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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2



Thank you for commenting regularly on our updates.๐Ÿ˜Š Glad that you appreciate our updates.

ppl usually appreciate only deserving!!!!!! n u r exceptional!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Reserve๐Ÿ˜Š.[I'll Edit after read all previous 3 Parts๐Ÿ˜ณ]



Waiting for the edit on your reserve Boss๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update S3...loved each & every line of all the 4 parts. The highlight is again the internal conflicts samrat has undergone, loved the way you scripted the convo between samrat-monish. I am happy that samrat is clear with his feelings towards gunjan.

And the highlight for me is, when samrat decided to go with monish 's deal which is much against his feelings, but so as to win over his dad he has made his heart as hard as a rock...samrat's feelings were very well narrated by you people especially when he feels that he is losing gunjan for ever.

And finally the concern shown by Mr&Mrs Nanda for gunjan is so natural... looking forward for the mystery and I cant take the fact that monish is going to save her and be a super hero in her view, hope I am wrong .

Once again very well narrated update and quite interesting too.Sorry for the late reply...wonderful update.

@Joseph: Welcome back joseph, hope you are doing fine ... take good care of yourselves.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

PART-26th --BlackMonday...


S3--Soham,Swati,Sonia First of all SORRY 4 SO LATE REPLY...I had read it before only but reply nahi kar payi and Now Replying So latee----------------SORRY Friends...

Part26th was just awesome.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...I loved reading it 3rd time very very much ...It was Superb,Outstanding and amazing and Gr8 ...very well written ...each scene and characters emotions were very superbly described...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...Loved reading it very very much...GOOD work S3-Soham, Swati, Sonia๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

Each scene was amazing...Gunjan-Samrat scene in the car was just fabulous......OMG! Gunjan is so cute ...๐Ÿ˜Š...she was scared of fast driving and 2 overcome her fear she was chanting HANUMAN CHALISA...But it didnt tell samrat even once 2 Plss drive slow ...TILL Samrat asked her himself what was wrong with her and what she was chanting๐Ÿ˜Š...But what was nice was inspite of being angry samrat Drove slow after he learned Gunjan was scared of fast driving and the way he was stealing glances at her while driving๐Ÿ˜‰...Wow!!...Car drive scene was very Sweet...and Gunjan scary emotions n innocent nature was well described and very well shown S3๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘......

Samrat 1 moment he is sweet and nice next Moment full of anger Man we will never understand this samrat ...U know I love and Hate this samrat at the same time....he was angry because Gunjan didnt bring the file from car okay but the way he behaved was Not good๐Ÿ˜ก...when Gunjan asked the way 2 parking the way he answered was wrong ..Instead Of insulting gunjan by saying things like how can u come 2 this Hotel u cant afford it ๐Ÿ˜ก...Is THIS THE WAY 2 TALK??๐Ÿ˜ก. he could have simply answered and told way...BEING Rich doesnt make samrat or anyone in life superior ...U r superior Because of your good ways and Good qualities and HONESTY......But I just knew Samrat will react this way only as for him class matters ...and his glaring at VALET man was also Wrong ...CANT he behave POLITELY๐Ÿ˜ก...and His reaction bec he didnt get TENDER OMG!! I am shocked just 4 1 tender How could He fire all newcomers ...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก...Cant anyone Make mistakes??...I am just hating this samrat ๐Ÿ˜ก...But samrat being samrat His reactions now doesn't surprise me much But his behavior with Gunjan shocked me HE BROKE the Phone just because she was talking 2 Monish ๐Ÿ˜ฒ and his action MAN ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก...He made Gunjan cry ๐Ÿ˜กand poor Girl couldnt say anything๐Ÿ˜ญ...Samrat doesnt have control over his anger and feelings and His nature and views of life are such that he hides behinds his anger 2 hide his emotions and U showed Samrat anger and emotions and Gunjan pain
very well S3 soham,Sonia,Swati....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

Poor Gunjan why doesnt anyone let her speak 1st samrat now Monish on the Moble he just assumes gunjan is free 2 MEET Him Man Monish is so arrogant...Gunjan has 2 deal with 2 arrogant males...

