi... samne ki diwar ki taraf...jahan Dev ki tashveer lagi hui thi...aur tashveer par chandan ka ek mala bhi chadha hua tha...aur hairani se uss tashveer ki taraf dekh rahi thi...

Tabhi ek maid aayi...aur pani ka glass rakha...Prisha ke liye...

Prisha:-"ye tashveer kis ki hai...

Maid:-"Dev saab ki...

Prisha ke pair kaamp rahe the...!!! wo ek damm se giri sofe par...khud ko sambhala...

Maid:-"aap thik toh hai...

Prisha ne kuch nahi kaha...bass apna sarr hila kar HAAN kaha...!!! maid wohi khadi thi...Prisha ne use ishara kiya jane ke liye...

maid chali gayi...!!! Prisha kafi mushkil se uthi apni jagah se...aur Dev k tashveer ke samne aayi...

wo anjaan thi ki koi use dekh raha tha...

kuch hi duri par...ek room tha...jiss ke kaanch ki khidki se Rajeev ki nazar Prisha par thi...!!! Arjun thode dur par khada use kuch bol raha tha...par Arjun uss kamre ki door ke paas hi khada tha...jahan se use Prisha nazar nahi aa rahi thi...

par Rajeev ki nazar Prisha par hi thi...pata nahi wo Arjun ki baat sunn bhi raha tha ya nahi...

Prisha...Dev ki tashveer ke kareeb gayi...ankhon me anshun...pair kaamp rahe the uss ke...kamp-kampate hathon ko uss ne Dev ki tashveer ki taraf badhaya...

phir rone lagi...khamoshi se...

Rajeev ki nazar uss par abhi tak tiki hui thi...!!! Prisha ke gir rahe her ek anshun ko dekh rahi thi...

Cut to Rajeev...

Rajeev ko jaise hosh aaya...uss ne Arjun ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"sorry...maine tumhari baat thik se nahi suni...!!! kisi aur chiz ke bare me soch raha tha main...phir se kaho...kya kah rahe the...

Arjun:-"sir...Saira...aa chuki hai...

Rajeev:-"Prisha...uss ka naam aaj se Prisha hai...Saira nahi...aur aainda se use sirf isi naam se mention karrna...chahe kahin bhi ho...

Arjun:-"jee sir...wo sir aate waqt thoda sa prob ho gaya...

Rajeev ne turn kiya Arjun ki taraf phir kaha:-"kya hua...

Arjun ne Ashwin ki baat batayi...Rajeev ke chehre par ek mushkaan aaya...!!!

Arjun hairan tha...use aaj tak ye samajh me nahi aaya tha ke...jab bhi Mitali aur Ashwin...Rajeev ke samne hote hain...Rajeev kafi normal behave karrta tha...par unn ke piche jab bhi unn dono ke sath kuch bura hota tha wo kafi khush kyoun lagta tha...

Rajeev ne turn karr ke uss khidki se phir se Prisha ki taraf dekha...jo abhi bhi Dev ke tashveer ke samne khadi ro rahi thi...

Rajeev:-"Ashwin ke car ka kuch nukshan toh nahi hua na...

Arjun:-"sir...head lite tut gayi hai...

Rajeev:-"sirf...head lite tuti hai...!!! kaanch bhi tod dete...

Arjun mushkuraya...hala ke use Rajeev kabhi samajh me nahi aata...phir bhi uss ke kuch acts use kafi achhh lagte hain...maza aata hai uss ko...

Arjun:-"sir...Prisha kahan rukegi...???"

Rajeev:-"tumhe toh pata hi hai ke wo din bhar mere sath rehne wali hai... isi liye wo isi ghar me rahegi...thik hai...

Arjun:-"jee sir...

Rajeev:-"ab tum jayo...rest lo...kal office me milte hain...

Arjun:-"jee sir...

Rajeev:-"Arjun...

Arjun ruka...aur kaha:-"jee sir...

Rajeev:-"aage agar kabhi bhi Ashwin tum se iss tarh se baat kare...to tum bhi usi tarah se jawab dena...jiss tarah se aaj Prisha ne diya hai...!!! aur agar uss ne tum par hath uthane ki koshish ki...toh ek-do khidki tum bhi uss ka bandh karr sakte ho...aage agar kuch hua toh main dekh lunga...thik hai...

