..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![2] {New LINK add} - Page 69

Originally posted by: sashazmohit

hey s3

just awesome updt asusual

love

sadi

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys awesome update loved it👏 hope nothing bad happenns to gunjan and samrat saves her feeling sad for mr n mrs nanda as they are very much worried abt gunjan n what is moinish upto ?do cont soon with the next part n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hi Soham,Sonia,Swati🤗...

1st of all SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRyyy For commenting so late...

Now I must Say this the whole update PART---30 Was just Superb...MIND Blowing,awesome , fantabulous and Out Standing...and I MEAN IT...Part-30 was really very beautifully written...Each scene, each characters emotions were superbly described...I could feel each characters pain...U have written each Characters thoughts and emotions so well that i could imagine what this character must be feeling at this particular moment in this particular scene...Amazing and Fully rocking Update PART-30 Soham Sonia Swati...EXCELLENT S3👏 ...

I cannot say I like this scene or this scene because I LOVED EACH N EVERY SCENE from Samrats entering his office lost in thoughts of Gunjan...This scene was Really good.....it very well showed Samrats ANGER , EGO problem, Status thinking thoughts, his confused feelings n thoughts , his emotions, His pain of loosing Gunjan His deep feelings 4 Gunjan which he is denying and doesn't want 2 accept and wanting her back at any cost ...Each n every thought written by you S3 showed each of samrats emotions...👍🏼...Loved lost in thoughts samrat who was atlast thinking about Gunjan How he met her 1st time , then in office and how sweet her voice is these emotions showed samrats deep feelings for gunjan...and Samrat has realised his mistake his tears and pain proves it that he was wrong in being rude 2 Gunjan and he shouldnt have shouted on her and said bad words about her and her family n should have trusted her he knows he has given her pain BUT HE has realised this up to an extent NOT Fully...his ego is stopping him from admitting his mistake and saying sorry...BUT I LOVED IT THAT HE BOUGHT Gunjans Locket...😊...Samrat doesnt realise this that gunjan is a self respecting girl thats why she sold locket thats why she took scholarship for studies ...and this locket means the world 2 her ....I REALLY Want 2 read this scene when Gunjan gets her locket back ...HOW SHE WILL REACT? I know she will be very happy BUT WIll she take it from Samrat?? and I wonder when will get out of his thoughts about Middle class and rich class thinking....

I also loved the way u wrote samrats childhood part It was was so awesomely written that It bought tears 2 my eyes..tears 4 CHILD samrat and his mother 😭.tears for this grown man Samrat😭...Now i understand Why Samrat Doesnt give love and understand the meaning of love as HE never received Love AND love he had his mothers and Dia Maas that was taken from him everything was stolen from him by his own father... just reading and imaging How much pain they both suffered at the hands of Pratap n trishna bought tears 2 my eyes and anger for PRATAP-TRISHNA😡...how can a Man LEAVE His dying wife? How can he behave this way with his wife and son ...?😲...How can a women throw aways a childs childhood memories??😲..How can a TRISHNA be so cruel ..when Samrat needed his father he was sent 2 boarding and Not even allowed 2 enter his OWN home😲...TRISHNA😡... ... how can a person be so cruel so evil ..IF a child cant trust His father then whom should a CHILD TRUST...This was a very shocking scene😲...as it showed pratap shergill true colors But YOU S3 -SOHAM SONIA SWATI wrote this scene so so well that each conversation clearly showed HOW EVIL a MAN PARTAP SHERGILL is😡...And HOW CHEAP and B🤬 Trishna is...Very well written scene👏....How can he behave this way with his own Flesh n blood How can a father use his own son 4 his selfish moives...😲...These two Pratap-Trishna deserve each other ...They are seriously disgusting .😡🤢...What is he up to now? hasnt he spoiled his son's life enough...I was shocked when i learned that samrats entry in office 2 his marriage 2 Richa is part of Mr shergill's plan😲...But WHAT PLAN??😕...what can samrat not do if he marrys richa and what does Mr shergill mean By this remark when samrat comes to know the truth tab tak He wont be able 2 do anything ???😕BUT WHAT ?? these two are so cheap TRISHNA and PRATAP...😡...THEY Deserve everything Samrats anger and everything Kind of hatred Samrat is giving and will give them...But is TAKING REVENGE really worth it?? AS in real life also these type of people exist and these type of people like TRISHNA-PRATAP Never change...YES THEY DESERVE 2 be taught a lesson But Samrat shouldnot spoil his life in taking revenge from his father AS if samrats life gets spoiled it will make his father happy and HIs father doesnt deserve any happiness....YES I agree samrat Biggest weakness is HIS Aim --Aim of revenge and His ANGER and Mr shergill is taking advantage of his weakness ...I Know Samrat knows His Father real nature BUT Does he really know HOW EVIL His FATHER IS??? ...I really want 2 know what is this Evil man PRATAP and TRISHNA up to?? 😕😕...Very well described evilness of Pratap-trishna👍🏼...

