..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![2] {New LINK add} - Page 68

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Waiting for the edit on your reserve Boss😉

Originally posted by: Grace7391

Superb Update..

Hope Samrat will listen to his heart before taking decision on Monish's proposal..

Waiting for the next update..to know wat Monish is upto to do with Gunjan..

Hope she will be safe ..

You guys hav penned Mr. and Mrs. Nanda concern about Gunjan so well.

Superb work S3..

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I am extremely sryy for late reply i was very busy in my colg work..

n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

PART-29 comment ---------------

Soham,Swati,Sonia Fantastic,Mind blowing,Rocking,Excellent and Out standing Update...very well written.Each Scene,each characters situation,emotions,feelings were superbly explained,described and written...AWESOME work S3...👏...Enjoyed reading and imagining a lottt👍🏼...

Man Rahul -gunjan scene I always love and enjoy reading ...they both r really cute....when Gunjan came home all wet the way Rahul asked questions without pause was very sweet scene..It showed Rahuls worry and concern 4 Gunjan ...So sweet😊...and Rahul and Rm conversation was also interesting the way RM teased rahul was so cute...In 2 min mein pehntey kya ho when RM Shorts and 1 vest when RM said this I was laughing😆...Moms always tease their son/daughters like this only😊..loved Mother-Son talk...When Gunjan came down and rahul was lost in his dreams after seeing her was very CUTE scene ..Thru rahul U described Gunjan's pure and Natural beauty excellently..I could imagine how beautiful she must be looking...when Rahul almost said in front of his Mom Gunjan is looking so beautiful...I was like Wow! aab bolega But he changed the topic..Man yeh RAHUL KAB bolega KAHIN DER NA HO JAYE...RM and gunjan scene was also beautiful ..Full Mother-daughter scene...a mother comforting her sad and crying daughter ...Love the bond between RM and Gunjan....👍🏼.It shows If a situation comes When Rm has 2 take sides though it will be difficult 4 her she will choose Gunjan As gunjan is pure and innocent and RM knows he can never do wrong...Rm scolding of Rahul was APT though RM didnt knew why Rahul was being so angry over a lost mobile as she didnt knew what happened with Gunjan yesterday BUT STILL RM was right RAHUL should control his anger ....RAHUL anger was justified also as He was not angry over mobile lost BUt he was concerned 4 Gunjan safety ..His anger showed his CONCERN n CARE FOR GUNJAN...Though Rahul has no control over his anger like samrat and he should learn 2 control It Gunjan is sensitive and soft person BUT I liked it Rahul realised his mistake ...RAHUL_GUNJAN scene was beautifull.the way Gunjan said SORRY 2 RAHUL was so sweet and cute ...I was smiling while I imagined this scene😊...and Rahul way of forgiving was also sweet ..But RAHUL Thinks MAY BE Gunjan is falling for him😲....I wonder what will rahul do If he knows Gunjan has fallen in Love with Samrat...?😕.....Samrat has hurt Gunjan very much her thoughts after coming back from office and her sadness showed it ...Sadness of what happened and of loosing her locket of her mother..U showed Gunjan feelings very well S3....When RAHUL Said MOBILE LENA HAI bas lena hai I loved this scene...Such a lovely and strong Bond they share...😊...excellently shown RAJAN strong BOND S3-Soham,SONIA, Swati👏...

Samrat lost in thoughts of gunjan was superbly shown👏...Man samrat is so confused...On one side he accepts that he was wrong in behaving this way with Gunjan on another side he doesnt want to say Sorry even and his Ego is coming in his way .....he cant take it Gunjan left without informing and meeting him he is taking it as an insult ...he knows Gunjan is sensitive and soft and he was wrong 2 behave this way but still he is giving explanations for his anger ...he realizes and not realizes also he was in the wrong...and he now wants gunjan in his office and life no matter what he has 2 do ...I hope he doesnt send Gunjan notice as this will be a mistake...samrats doesnt realise his biggest weakness is his anger and ambition 2 succeed and 2 hurt his Dad and when he is angry other person gets afraid and cant say anything as his anger doesnt let anyone speak...I HOPE samrat realizes his weakness soon before he loses something precious because of his angry nature...I wonder will Samrat Ego arrogant attitude and I am right always nature will it let him realize he is in wrong ...will he apologize 2 Gunjan??😕...VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN Samrat thoughts feelings confused feelings ..Excellent work S3👏...