Arjun ke chehre par ek mushurahat thi...wo bola:-"jee sir...

Rajeev:-"ek aur baat...

Arjun:-"jee sir...kahiye...

Rajeev kareeb aaya...Arjun ke...uss ke coller ko thik kiya...aur kaha:-"aaj se...tum mujhe Rajeev kahoge...Sir nahi...

Arjun thoda hairan ho kar bola:-"jee sir...

Rajeev:-"maine kaha na...Sir nahi Rajeev...

Arjun ne Rajeev ki ankhon me khud ke liye ek dost ki feeling mehshus ki...uss ne dhire se kaha:-" jee sir...i mean Rajeev...

Rajeev:-"jayo...tumhari aaj ke liye chutti hai...kal milte hain...

Arjun chala gaya...

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cut to Prisha...

uss ki nazar abhi tak Dev ki tasveer par hi thi...!!! chehra anshuyo se puri tarh bheega hua tha...

Arjun ne uss ke kandhe par hath rakha...Prisha ne anshu pochte hue turn kiya...

Arjun thoda hairan tha Prisha ko yun dekh kar...uss ne kaha:-"kya hua...tum Dev sir ko janti thi kya...???"

Prisha:-"inn ki shaqal mere ek baht achhe dost se milti hai...ab mujhe pata bhi nahi hai ke wo kahan hai...kis halat me hai...bass usi dost ki yaad aayi aur...

Prisha ruki...aur kuch nahi kaha uss ne...!!! Arjun ne pani ka glaas badhaya uss ki taraf aur kaha:-"yeh Dev sir hain...Rajeev sir ke best frnd...unn ke bhai jaise...!!! sath hi pale badhe aur bade hue...!!! yehi unn ke sath hi raha karrte the...!!! kuch mahine pahle unhone suicide karr li...

Prisha ne shocked ho kar Arjun ki taraf dekha...

Prisha:-"suicide...???"

Arjun:-"haan...suicide...jab ki kuch din baad unn ki shadi honewali thi... unn ke GF ke sath...par...pata nahi kyoun...par yeh baat aaj tak paheli bann kar reh gaya hai ke...akhir Dev sir suicide kyoun ki...

Prisha khoyi hui lagg rahi thi...jaise use bhi iss sawal k jawab ki jarurat thi...

Arjun:-"khair...tum meri baat dhayan se suno...!!! sir ne kaha...tum yehi par rahogi... isi ghar me...!!! ab tumhe toh pata hai tumhe kafi time Rajeev sir ke sath bitani hai...isi liye better option hai ke tum yehi par raho...!!! aur Rajeev sir se darrna matt...wo bass darane ke bahane dundhte rehte hain jab ki itne darwane hain nahi...!!! aur phir Mohit uncle bhi hai... Rajeev sir ke uncle hai...wo bhi kafi achhe inshan hai...!!! aur mera phone no toh tumhare paas hai hi...kisi bhi tarah ki dikkat ho toh mujhe call kar dena...!!! main yehi kafi kareeb hi rehta hun...!!! thik hai...!!! aur haan... Sir abhi thoda sa busy hai...wo tum se baad me milenge...okay...

Prisha ne sirf sarr hila kar HAAN kaha...!!! use koi bhi baat karne ka dil nahi karr raha tha...wo rona chahti thi dil se rona chati thi...khul kar rona chahti thi...akele me...

tabhi ek maid aayi aur kaha:-"aap ka sara saman kamre me pahuncha diya hai...!!! chaliye aap ko aap ka kamra bhi dikha deti hun...

Arjun:-"toh Prisha...take care...aur kal milte hain...thik hai...

Prisha ne halki si smile di...jise Arjun ne ek dard ko saaf notice kiya...!!! use ab sab kuch ek suspence novel jaisa lagg raha tha...par samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha tha...

Arjun to himself:-"kuch toh hai...jo main samajh nahi pa raha hun...!!! Rajeev sir aur Prisha ke bich sayad kuch hai...ya phir main galat hun...!!! agar main galat hun toh Rajeev sir...Prisha se kya karwane le kar aaye hain yahan...

wo chala gaya...jate hue last baar turn karr ke phir se dekha Prisha ki taraf...jo abhi bhi Dev ki tashveer ko dekh khadi thi...!!! Arjun ne phir se khud se kaha:-"toh kya Prisha...Dev sir ko janti thi...???"

maid ne phir se Prisha ko uss ke sath jane ko kaha...aur Prisha uss maid ke sath apne room ki taraf jane lagi...

