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LOL!! My Khufia source wont be too happy with this development.. 😛I see your point of view.. But from a writers point of view i was trying firstly, to create an element of humor in the fact that both were being psychotic.. Also that the tables have turned..plus.. In my opinion, this wasnt out of character for Armaan.. the whole being scared of Shashank part.. coz the Armaan that we've seen in DMG never faced such a situation.. he can handle most situations coolly.. even with Shashank.. But when they were so obviously caught by him, and no excuse was going to be a good excuse when it comes to the girlfriend's dad! I mean.. Technically he wasnt really wrong in wanting to spend some personal time with his fiancee.. and also.. he tried to wriggle out of it.. But he knew, that Shanky was also right (even if psychotically and sadistically) in behaving the way he was behaving.. In fact i forgot to write a line in that part.. one dialogue where Shanky tells him that he tries so hard to understand him and fails.. Just like Armaan cant understand him.. but probably will when he becomes the father of a daughter.. There are so many things that i forget.. LOL!.. I know i have confused you even more by posting this crap.. But the fact that Armaan's scared of Shanky was shown just in good fun.. and more subtly to show the fact that he respects his point of view even if he hates to admit it..Hope it makes sense.. and the Armaan Mallik will obviously avenge his FIL and fiancee soon enough.. but that needs to be figured..if you couldnt relate to it, then it was more that in a coudlnt get my point across in my writing itself.. hope what crap i've written here helps make more sense of it (which I highly doubt ).. LOLhope the story further is relatable (that's not even a word).. 😆Keep reading.. 😊
HAHAAHHHAHAHAAHAHA...don't worry...what you wrote did make sense to me...and maybe you are right...i was relating it to the Armaan fromDMG...he never had to go through this...
and yes, you have always portrayed the respect Armaan has for Shashank...so if by mentioning what you forgot to post...he does make his fear valid...
Also, like i had earlier said...i did like that part...it was just that i couldnt connect well with it... but now with the reasoning you gave...it does sound more strong and logical...
Any father would react that way...and any son-in-law who is always caught doing something or the other fishy by his FIL...if falls into such a grave situation would react that way...
And yaaa i forgot to mention...i almost fell of my chair reading that part...the humour was amazing in that and the one before that too...
Ohh btw...have you ever thought of turning this story into a book?? Armaan Riddhima and Sanjeevani might land you into copyright issues...so how about changing the character names??
Do think upon this... coz i am sure it'll be a success...
and then ill proudly say...ohh the author is my friend...
P.S. I don't know where i got this above idea from and why did i mention it here coz its soo irrelevant to what we are talking but still i just felt like letting you know that u should book it...the story is actually that good... 😊
Please don't ban me after reading this... 😛
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