FF Ye rishta kia kehlata hai...Updated part 12 p36

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

awsome update

lol khushi seducing arnav was soo kewl plzz cont soon x

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Khushi

@Happy_Khushi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

That was awesome!!!!! Just started reading it!!!!

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 8

SCENE 25:

Arnav and khushi rushes to meet anjali, payal and angad who looked really worried...

Anjali: kahan reh gaye they tum humain bula kar khud late...hum itni dair se call kar rahe hain call bhi nai pick kar rahe...kia hua tha tum theek to hona...

Arnav: Di main theek hun par aap mujhe saans to lene do...aur khud bhi lelo bus dekhte he sawalon ki train start hogayi...

Anjali: ek to hum tumhare liye kab se pareshan hai aur upar se tum hum se aise baat kar rahe ho...jao humain tumse koi baat nai karni CHOTEY!!

Khushi and Payal: (looked at each other and laughs)chotey!!

Arnav: (saw them laughing and got embarrased) Di at least yahan to mujhe chotey na kaho ye mera office hai...

Anjali: hum tumse koi baat nai karna chahte...

Arnav: acha baba i m sorry!! bus main traffic ki wja se late hogaya tha aur cell ki battery low hogayi thi is liye wo off tha... aur phr lift kharab hogai thi...

Angad: Ohhhoo!! anjali ab bus bhi karo bechara maafi bhi mang raha hai...aur waise bhi itna late hogaya hai ab kaam ki baat karain...

Arnav: thanx yar!! koi to hai jo meri side par hai... oh han kaam ki baat se yaad aya...lets go to the meeting hall wahan baat kartey hain...

Angad: wo sab to theek hai par teri partner kahan hai us se nai milwaoge...

Arnav: woh...(looks at khushi who was busy talking to payal) woh rahi wo...lets go main tujhe milwata hun us se...(they all goes to meet khushi whos standing with payal...) ye hai Miss khushi khanna my deal partner, aur Miss Khushi ye meri Di hain Anjali aur Ye mera friend Angad...

Khushi: (smiles and shake hands ) nice to meet you...

Payal: khushi tujhe pata hai anjali meri school friend bhi hai you know hum ek he class main parhtey they...aur aaj hum itne saal baad mil rahe hain...

Khushi: really thats great!!

Angad: waise aap se milkar bohat khushi hui...

Khushi: hmm aap photographer haina...waise aap se mil kar mujhe bhi khushi hui...aapko dekh kar nai lagta ke aap Mr ASR ke dost hain...i mean wo itne kharoos hain aur aap to bohat jolly hain...

Angad: i know... i know !! par kia karain dosti ki hai to nibhani to paregi...

Arnav: (sarcastically) agar tum dono meri tareefain karchuke ho to chalain...

Angad: nai abhi to baqi hai par tu itna keh raha hai to chalte hain...

Khushi: (smiles) han Mr. ASR ko meeting ki bohat jaldi haina...

Arnav: kyun tumhain nai hai...sara din yahi kharey reh kar apni friend se baatain karne ka irada hai...ladies park samjha hua hai mere office ko...ya koi kitty party chal rahi hai yaha...

Khushi: (ignoring what he said) jaldi to mujhe bhi hai...tumhari shakal zyada dair nai dekhna chahti na is liye...jitna jaldi hojaye utna acha hai...

Arnav: han jaise main to tumhari ek jhalak ke liye mar raha hun na...

Khushi: acha mujhe to pata hi nai thi ye baat...acha kia tumne bata diya...waise ho to tum bare flirt...

Arnav: what do u mean...and btw flirt ke bhi kuh rules hote hain ...tum jaisi larki ke saath kon flirt karega hann...

Khushi: acha ye baat hai...to lift main kia kar rahe they...apni flirting skills nai aazma rahe they...

Angad: wait!! wait! wait!! tum dono lift main ek saath band hogaye they...😲

Arnav and khushi: (both suddenly got embarrassed 😳)

Angad: phr bhi dono zinda bach gaye...😲😆 hairat hai...

Anjali and payal: kia tum dono lift main ek saath band hogaye they...phr kia hua...(shararat se)

Khushi: phr !! phr kia hua btadun arnav...

Arnav: 😕 han phr main bhi btadunga ke kia hua...

Khushi: (angry...)han to bta dena...

Anjali, Payal, Angad: (all were laughing seeing them embarrased)...han to kia hua tha lift main ...(suspicious look)

Khushi: wo arnav ne na ...hmm.(arnav stops her and puts his hand on her mouth to shut her and again got lost in her eyes while she was trying to remove his hand...now bg music Rabba Ve playin...)