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Rajeev uss kamre se bahar aaya...dekha seedhiyo se chal kar Prisha apne kamre ki taraf ja rahi thi...uss maid ke sath...!!! kafi thaki hui aur udaash lagg rahi thi wo...

Rajeev aaya Dev ke uss tashveer ke paas...jahan pe abhi tak Prisha khadi thi...

Rajeev ne dekha...Dev ke tashveer ke niche rakhe hue uss chote se table par...prisha ke ankhon ke kuch boond anshu pade hue the...

Rajeev ne apni finger uss par rakhni chahi...phir ruka...apne jeb se apna rumal nikala...unn anshuyo par rakha...

uss rumal ko apne hath se thame apne room ki taraf badha...

back ground...

jab jab tere paas main aaya

ek sukun mila

jise main tha bhulta aaya

woh wajud mila

jab aaye mausam gham ke

tujhe yaad kiya

jab sehame tanha pann se

tujhe yaad kiya

hmm...dil sambhal ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

dil...yahi ruk ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

cut to Prisha...

Maid ne use ek room me chod karr boli:-"yeh aap ka kamra hai madam...kisi chiz ki jarurat ho toh bata dijiyeaga...mera naam Shanti hai...

Prisha:-"hmmm...tum jayo...mujhe kisi chiz ki jarurat padi toh main bol dungi...

maid chali gayi...door bandh karr ke...!!!

Prisha ne na toh kamre ki tarf dekha...aur na hi yeh dekha ki...uss kamre ki ek diwar par ek bada sa Aaine laga hua tha...wo pura diwar hi ek bade se aaine se cover kiya gaya tha...

Prisha baithi...bed ke kareeb hi...niche Zameen par...rone lagi...baht rone lagi...

cut to Rajeev...

apne kadmo ko ghaseet te hue pahuncha apne kamre me...!!! door khola... toh sidha uss ki nazar Dev ki tashveer par padi...

wo chalta hua uss taraf gaya...khada hua uss tashveer ke kafi kareeb... aur kaha:-"naraz hun...tujh se...baht naraz hun tujh se...!!! kyoun ke tune mere bare me ek pal ke liye bhi nahi socha...aur mujhe chod karr chala gaya...!!! par yeh bhi janta hun ke...tujhe...mujh se zabardasti alag kiya gaya hai yaar...!!! aur main iss baat ka badla le kar rahunga...uss ke liye mujhe chahe kisi bhi hadh tak kyoun na girrna padd jaye...

achanak uss ki nazar padi...apne hath me thame hue uss rumal par...jiss me Prisha ke anshuyo ke nishan the...

aisa kyun kar hua

jaanu na main jaanu na

dil...sambhal ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

dil...yahi ruk ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Rajeev ne wo rumal rakha...dev ke tashveer ke samne aur kaha:-"teri dost Prisha aa gayi hai...aur uss ki tarf se main ye le kar aaya hun tere liye...

Rajeev ki ankhon me halke se anshu ubhar aaye...

Rajeev:-"dubara use dekh kar sayad tu sab se jyada khush hota...par tu nahi hai...aur wo...

Rajeev gaya...apne bed par baitha...uss ki nazar samne ki diwar par padi... wo pura diwar...ek baht bade curtain se cover kiya gaya tha...

kuch sochte hue wo utha wahan se...gaya uss diwar ki taraf...dhire se hataya uss ne wo curtain...samne kaanch ki diwar thi...jo dushre kamre ki sari tashveer bayan karr rahi thi...

wo kamra...jo Prisha ka tha...!!! aur wo diwar...jo Rajeev ki room ki taraf toh kaanch ka tha...par Prisha ki room me wo sirf ek aaine jaisa lagg raha tha...jahan se Prisha toh Rajeev ko dekh nahi payegi...par Rajeev...Prisha ki her ek act dekh sakta hai... (ps* HOPE KI AAP SAMAJH RAHE HAIN MAIN KYA DESCRIBE KARRNA CHAH RAHI HUN)