now Monish is going 2 take advantage of Samrats BIGGEST weakness I wonder what is Monish up to???😕..he is so confusing KAB KYA KAREGA THIS MONISH PATA HI NAHI CHALTA I HATE MONISH😡......he says Rahuls family is his family still he is about 2 hurt them ...😕...But the way he came 2 meet Gunjan shocked me😲...He doesnt wants 2 protect Gunjan was sweet But I feel Monish will be the one who will hurt Gunjan the most As Gunjan knows what samrat is BUT Monish jo hai woh nahi dikta and Jo nahi hai woh dikta hai..he is a chamilion...I dislike MONISH...😡...WHAT Is he upto??and He doesnt even think 4 one second Gunjan may not want 2 be his wife...It is clear MONISH can go 2 any length 2 make Gunjan his wife ...pata nahi woh kya karega ??😕😕...Monish scene his evil nature and his arrogancy was nicely described S3...👏Good work My friends Soham, Sonia,Swati👍🏼...

RM-RD-Rahul scene was very sweet...Loved it a lottt...U showed very well a mothers emotions when her child is going abroad....shradhaji getting emotional about rahul going away from her 4 so long time was well described...every mother when a child is going away from her gives instruction do this dont eat this etc just like Rm said 2 rahul I loved this part also...and rahul hugging his Mom when she was emotional..Sweet scene...Rm-Rd talk with rahul about marriage and pota was lovely...this type of talk happens in every household...when a child gets older parents dreams of their child settling down 😊...and MOTHERS biggest worry kahin BETA foreign sey shadi karkey na aa jaye😆...loved this convo and Rd teasing Rm and when RAHUL said I LOVE GUNJANI was like WOW!! bol diya but he changes topic...MAN BOL DE RAHUL KAHIN ER NA HO JAYE...BUT ATLEAST he gave his parents hint that he likes someone...😊...RM-RD convo was also sweet...I wish Rahul knew his parents also want Gunjan 2 be their bahu an rahuls wife....I like RD -RM they dream of Gunjan as their bahu BUT they know Gunjan so well they know she will never say no So 1st they want 2 know What desires their children RAHUL-Gunjan have ?whether they dream of each other as life partners? Its good RM Rd apni marzi and wishes apne Children par nahi dalna chahatey😊...RM Rd are very sweet .VERY WELL WRITTEN RM-RD talk S3 ...It showed RD-RM are Lovely parents ...Infact in real life also parents try 2 fulfill their children wishes 1st ..and want their child happiness...U showed sweet parents in Rm-RD S3...Awesome scene 👏...
RAJAN Scene was so lovely..whole part of scene was excellent gunjan cooking 4 rahul rahul teasing Gunjan getting angry ...Gunjan getting emotional as RAHUL was leaving ...and rahul calming her ...telling he is just a phone call away he will come the moment she calls and She and his parents r most imp 2 him WOW!! so sweet ...whole scene was just LOVELY👏..loved RAJAN scene a lottt Soham,Swati, SONIA👍🏼...Excellent work S3👏👏👏...

Atlast I will say each male character wants Gunjan in his life...But none is thinking about WHAT GUNJAN wants? has anyone ever asked her what she wants?? Gunjan she doesnt even know Samrat, rahul, Monish feelings about her...I wonder what will rahul and Monish do of they know Gunjan feelings ...what if they know Gunjan loves Samrat? What will they Both do? AS all of then can go 2 any lengths 2 have gunjan in his life...Gunjan doesnt have many desires n dreams I know ...she is a very pure and sweet and simple girl...She will be the best wife...and GUNJANS WISHES COUNTS a lottt...WILL the male ever think about Gunjan wishes ????.😕...I wonder what will happen??😕...

ONCE AGAIN EXCELLENT AND AWESOME UPDATE PART29 Soham,Swati, Sonia-S3 ...loved it alottt👍🏼...superb work S3👏...After reading will comment on PART 30 and latest part 31 soon have read part 30 half just some part left ..WILL COMMENT SOON ...😊...