And THIS Gautam was YUCK and CREEP๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ก...the way he was behaving towards Gunjan ..his every word had double meaning....๐Ÿ˜ก.๐Ÿ˜ก...and Gunjan poor girl had too deal with it and couldnt say anything ...But Samrat understood and when he 2 finish the meeting fast said we have 2 go 4 another meeting etc .MAN Gunjan Is so innocent She didnt even understand Why samrat said these words...Such a pure soul GUNJAN is.....and Samrat behaved so so badly with her after report file went missing...Samrat's each word destroyed Gunjan her character ..It devastated and shattered her...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...It gave her lotss pain I could Just feel and imagine GUNJAN pain Soham,SONIA, SWATI๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...U wrote her feelings her thoughts her emotions so well when samrat was shouting and accusing her that Gunjan pain bought tears 2 my eyes also๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...Very well written each emotion of pain of Gunjan S3-Soham,Sonia, SWATI๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

AS 4 Samrat๐Ÿ˜ก...๐Ÿ˜ก...๐Ÿ˜ก...HOW CAN A PERSON BEHAVE LIKE HE DID WITH GUNJAN???? he called her So many words in a FIT of anger,RAGE and Insecurity ,2 hide his emotions and JEALOUSY BUt this is not the way 2 behave with ANYONE in life no matter how angry U are ..U should always know How 2 control ur temper and How 2 talk 2 a girl...BUT AS THEY SAY WHEN A person is himself GUILTY , When a person is JEALOUS and when a person is in deep RAGE and ANGER HE Looses control over his emotions and thoughts and actions and JUST KEEPS ON SHOUTING ...He never realizes How he is BEHAVING ...he never sees that his actions her hurting the other person deeply and I feel that Everyone should have control over their Jealousy and DEEP Anger and we should think twice before we speak as sometimes our word may Hurt another person ...Samrat in FIT of rage behaved so Badly with Gunjan and hurt her BUT he will realize it 1 day ...U very well showed Soham, Swati sonia that how a person can behave in a FIT of anger rage and Jealousy...Good work S3 ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

RAHUL -MONISH conversation was interesting and very well written
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ..ur each dialogue which rahul spoke made clear 2 Monish that rahul understands what type of person Monish is... Rahul and monish donot like one another It was clear thru each dialogue ...I liked What rahul said 2 monish he knows his intentions and not 2 interfere in his family life...I donot like Monish myself ..But as they say everything is fair in Love n war BUt is everything really FAIR??๐Ÿ˜•...

THOUGH I will Say 1 thing 3 MEN RAHUL, MONISH ,Samrat each is thinking of himself and acting out of Jealousy ...BUt None is thinking What GUNJAN wants ..WHY? ...WHAT should I call these 3 MEN ??...

TITLE 4 This PART 26 BLACK MONDAY is an APT title Soham, Sonia, Swati ..This was indeed a black Monday 4 every character But Especially 4 GUNJAN...MAN How hurts she was๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...

Awesome PART 26th Soham, SWATI, SONIA...VERY VERY WELL MADE ..I loved reading it very much...OUT-Standing work S3๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

I will reply 2 other parts also Soon ...SORRY FOR SO LATE REPLY...

I am desperate 2 read further ...Plss PM ME LINK of latest part as I have NOT recieved It ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ...I will reply On that also after finishing my reply on old parts ...PLSS PM me LINk I will save it...LINK NAHI HOGA toh HOW WILL I READ FURTHER UPDATES๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...And I love Ur FF APHG and MBYPH very much and I donot want 2 Miss Any update..I will be thankfull for LINKS ...


DO PM ME WHENEVER U Update plss...

LOVE Your good friend
GUNJAN๐Ÿ˜Š...


Thanx GUNJAN for this wonderful ((but,belated๐Ÿ˜†) feed-back.Smile. Its really very incurraging for us... Actually,Thanx 4 our Memory-Refresh๐Ÿ˜†. I personally think,BLACK-MONDAY part was the toughest Part for us...B'coz ,V never wrote this types of scenes,B4.
'Car scene' idea given by JOSEPH.Actually,Yeh scene Part-15/17 mein aana tha but, wahaan suit nahin kar raha tha so,V edited that scene there. SAMRAT view about 'Middle Class' people is not so good..and this fact always reflect by his rude comment. Definitely,GUNJAN hurts by his comment . 'Phone broken' scene was a instant reaction of a Angry man...Thanks for liking these all scenes.
Not,only SAMRAT & MONISH...,RAHUL is also included in this list..so,actualy she is dealing with 3 same type Nature person. But, MONISH behavior for her is more polite and soft. SAMRAT all words for her is so rude and hard... She couldn't imagine this type of situation in her life so,she is deeply hurt. Off course,RAHUL hates MONISH due to his Image...and this is Natuaral thing for him.
Yes,None is thinking What GUNJAN wants ...?? and this is the Main concept of this story...They all are totally opposite from typical 'HERO'. Their Aim , Wish & Desire is more important then anything else. Sometime,they behave like a Negative character but,they are not.
Thanx again for this long feed-back.SmileV R waiting for your rest Comments... ๐Ÿ˜ณ so,do reply soon.
Edited by SIZZZLER - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