Rajeev dekh raha tha...Prisha ko rote hue...!!! use chot lagi thi...Dev ke jane ki chot lagi thi...!!! lekin Rajeev...ki nazar abhi tak Prisha me kuch aur hi dhundh rahi thi...

jis raah pe hai ghar tera

aksar wahan se haan main hun guzara

shayad yahin dil mera

haan tu mujhko mil jaaye kya pataa

kya hai yeh silsila

jaanu na main jaanu na

dil...sambhal ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

dil...yahi ruk ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

cut to Prisha...

uss ne ankhen bandh ki...ro ro kar thakk gayi thi wo...!!! apne bachpan ke dost ko iss tarah se khona...woh sayad soch bhi nahi pa rahi thi...

Prisha to herself:-"sabhi toh chale gaye the...pahle Anu didi aur jeeju... phir Maama jee...aur ab Dev tum bhi...!!! tum suicide kaise ker sakte ho... tumhe toh zindagi jeena aata tha na...!!! dushro ko zindagi jeena sikhate the tum...phir kaise..."

kuch sochte hue wo ruki...apne hathon se apne anshu pochte hue dhire se kaha:-"toh kya Raj...abhi jiss halat me hai...wo tumhari wajah se...??? tum jante ho Dev tum kya mayne rakhte the uss ke liye...phir use chod karr jane ki tumne sochi bhi kaise...!!! tabhi wo yun tuta hua... berukha sa lagg raha tha...kyoun ke uss ka ek lauta dost hi nahi hai uss ke paas...

Prisha ki achanak nazar padi samne ki diwar par...jo ek bade se aaine se cover kiya hua tha...

Prisha kuch sochte hue uthi wahan se...door ander se bandh kiya...uss aaine ki taraf aayi...hath badha kar touch kiya uss ne...

dushri taraf se Rajeev dekh raha tha...aur uss ek anjane me hi uss ka hath pahuncha...Prisha ki hath ki taraf...

kaanch ke iss taraf Rajeev ka hath chuu raha tha...Prisha ke hath ko...

dushri taraf...Prisha ka hath chu raha tha uss bade se aaine ko...

kafi distracted lagg rahi thi Prisha...wo turn karr ke apne luggage ki taraf aayi...!!! apne liye kuch kapde nikale...bed par rakha...

use fresh hone jana tha...uss ne apna scraf nikala...bed par rakha...!!! phir distracted si shirt ki button kholne lagi...

Rajeev ne dhire se wo curtain phir se uss diwar par cover kar diya... turn karr ke khidki ke tarf gaya...smoke karrne laga...

kuch bhi nahin jab darmiyaan

phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwaab bunta

chaha ki de tujhko bhulaa

par yeh bhi mumkeen ho na saka

kya hai yeh maamla

jaanu na main jaanu na

dil...sambhal ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

dil...yahi rook ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

dil...sambhal ja zara

phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

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Prisha fresh ho kar bahar aayi...!!! dekha...maid khadi thi...

Prisha:-"kya hua...

Maid:-"aap ke liye khana le aayun...???

Prisha:-"nahi abhi toh sirf sham ke 7 hi baje hain...main thoda late dinner karrti hun...!!! tum ek kaam karrna... mera dinner 9 baje...yehi mere kamre me bhej dena...

Maid:-"thik hai madam...

Maid chali gayi...!!! Prisha ne apna saman rearrenge karrne ki sochi... bed ke paas hi ek wordrob dikha use...!!! wo gayi apne kapde uss me rakhne ko...wo hairan hui...wahan par pahle se hi kafi dresses rakhe hue the...

kafi fashionable aur naye disign ke kapde...use yaad aaya...Rajeev ne kaha tha ke use...apna look change karrna hai...

wo ankhen bandh karr ke kuch der khadi rahi...uss ke kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...

phir uss ne kuch tai kiya...aur apne kapde...rakhe uss word rob me...

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raat ke 9 baje...Prisha ke door par dastak hua...uss ne samjha ke sayad maid uss ka dinner le kar aayi hogi...

uss ne door khola toh hairan thi...Mohit jee khade the...!!! jo use dekh kar thoda surprised lage...

Prisha samajh nahi pa rahi thi kya kahe...wo chup rahi...