...I donot want 2 miss any updates of your FF...Plss pls Pm me whenever you update...😊...

LOVE your Good friend
GUNJAN...😊...

Originally posted by: karantakiar

amazing nd superb updty...
plzplz cnt soon
luv u
vritika

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Sorry for the late comment. Update was awesome. loved it like always. Sam-monish conversation was well written. Waiting eagerly to know what sam chooses, love or money? I really want samrat to choose gunjan, but i know that it is not easy for him. Let's see what he do! and u guys have written samrat's pov very nicely. Monish-gunjan scenes were great. I liked them a lot. he is really concerned for gunjan.I loved gunjan's simplicity and her innocence the most. not only in this upate, but through out the ff. she is so adorable. And i know it's not easy for her to forget eerything said by samrat. it must be painful to her. I really want samrat to something to her, which makes her happy when she remembes him, not hurt. Description of monish's office is nice. but what was his plan? Why had he made her lock in his cabin? Poor gunjan, she was totally scared. I just hope that he won't do anything wrong with her. And i can guess what were the papers given to nandas. I think they are the papers to notice them to vacate their flat. and i know it was monish's plan to make them shift to the appartment , he gifted to them. And thier concern for gunjan had shown well. It felt like they r gunjan's real parents who r worried about her. I hadn't felt that they r not her parents in any scene. It was so perfect. great job S3. Waiting eaerly for next upate. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: sashazmohit

hey s3

just awesome updt asusual

love

sadi

Originally posted by: lakshmi_SG

Superb update S3...loved each & every line of all the 4 parts. The highlight is again the internal conflicts samrat has undergone, loved the way you scripted the convo between samrat-monish. I am happy that samrat is clear with his feelings towards gunjan.

And the highlight for me is, when samrat decided to go with monish 's deal which is much against his feelings, but so as to win over his dad he has made his heart as hard as a rock...samrat's feelings were very well narrated by you people especially when he feels that he is losing gunjan for ever.

And finally the concern shown by Mr&Mrs Nanda for gunjan is so natural... looking forward for the mystery and I cant take the fact that monish is going to save her and be a super hero in her view, hope I am wrong .

Once again very well narrated update and quite interesting too.Sorry for the late reply...wonderful update.

@Joseph: Welcome back joseph, hope you are doing fine ... take good care of yourselves.

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Reserve😊.[I'll Edit after read all previous 3 Parts😳]

Edited :-

Hi S3 !! Really Sorry for my very-very late Reply😳... You know naa... I am too much lazy these days.🥱. (Just like this🥱 😆) Ok , Now,come to the Update... Finally I completed to read all rest parts😊
It was really interesting n good treat for me... Because,It was just like some very good episodes of a Super show.😊 I loved this story move... and most importantly...Your presentation of Characters n their emotions...Its looking so natural n very easy for visualization of each n every part in-front of our eyes. Dio part is base of this FF so,I don't want to comment that part...😉 but,I must say...your Narration part is excellent.👏 👏 👏 Outstanding work👏 👏 each n every scene description was so easy to realized the whole situation n emotions...Totally Awesome work.👏👏 👏

Every lines of these parts is so impressive...especially 'Thoughts' lines...as a writer POV,I understand, how much it difficult to express Characters feelings from their words😳.specially maintaining a flawless' Thoughts Graph'.😕. You guys are amazing in this work.👏 👏 👏.

Presentation with very suitable Pics is so catchy for eyes...I loved your choice of Pic. selection...Its so situational👏 n impressive.😊

This time I know the reason for late😳 so,I'll not say do continue soon...😳 😆. But,Yes eagerly waiting for Next part😳.Thanks for the PM...

[[ Sorry Guys for my long n boring Reply😳 Actually,this is the side effect of my Surgery😳...My Friends told me... " Bone ke saath-saath ,galti se iske Brain ki bhi surgery ho gayi hai😆 , Because, after Surgery he is behaving like 'Chatter Box'😲." But,I don't pay attention to them...😡Because I know,They all are Jealous from my work-free Days.😆😊 Jerks Peoples😡... Kisi ko rest karte dekh hi nahin sakte 😳 😆]]
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