DAI-MAA and Samrats conversation and scene was really interesting...Dia maa knows samrat so well ...her every action proved it.....She knows Samrat loves Gunjan but his Ego is not making him accept it and thats why 2 hide his feelings he is being rude 2 gunjan and thats why she left him...and DIA MAA and Samrat part where samrat was behaving like akid was very CUTE👍🏼😊...Loved it a lottt...and ENGAGEMENT RING man I can never forget this scene ...kasey samrat ne sales man sey ring buy kari and didnt give 2 richa even and this RING is Still with Him😊...WHO will wear it😉...and Locket scene and then remembering Gunjan and just thinking he has lost her showed Samrat deep pain ..ATLAST SAMRAT accepted HE LOVES GUNJAN😃...But he still plans to marry RICHA and wants Gunjan in his office so he can meet her everyday😲... ..MAN THis showed Samrat has not understood that Gunjan is a simple innocent and sweet girl and 4 her marriage is a sacred institution ..for her its unity of two souls and If Samrat Wants Gunjan in her life Forever He will have 2 give his relationship with gunjan a name ..he has 2 MARRY her and truly be hers only ...I hope samrat realizes this before he loses her....BUT WILL IT be so EASY for SAMRAT 2 get Gunjan back...Man samrat is so desperate u showed very well with this part when samrat called Gunjan's home and got all information This scene was very rockingly written Soham,Sonia , Swati👏👏👏...Mazza aa gaya read karkey...BHAVESH KUMAR😆...MAN MEMORIES FRESH HO GAYIN😉...and I agree with THE WORDS U WROTE and DAI MAA said that Marriage is sacred and MONEY NAME STATUS doesnt stay with a man forever Only True caring and loving relations stay with him...I LOVED THESE WORDS S3 ...👏...These words showed a mother way of making a son realise that he is going on the wrong path of destruction and spoiling his life ...its showed a Mother 's pain that her child life may be spoiled in his aim 2 achieve revenge....Very well written scene......👏...I hope samrat realizes it soon ...he is thinking about what DAI maa said and realizing it also but His AIM is more important 2 him ..I HOPE he stops before it destroys Him as His father is not WORTH his revenge even...and WHAT WRONG with Samrat why is he taking Medicines???😕😕...

SAMRAT want GUNJAN back at any cost ...In his life and office But I donot Think it will be thats easy 4 Him as he has hurt Gunjan lottt and destroyed her trust and self respect ...It wont be that easy for HIM and Thode papad toh belenay padegey SAMRAT KO😉...tabhi toh he will respect Gunjan and realize her VALUE...and THERE IS A saying also----" YEH ISHQ NAHI ASSAN ITNA TOH SAMAJ LIJIYE ...AAG ka dariya hai...TAIR kar jana hai"😉...KYOON THEEK KAHA NA SOHAM SWATI SONIA...😉...Lets see what happens...I hope I am right...

Gunjan Man she is so INNOCENT so sweet ..I just love this character...1st lost is sweet thoughts of rahul 😊...thinking about her time with him and how scared she used 2 be of him...etc ..and Then Samrats thoughts her each thought of samrat showed how much samrats anger and rude words had hurt Gunjan ..how much pain Samrat had given her ...Samrat rude words have shaken Gunjan and her trust ...Her each thought proved it ...and She is still so innocent that she thinks everything will be allright soon but will it be?? 😕...she sweetly thought of telling rahul every thing later what happened with samrat n her and that she is in love with samrat...But i wonder will it be allright when Gunjan tells rahul this truth ...How will RAHUL react...??? I Wonder how will GUNJAN REACT when she comes 2 know Samrat also loves her and her pain and samrats pain is same ..infact samrat pain is more ...and they share same loneliness also...I wonder how will gunjan feel n do when she know samrats life truth childhood truth how hurt he was since childhood??
I Know NOONE CAN TAKE A MOTHERS PLACE in ones heart A mother always has a special place BUT DAI MAA is like a mother 2 samrat and loves her also and Gunjan and DIA MAA can both heal samrat...BUT WILL SAMRAT OPEN UP and Let them heal him...I WONDER WHAT will happen next????😕😕...really want 2 know and excited 2 read further story...

