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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Big bigg biggg biggg congratulations on the new thread...! One of the longest running n most popular ff! And once again gr8 updt! Armaan n juhi were lovely! Cont soon n pls pm me too! U always forget to do so...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Zaps, i love your new siggie...i truly support The Bunny Tiger Movement...like cmon how can you not?!?! lol
and i see youve made a new banner, i love the picture but i liked the other one better...oh well this is nicee too and im sure you'll continue to make new ones :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zephyrr


Thanks Aditi.. Good to see you here.. Waise.. I heard from my khufia sources that you thought the story is being stretched a little.. 😛😆😆.. And I understand what you mean.. I feel the same actually.. But I hope the next few parts will dispel that feeling.. I'm going to try and move the story faster now..The entry of Dr. Juhi is most certainly going to bring back Armaan's painful past.. But Riddhima is going to try and get him over the pain.. Oops!! I almost gave away the plot.. LOL!! How she does that will have to be seen.. even i dont know for sure actually.. 😆
Keep reading.. and Thanks so much for the appreciation.. 😊




hahahahhahahaha...ill have to stop telling your khufia source things now...she leaks it out... 😉
honestly... i don't feel that the story is far stretched...in fact the more this story goes on the better coz by now you know how we all are addicted to it... 😊
But what i meant to tell her was that the last part before this on the 9th thread was obviously fun to read but somehow i couldnt connect with it...this thing was quite unusual coz u actually drift me into the DMG land... 😆 😆 but somehow i felt that Armaan is not like this...i know he is a tid bit scared of shashank...but he still has that charm to sway this man too...
i mean the way Armaan gets almost speechless and dumbfound when he sees Shashank these days is not Armaan according to me...
For me, he is the one who with his wit and humour, his spontaneity and good looks leaves everyone in a lull for a moment..Shashank too...
so that was what i was telling her...that i couldn;t connect well with this super scared Armaan...

I don't know...i might be wrong...or its the way you have etched your Armaan...its all in the right sense...
I hope you don't mind me pointing out what i felt...
According to me, if you would ask...i would want Armaan to be upright and give it back to Shashank in the right manner of course...subtly and the Armaan way...which makes Shashank fall for Armaan... ( of course...this one too in the normal way... ) 😉 😆

Anyways i am sorry...if i said anything u don't agree to...it is just my point of view... 😊
And lastly, after this longgg and super boring reply... Thanks for replying... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohh btw...the new siggy that you have used is veryyy pretty...

loved it totally...❤️ 😊
i seem to not recollect this scene...can you tell me which scene is this picture from...
Feel like watching DMG videos right now...ill begin with watching that video first... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi269




hahahahhahahaha...ill have to stop telling your khufia source things now...she leaks it out... 😉
honestly... i don't feel that the story is far stretched...in fact the more this story goes on the better coz by now you know how we all are addicted to it... 😊
But what i meant to tell her was that the last part before this on the 9th thread was obviously fun to read but somehow i couldnt connect with it...this thing was quite unusual coz u actually drift me into the DMG land... 😆 😆 but somehow i felt that Armaan is not like this...i know he is a tid bit scared of shashank...but he still has that charm to sway this man too...
i mean the way Armaan gets almost speechless and dumbfound when he sees Shashank these days is not Armaan according to me...
For me, he is the one who with his wit and humour, his spontaneity and good looks leaves everyone in a lull for a moment..Shashank too...
so that was what i was telling her...that i couldn;t connect well with this super scared Armaan...

I don't know...i might be wrong...or its the way you have etched your Armaan...its all in the right sense...
I hope you don't mind me pointing out what i felt...
According to me, if you would ask...i would want Armaan to be upright and give it back to Shashank in the right manner of course...subtly and the Armaan way...which makes Shashank fall for Armaan... ( of course...this one too in the normal way... ) 😉 😆

Anyways i am sorry...if i said anything u don't agree to...it is just my point of view... 😊
And lastly, after this longgg and super boring reply... Thanks for replying... 😊


LOL!! My Khufia source wont be too happy with this development.. 😛
I see your point of view.. But from a writers point of view i was trying firstly, to create an element of humor in the fact that both were being psychotic.. Also that the tables have turned..
plus.. In my opinion, this wasnt out of character for Armaan.. the whole being scared of Shashank part.. coz the Armaan that we've seen in DMG never faced such a situation.. he can handle most situations coolly.. even with Shashank.. But when they were so obviously caught by him, and no excuse was going to be a good excuse when it comes to the girlfriend's dad! I mean.. Technically he wasnt really wrong in wanting to spend some personal time with his fiancee.. and also.. he tried to wriggle out of it.. But he knew, that Shanky was also right (even if psychotically and sadistically) in behaving the way he was behaving.. In fact i forgot to write a line in that part.. one dialogue where Shanky tells him that he tries so hard to understand him and fails.. Just like Armaan cant understand him.. but probably will when he becomes the father of a daughter.. There are so many things that i forget.. LOL!.. I know i have confused you even more by posting this crap.. But the fact that Armaan's scared of Shanky was shown just in good fun.. and more subtly to show the fact that he respects his point of view even if he hates to admit it..
Hope it makes sense.. and the Armaan Mallik will obviously avenge his FIL and fiancee soon enough.. but that needs to be figured..
if you couldnt relate to it, then it was more that in a coudlnt get my point across in my writing itself.. hope what crap i've written here helps make more sense of it (which I highly doubt ).. LOL
hope the story further is relatable (that's not even a word).. 😆
Keep reading.. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi269

Ohh btw...the new siggy that you have used is veryyy pretty...

loved it totally...❤️ 😊
i seem to not recollect this scene...can you tell me which scene is this picture from...
Feel like watching DMG videos right now...ill begin with watching that video first... 😉


Are you calling 'the Bunny Tiger' pretty.. 😆

or are you talking about the picture on the first page.. That one's from before A loses his memory.. when he fights with R and imagines dancing with her in a pub or something..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nyxx

Zaps, i love your new siggie...i truly support The Bunny Tiger Movement...like cmon how can you not?!?! lol

and i see youve made a new banner, i love the picture but i liked the other one better...oh well this is nicee too and im sure you'll continue to make new ones :D


Thank you thank you.. The Bunny Tiger appreciates your participation in the movement.. You happen to be our first member!!A warm Welcome to you with a GRRR!!!!.. 😆😆

Thanks for mentioning the banner.. I didnt like it so much either.. but i cant find nice romantic pics to make a banner.. I'll make another one when i find one.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats zephyrr on ur new thread.continue wtitin sweetheart



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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have decided to break ties with 2 people on this thread...
Not that the two of them are not gaddars but i think i'm the bigger one, so before they blame me for being a gaddar...
I'm gonna say, "I dont know you two" 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anokhee

I have decided to break ties with 2 people on this thread...

Not that the two of them are not gaddars but i think i'm the bigger one, so before they blame me for being a gaddar...
I'm gonna say, "I dont know you two" 😛


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