Mohit jee ne pahle bolna suru kiya:-" Shanti ne kaha ke tum apna dinner apne room me karrna chahti thi...par mujhe laga ke main itna bura inshan bhi nahi hun ke...tumhe dinner ke waqt meri company achhi na lage...!!! by the way...main Mohit Mathur hun...Rajeev ka uncle...

Prisha ne pahle socha ke unn se shake hand kare...phir pata nahi kaise... wo jhuk gayi unn ke pairon par...aur unn ke pair chuye...

Mohit jee bhi thoda hairan hue the...par unn ke chehre ki smile se pata chal raha tha ke...wo pehli hi mulakat se Prisha se impress hue the...

Prisha:-"aap chaliye...main abhi aati hun...

Mohit jee:-"thik hai beta...

Prisha jab dinner ke liye pahunchi toh dekha...dinning table par sirf Mohit jee baithe hue the...aur nazar unn ki T.V par thi...

Prisha aa kar unn ke samne baithi...thodi der me Rajeev aa kar pahuncha...uss ne Prisha ki taraf dekha bhi nahi...ek jagh baith te hue uss ne plate li...

Prisha ne use kuch pal tak dekha...dhundh rahi thi uss ki nazar Rajeev ke ander chupe hue un dardo ko...jo Dev ki wajah se use mile hain...par Rajeev kafi normal lagg raha tha...

Prisha:-"hello sir...

Rajeev ne nazar utha kar dekha...Prisha ko...phir aise react kiya jaise pehli baar dekh raha ho...phir kaha:-"hmm... i hope ki tumhe yahan koi taklif nahi hai...

Prisha:-"nahi sir...main thik hun...

Rajeev ne aur kuch nahi kaha...wo apne dinner k sath busy raha...

Mohit jee:-"Rajeev ne mujhe jab kaha ke...tum use join karr rahi ho... aur yahan hum dono ko sath rahogi...toh mujhe kafi achha laga...!!! kafi dino se baht akela feel karr raha tha main...!!! ab tum aa gayi ho...toh tum se thoda baat karrte hue achha lagega...!!! warna yeh super bug...(Rajeev)... toh hamesha apne laptop me busy rehta hai...mere liye iss ke paas time hi nahi hai...

Prisha ne iss ke jawab me bass mushkura diya...

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cut to Mitali n Ashwin...

Ashwin baitha smoke karr raha tha...!!! Mitali kahin bahar gayi thi...wo ghar k ander aayi toh dekha...Ashwin ko...

Mitali:-"aise yahan kyoun baithe ho...

Ashwin:-"aaj ek baht hi khubshurat ladki ko dekha...

Mitali ne ek beparwah mushkurahat apne face par late hue...apni room ki taraf jate hue kaha:-"iss me naya kya hai...!!! teri nazar toh roz hi aisi ladkiyon ko dhundhti rehti hai...!!! aur phir tu unn ke sath apni marzi azma kar hi damm leta hai...

itna keh kar wo apne kamre ki taraf jane lagi...

piche se Ashwin ne kaha:-"par mujhe wo ladki...Rajeev ke car me dikhi...

Mitali chaunki...turn karr ke Ashwin ki tarf dekha...jo iss waqt...cigg ko ashtrey me dall ne ke baad...beer ka bottle pakde khada tha...

Mitali:-"Rajeev ki car me...???"

Ashwin ne beer apne muh se lagaya...phir kaha:-"hmm...Rajeev ki car me...??? pichli seat par baithi hui thi...aise...jaise wo uss car ki malkin ho...!!! aur Arjun...car ke aage...driver ke paas baitha hua tha...!!! jab meri car se uss k car ki takkar hui aur maine uss driver ko gali di...toh uss ladki ne car chalate hue...jaan bujh kar meri car ko takkar mari... aur head lite tod kar chali gayi...

Mitali...Ashwin ke samne aa kar khadi hui...woh kafi shocked lagg rahi thi...

Ashwin use yun dekh mushkuraya aur kaha:-"kya hua...aisi kyoun shaqal bana rakhi hai...??? tujhe uss ladki se jalan toh nahi ho rahi...ke woh Rajeev ki car me kya karr rahi thi...!!! vaise haan...wo ladki thi toh baht khubshurat...!!! lekin wo rajeev k car mE kya karr rahi thi...ye kafi mushkil sawal hai...