ONCE AGAIN AWESOME AND ROCKING PART-30 SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI...LOVED READING EVERY part a lottt...Fantastic work S3👏...and SORRY 4 such a long comment ......actually part 30 is so rocking that I cant stop typing and I want 2 praise U all again and again 4 writing it so excellently and for describing each characters emotions beautifully...OUT STANDING WORK S3👏 ...

WILL COMMENT ON PART 31st LATEST PART By tomorrow ie sunday😊and PLSS PLSS DO PM ME WHENEVER you UPDATE SOHAM,SONIA ,SWATI......

LOVE your good friend
Gunjan😊😊...

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Originally posted by: arzzo

hey s3 i am reading ur ss with u always these days it really intresting and beautifull ss enjoying it alot going to comp in 2,3 days and waiting eagerly for ur pm for the cont of mbyph as its hard to wait soo long after such and awesome lst update nd wat about aphg ?when will it cont?

Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

nyc update as usual

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

ppl usually appreciate only deserving!!!!!! n u r exceptional!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: tanisha997

first of all thanks for giving me the link

and its awesome ff👏

pls add me pm list😳

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Sorry For Not Commenting Hon :( 😳 Really Buzy With College & All . Lovely Update, Can I Know If We Will See Who's Saves Gunjan & Why Monish Did This In The Next Update Or You Guyss Will Drag It Showing These Two Thingss ?! 😆

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

PART---31( latest part)...

HI Soham Sonia Swati-----S3 🤗...Awesome ,rocking , Mind blowing and Full on rocking update...👏...enjoyed reading a lottt...U wrote each scene and dialogues very well 👍🏼 and described each persons emotions so properly that I could Visualize in my mind that what this character must be feeling right now and how he must be acting at the moment...Very well written update ...👍🏼...Loved it a lottt...Each part was beautifully written...Amazing and FANTABULOUS UPDATE Soham,Sonia,Swati👏...


What a Start S3👍🏼..Wow!! what a start 👏...starting update PART --31st with Samrat checking himself in the Mirror and then MONISH entry was Awesome...Superb Start 👏....Samrat looking at his face again & again in the mirror ...What was he looking at?😉I know ..I think he was checking if his feelings were still visible in his face 😉😊...Man samrat kab tak run karega from his feelings... though He has accepted 2 himself that he loves Gunjan but still he doesn't want 2 admit n accept n has not realized that she means more 2 him then his AIM...But someday he will accept and realize...and then he will let everyone see his feelings that he loves Gunjan... I hope that day comes Soon😊...Man this Monish is so irritating..I just donot like Him😡...The way Monish he was 1st irritating samrat with his talk and then almost pushing him 2 enter .😡..I knew he was upto something...
Monish giving 10 lac cheque 2 samrat ...I knew n had guessed when he saw Gunjans papers that He would give cheque 2 samrat...But still I am shocked😲...U excellently showed thru monish actions that he can go 2 any lengths 2 have gunjan in his life...You S3 excellently showed Samrats anger when monish gave him cheque and Monish confusion why samrat is refusing cheque was also superbly shown...nice Thoughts and Dialogues of Monish-Samrat👍🏼...U very well showed thru each thoughts and dialogues Samrats ANGER at Monish 4 trying 2 come near Gunjan..4 trying 2 take Gunjan away from him , for blackmailing him ,His interest in deal and irritation because taking over KIWISH international is his dream and monish knows that and Monish has an upper hand... NOW Samrat has 2 choose...But I donot believe Monish will help samrat with take over...and I think it was MONISH who must have contacted Kiwish people..1 think I agree with Samrat wanting 2 clear misunderstanding with Gunjan by sending notice 2 her was a wrong move on samrats part...He is so Irritating...Monish irritates me also😡...I wonder what will Monish do If he comes 2 know Gunjan loves Samrat and Samrat is also in love with gunjan...?? ...I wonder will this Smile and smirk still remain on Monish's face??...I donot trust this Monish he can do anything...Wonder when will the time come when Samrat will choose Gunjan over any deal or anyone...Gunjan will be the most important person 4 Samrat...when will this happen ..Really excited to know this...I also feel that Samrat should over come his WEAKNESSES As everyone knows his weak points and trying 2 take advantage of his anger and weaknesses ......Everything from Monish over confidence to his arrogant attitude n grey nature , his anger and hatred 4 samrat and Samrats Anger irritation and hatred 4 Monish and possessiveness 4 Gunjan and His ambitious nature n love 4 gunjan and wanting both everything was excellently described in the whole Samrat-Monish part and thru samrats thoughts...Very well written Soham,Sonia,Swati👏...both Monish and Samrat are trying 2 protect Gunjan from each other...Monish is protecting Gunjan from Samrat and Samrat from Monish and RAHUL from both Monish and Samrat...PATA NAHI Kya hoga ...??😕😕..and Poor sweet innocent Gunjan doesnot know anything about this...I wonder what will happen when she finds out.??...