Anjali, Payal, Angad: (shocked to see all this... mouth opens)

Arnav: (back to his senses...)wo kuch nai bus maine help maangne ki koshish ki thi n thats all...

Angad: acha bus yehi hua tha!! (comes close to arnav and whispers)beta tu ghar to chal phir pata chalega ke hua kia tha... filhal meeting kar lain...

Edited by hundma - 14 years ago

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

SCENE 26:

they all moves towards the meeting hall for the meeting...

Arnav: Miss Khushi wo tumhari friend kahan hai j fashion designer hai...

Khushi: Ye hai payal...ye humari help karegi ...

Arnav: good now shall we start...

Khushi: yeah sure...

then khushi and arnav explains everythin to them and what each of them has to do...

Khushi: any queries guyz...koi problem to nai haina kisi ko...

Angad: no not at all infact i really liked your idea...its different...

Anjali: han idea to waqai bohat acha hai...humne kabhi aisa fashion show pehle nai dekha...ye sach main sabse alag hoga...

Payal: bilkul theek keh rahe hain yeh log...

Khushi: (looks at arnav) han bus kuch logo ko ye idea acha nai laga tha...

Anjali: kis ko acha nai laga humain to bohat acha laga...koi bewakof he hoga jise ye nai pasand aya...

Angad: (whispers to arnav)aur agar main galat nai to wo mahaan shaksiyat tu hi haina...

Arnav: (looks angrily to angad) yaar main mazak kar raha tha tu to serious hojata hai...ok guys meeting is over lets get back to work from tomorrow...

Angad: (saluting arnav)Yes sir!!

Anjali, Khushi and Payal: (starts laughing at it)...

Anjali: kyun na hum sab aaj raat party karain ek naya club khula hai "CRATERS" suna hai bohat acha hai...

Payal: oh yeah!! why not...maine bhi suna hai iske barey main...i love it...kyun khushi acha haina tu bhi to itne time se kisi party main nai gai...and i know how much you love parties...

Khushi: Party!! hmm cool!!...hum zarur ayeinge...

Angad: Great to aaj raat ka scene on hai girls!!!

Arnav: i m not cumin to the party...u know i hate crowded places...

Angad: chal theek hai tu na aana...hum sab to party enjoy karainge...tu ghar pe rehna aur ache bachon ki tarha so jana hmm...

Arnav: acha to tumlog mujhe akela chor kar un logo ke saath party karogey...

Angad: to kia tu koi bachha hai...jo tujhe akele main dar lagega...chal koi baat nai agar tujhe dar lagena to baba hain arey wo guard un ke paas jakar so jana theek hai...

Arnav: angad tu pitey ga ab...

Angad: uff gussa...main dar gaya yarr...

Anjali: ab chalain bohat dair hogayi hai...

Khushi: (thinking acha he hai ye saruu nai aye to) anjali ab hum bhi chalte hain and see u at night...

Payal: bye Anjali...chal khushi humain bhi late hogaya hai dadi wait kar rahi hongi...

Khushi: Arey han...lets go...bye Angad, Anjali...aur han CHOTEY!!

Arnav: (looks at khushi angrily)...fuming...

to be continued...

Edited by hundma - 14 years ago

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armyofspooks

@armyofspooks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

gr8 update. i was reading it wen u sent me the pm😆

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paridhi22

@paridhi22

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

great update dear 👍🏼 liked it❤️ post more updates soon😳

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Flame.

@Flame.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Hey that was Awesome !! Waiting for the next parts 👍🏼

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

wondaful updates plzz cont soon

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Hey dear!!

Sorry for not posting before...😉

I've just read the last few updates!! They're really good. Bechara Arnav, I really feel sorry for him. I think its about time he got his own back on Khushi!!! She's so mouthy with him!!! Love the nok jhok though...keep up the great work. 👏👏

Thanks for the PM too...😊

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trinitynyx

@trinitynyx

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

I like the concept behind your work. However, I'd like to offer some constructive criticism.

The only real problem I see with your writing is grammer. Your grammer is ... not good, for a lack of better word. You don't seem to believe in it at all. I've noticed run on sentences and a lack of periods, commas, etc. These things are quite important when your writing. And boy, do you love your ellipsis (...)

I do like your character sketch though. I like the way you established your characters personalities early on.

Again, I'd like to say that this post is in no way meant to offend you or belittle your work. I've read other posts and people seem to like your writing. This post is my opinion and should be taken as such.

Good Luck!

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