Mitali:-"Prisha...

Ashwin...chaunka...aur kaha:-"Kya...

Mitali:-"tum ne uss ladki ko thik se dekha hai...kahin wo Prisha toh nahi...

Ashwin:-"kya bakwas karr rahi ho...Prisha yahan kaise...aur wo bhi Rajeev ke car me...tum pagal toh nahi ho gayi...

Mitali bina kuch bole hi jaldi me phir se bahar chali gayi...aur uss k car ke start hone ki awaz aayi...

Ashwin ne beer ka bottle apne muh se lagate hue kaha:-"pagal ho gayi hai...her waqt ise lagta hai ke iss se koi Rajeev ko cheen karr le jayega...huh...

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Cut to Rajeev's mansion...

Mohit jee:-"vaise...tumhara naam kya hai beta...???"

unhone pyar se Prisha ki taraf dekh karr kaha...!!! Prisha ne nazar uthaya...aur dekha...samne ki door se ek ladki ander aa rahi thi...

Prisha:-" mera naam Prisha hai...

Mohit jee ne hairani se uss ki taraf dekha...jab ki Mitali ke pair rukk gaye the...main door ke paas hi...

Prisha ne apni baat complite ki aur kahi:-"mera actuall name Saira hai...par mujhe ye naam pasand nahi tha isi liye maine ye naam change karr ke Prisha rakh diya hai...!!! kya hua...aap ko ye naam pasand nahi...

Prisha ne Rajeev ki tarf dekh kar Mohit jee se sawal pucha...

Mohit jee...jo thoda distracted lagg rahe the...unhone kaha:-"baht pyara naam chuna hai tumne beta...!!! iss naam ki ek ladki ko toh main bhi janta tha...jo baht pyari thi...!!! par pata nahi wo ab kahan hai...

Prisha ne kafi mushkil se khud ko sambhala...khud se kaha:- "iss ka matlab...uncle aap ne mujeh abhi tak yaad rakha hai...???"

Mohit jee ke piche se kisi ke aane ki aahat hui...toh Mohit jee ne turn kiya...dekha...Mitali aa rahi thi...

Mohit jee:-"arey...Mitali...iss waqt kaise...

Mitali ka naam sunn kar...Prisha ne uss ki taraf dekha...!!! mitali uss ke ankhon me khud ke liye nafrat saaf dekh rahi thi...

aur Rajeev...laptop ki aadh me Prisha ke face par jo xpressions aaye the Mitali ko dekh kar...use dekhne me busy tha...

End of the Epi

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Hiiieee...

phir se 9th ko update karr rahi hun...😛!!! ek req hai sabhi se ki agar kisi bhi scene ko le kar aap confused ho jaye...toh puch lijiyega...main try karungi ke wo confusion clear kar saku...!!!

take care

love

Priya 😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

hey Priya sweety so 9th and ur update is here...good girl...me off to read the update...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

part 7
interesting...
waah i just loved Prisha's reply to that Ashwin...
and how did Mitali find that the gal is Prisha?
Prisha was so shocked to see Dev's pic...
wow one side mirror...
awesome...
now Miltali is here...
and u had to stop at the right moment...grrr...
cont soon dear...

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

HI PRIYA🤗 HOW ARE U?

WOW KYA SCEAN THA PRISHA AUR ASWIN KA👏 YEH GORILA PATA NAHI KAHA KAHA SE TAPAK PADHTA HAIN DONO BHAI BEHAN KI JODI KISI KO CHAIN SE REHNE HI NAHI DETI.😡😡.😡..UFF AGAR YEH DONO SAMNE AA JAYE NA TOH RAJEEV AUR PRISHA SE PEHLE MAIN IN DONO KA BHURTA BANA DOON😉😡😆

ARE PRISHA KO SIRF CAR KI HEAD LIGHT HI NAHI BALKI USKE HATH PAIR BHI TOD NE CHAHIYE KHAIR ABHI NAHI TOH DAIR SE HI SAHI US TIME KA INTAZAR KARUNGI..😆😆😉

OH SOO SAD PRISHA KO KITNA BADA SHOCK LAGA NA DEV KI DEATH SE KITNA ROI BECHARI SOO SADD... OOO MERA RAJ BHI KITNA SAD HO GYA..😒