Samrat conversation with his Dad was also interesting it clearly showed Samrat's Anger and hatred 4 his father and his each thought after his dad left showed how much His father had hurt him ...and he still is destroying samrats life ..his visit 2 samrats office proved it ...that he had come their with a Motive which he had achieved and I donot think he was hurt By samrats words...Samrats dad is very selfish U showed this beautifully and Samrat emotions very also superbly penned S3...👏...I had tears in my eyes imagining Samrats pain😭...I know what he has chosen KIWISH but will Gunjan again join samrats office ? ...😕......LETs see What Happens...

MONISH-GUNJAN part was also amazing and interesting...Maza aa gaya read karkey...I donot believe he was just passing by...and the way he made gunjan accept his offer of job by smoothly clearing all hurdles showed his over confidence his arrogance and his desperation to make Gunjan his..and the way he made gunjan accept his offer of lift and Job showed His Nature...U very well showed thru each conversation and talk of Monish that he is a very clever person , Smooth talker and smooth operator ..who knows how 2 fulfill his plans ...and his talk with gunjan was interesting and His Lecture on FUEL was also interesting😉😆...Woh full on Gunjan par Line Maar raha tha and Gunjan man is so innocent and so simple she didnt understand it at all...But his talk bought a smile 2 gunjans face and 2 our face also😊...and he immediately understood that gunjan has quit her job 4 some reasons and His thought TUMHEY complain karna nahi aata proved he understood Gunjan very well......and His thoughts that he will make sure gunjan always laughs smiles and never cries was sweet ...This showed monish love 4 Gunjan .....But will he be able 2 keep that promise of never letting gunjan cry??I really want 2 know...As I feel he will hurt Gunjan and when the truth will be revealed what he did etc Will Gunjan or her family forgive him...And Gunjan is so innocent n simple girl that she doesnt understand why rahul hates Monish...? and she doesnt realize that Samrat is lot better then Monish ...and Monish is dangerous ...He can harm Gunjan ..Though he is saying he wont BUT I feel he will ...Let see whether my guess is correct or not..Gunjan hurt clearly showed Samrat had hurt her very much...Very well Penned Gunjans Innocent Nature and Monish Clever Nature ...Each talk proved how clever he is..WHEN will gunjan understand His Motive???...

When we Love someone very much we also try Never 2 hurt that person but sometimes we hurt that person the most in life But we deliberately never hurt the person we love BUT here Both Samrat and Monish are deliberately Trying 2 hurt Gunjan whom they claim 2 love...WHAT KIND of Love is this??😕...AND Gunjan -monish visiting His office ..In this every thought and action of Gunjan clearly showed her Nervousness and how scared and afraid she was...ur each description of Gunjan feelings was excellent.👏...I could Imagine How scared she must in Monish office Big and that also EMPTY man it was so scary I could feel it ...and description of office was beautifull👍🏼...MAN What is Monish Up too now Why empty his office floor for 2-3 hrs ??😕Whats his PLAN?? Why did he do this??😕😕...why did he bring gunjan to his office ?😕😕...I hope someone saves gunjan soon It looked like someone deliberately locked her ...Lets see what happens....whole Monish-gunjan part was superbly written S3👏......why was RM so worried what was the notice about??😕I feel it was notice 2 leave home ...I wonder what will nandas say an react when they come 2 know this all is done by monish...😕...Shardaji each emotion and feelings and each dialogue showed How worried she was 4 Gunjan.....Very well written a mothers emotions when daughter doesnt return home in time and a mother doesnt know where she is ..Then every mother gets as worried as RM is...Awesomely written shardajis worry 4 Gunjan and her feelings....👍🏼...

I WONDER what will happen NEXT ...I really want 2 know infact very excited 2 Know 😃...

WHEN IS THE NEXT Update SOHAM Sonia Swati?? PLSS Plss update SOONNN...And PLss Pls do PM me Whenever you update Soham, Sonia , Swati...😳...

Update SOONnn😊...

ONCE AGAIN ROCKING and FANTABULOUS UPDATE ...u didnt disappoint us at all..infact This Update was GR8 and FULLY MIND Blowing...👏...Superbly written...Loved reading it a lottt👍🏼...

Love your good friend
Gunjan😊😊... ...

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

When Are You Guyss Planning To Write//Post Next Part ?! 😳