FF Ye rishta kia kehlata hai...Updated part 12 p36

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paridhi22

@paridhi22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Awesome update 👏👏
Finally we got a passionate kiss from ASR to khushi 😍
Thanks dear for this dhamakedar update😉

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Hey dear!!

Loved the 2 updates. Anjali and Angad are really sweet.

Arnav and Khushi's scene was great. Khushi's driving poor Arnav so mad that he crashed the car!! Loved the last part though...so romantic!!

Update soon hun!!

😊

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

thanx to all of u dear...😃

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bhavnas4

@bhavnas4

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

nice...ur writing is really gud...

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.Aashna.

@.Aashna.

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Great update!!!!! yohooo we finally got a liplock. do continue soon.

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Riya Desai

@Vru_16

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

omg loved itt! especially the kiss hehe. update soon(:

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jodhaaakbar

@jodhaaakbar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

absolutely amazing! youwrite so well that you should have your own tv show! kya baat hain yaar. sachi really wonderful writing! you deserve major credit or something, i think your status should be changed from senior member to one of the if rockerz or something!! keep it up!

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jodhaaakbar

@jodhaaakbar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

that was so good, i like the way y iu have digressed from arnav and khushi and explored akaash's and payal's storyline aswell! at least in your version the two of them get to speak in the actual seial they have hardly said two words to each other!!

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jodhaaakbar

@jodhaaakbar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

hi sorry i've posted so many times its cause i'm reading all of the updates at once! omg they kissed! that was soo good and it was an angry kiss aswell which makes it even better! ahh arnav and khushi are my faves! your writing is pretty funny aswell i thought the bit where khushi says mujhe ghande aur sare huh cheeze khane ki aadat nahin hain (referring to arnav's dimaque) was sooo funny. lol!

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: jodhaaakbar
absolutely amazing! youwrite so well that you should have your own tv show! kya baat hain yaar. sachi really wonderful writing! you deserve major credit or something, i think your status should be changed from senior member to one of the if rockerz or something!! keep it up!

really!!😳 😊thanx alot dear...you guyz support me alot btw its my first FF ever, ARSHI approach me to started writing FF...😃