HMM SO RAJEEV NE APNE AUR PRISHA KE ROOM ME ONE WAY MIRROR LAGWAYA HAIN GOOD CHALO ISSE WOH USE DEKH TOH SAKEKGA ..😉😳😉

UFF! YEH ASHWIN PRISHA KE HI NAHI HAR LADKI KE PICHE PADA REHTA HAIN AUR YEH MITALI EK MINUTE KE LIYE PRISHA KO KOSNA BAND NAHI KAR SAKTI...😡😡😡

OH GOD KAHI MITALI NE SAIRA AUR PRISHA WALI BAAT TOH NAHI SUN LI 😲😲

CONT'SOON

LOVE❤️

AYUSHI.⭐️

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Hi Priya

Update was just brilliant..This fiction is completely different form watever u have written before and trust me Priya I thought u were gr8 in comedy but u gave me a surprise by writing such an intense story like this.👏👏👏👏

u r rocking in this too..😊😊👍🏼⭐️⭐️

Ashwin and Prisha's meeting was really interesting.. Ashwin was quite smitten by her beauty and Prisha was mad with ragePrisha did the right thing by breaking the headlights of his car.😆😆😆

she has recognized him and she wanted to teach him a gud lesson coz he had insulted Arjun.

Arjun was quite happy witnessing all this..😆😆

Prisha was so shocked to know that Dev is no more.she broked up completely..he was her very gud friend.

Rajeev was noticing all this without her knowing and he cud feel her pian too.

Arjun has come quite close to Rajeev..Rajeev too feels some kind of kinship with him.

that scene was really emotional where Rajeev collected Prisha's tears and offered them to Dev.😭😭

I can understand that mirror concept..i remember seeing it in one movie Humraaz..yahan bhi yeh mirror Raj and Prisha ko kareeb aane mein kaafi important role play karega..😃

But wat is Raj searching in Prisha..I think he feels that Prisha had some special feelings for Dev.

The highlight of this update was the mirror scene where both Prisha and Raj were standing in separate rooms but their hands were touching via that mirror.😊

Mohitji seems to b quite impressed with Prisha. He too feels lonely..He too remembers Prisha Sharma.

Prisha was so happy to hear this.

Mitali is really possessive abt Rajeev and thats why she came to check on Prisha after hearing abt her from Ashwin.😡😡😡🤢

Waiting for the next update.😃

Bye

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

😆 😆 first major, then Raunak 😳😳 now mathur saab 😳😳 all together 😍 I am loving it 😳😳 "parapaaapa😆😆😆

as 4 part 😳😳 its wonderful 👏👏👏

Prisha ka gussa 😆😆 like hero 😳😳 heroine ko bhi gussa extreme mein aata hai 😆😆😆 & as Rajeev said 😆😆😆 sirf headlight kyun todi ...sheeshe bhi todne the 😆😆😆

Aww so prisha darling is here 😃 😃 ...Rajeev ke ghar 😍...
😃
Arjun 😛😛 ...Rajeev bilkul darawne nahi hai 😍 ...
& how smart Rajeev... 😳😳 that mirror /glass in room... 😆😆😆 prisha par har pal nazar rakh sako 👏😆... loved Rajeev's new name 😳😳 "superbug" 😆😆😆

Mitali darling is here 😆😆😆...wana see who gona make her shut up our hero 😳😳😳 or heroine 😆

keep on continuing soon 😛😛😃
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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#330

hey priya nice update ...loved it good job!!!!

finally u updated...!!!!

yeh prisha to buhut naughty hai...ashwin ke car thok di🤣...koi nahi...waise bhi he deserve more then that!!!!

so rajeev STILL feels for prisha😍... at least that's what i think!!!!😆

awww mohit jee still remember that fun-loving girl...prisha!!!!...so sweet!!!

i can bet that it was NOT a suicide...it was all planed by those two!!!!

eeekkk ashwin n mitali r gross!!!!!...i just don't like em!!!!

ooohhooo rajeev looking at prisha throu lappy...aur ti aur kamre main kya sheesha laguaya hai yaar...usse to camera ke bhi zaroorat nahi...not bad...smart!!!!!

plz update soon ...as i am expecting the next update in 19th😉

love u so u better take care of ur self😆

esha😈

Edited by backy - 13 years ago