HEY Joseph and S3...๐Ÿ˜Š

Hope Joseph will be much better than before now'..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Guys what a scary update it was'.IDIOAT MONISH''๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

he ruined my Sajan's meeting scene...stupid ...though Samrat Monish scene was Fabulouse but let me say na...coz I was waiting for Sajan's meting since last update'.but bcoz of this Monish..๐Ÿ˜ก...Sajan ka wait kar rahe the or mil gai Gunjan monish ki...but as usual like always this part with its every line was so meaningful n to the point...๐Ÿ‘

But the scene was too gud...how cunningly he traped Samrat...poor Samrat..

btw first time I have seen Samrat in this kind of trouble..i mean he is a succesfull and intelligent bussinessman..cant tolerate anykind of lose of anything in his life'he always win n won in his goal..whatever he wants to achieve'.but this time Monish ne uski dukhti rag pe paaon rakh dia'comparison btween His dream to be world's successful bussinessman and on the other side is Gunjan'..๐Ÿ˜•

2nd powerfull confrontation between Monish and Samrat

And it was again mind blowing just like previouse..(wo yad he na richa k sath party me hui thi ek meeting)...๐Ÿ˜‰

Monish's cool n Sam's irritating behavior was written Superbly..all conversation between duo was Wonderful๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

But guys let me say...When Monish was giving check of 10 lac to sam it seemed like wo Gunjan ko khareed raha he...and then I thought ye check sammy is k mun pe mare ga...but then his 2nd proposal made me numb..๐Ÿ˜ฒ.then I thought now don't know...what would samrat choose...๐Ÿ˜•lets see..wese decision to us ne le hi lia he....

Then came monish gunjan meeting scene...it ws also a wonderful scene...beautifully written..Monish ki to wish poori ho gai...pehle mujhe lga wo teaser k kiss wala scene ho ga is me...or meri heartbeat b fast ho gai...Thanks God k nai tha...but gys kabi to hoga na...bs plzzz kiss nai karwana...

Okk coming to the recent part'.He was trying to be frank with Gunjan...wo 4 benefit wali baat jo thi...and then unknowingly Monish ne yad dila di Gunjan ko samrat ki..us din ki baat se...(Or us din se mujhe yad aya..sorry for distracting but I wanna say...Gunjan ko to ek bar ai...IPKKND ki bht saari episodes se mujhe bar bar yad ata he Sajan ka wo ek din..abi aj ki recent episode me b to arm pe fingers marks wala scene aya.sajan k ek hi scene me itni power thi or show me parts me ate hen us k scene..yelling on her...broken cell...holding her so tightly...scolding her n say anything wrong abt her family status abt her family etc etc'.arnav ek episode me ek scene deta he...hm ne ek sath read kar liye the yahan๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†)

Okk now again come to the point...I love the way when Gunjan immediately said abt samrat to Monish nahi nahii'๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ..unho ne kuch nai kaha...n blamed herself so easily...shez such a darling...i love her character very very very much..โค๏ธ...kyu na 3-3 pagal hon ge us k peeche phir...shez very innocent...therefore she cant understand his wild intentions for herself..neither she understood his meaningfull talks''.

but what does Monish want to do with her ? firstly in that particular para..his thoughts..me tumhe hurt nai karna chahta ..par na b nai sun skta..etc etc'guys plzz keep safe n save Gunjan...that office part is really very very scared...I hate this guy veyyy much...๐Ÿ˜ก.if he truly loves her..then how can he do something wrong with her...wese I hope so k uski intentions wrong na hon..n may be wo aesa wesa kch kare b na..coz aese to usko kabhi b gunjan ka rishta nai milne lga...only in that case im completely agree with Rahul'.atleast gunjan Monish k sath to kaam na kare...agr samrat k sath nai karna to..Rahul ki new company hi theek he๐Ÿ˜‰...Office part was Superb but very scary....why did he lock her in his cabin'..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Nanda house scene was beautiful...a mother's care for her daughter was seen awesomly...its so natural and real...love this scene a lot...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

Lastly sam and his dad scene was Mind blowing...Superb...Awesome...bcoz my one most particular line was there na...in that para..whhole conversation was Too Gud'specially that tameez n tehzeeb line was Fantastic..โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ

But most touchy and special dialogues were...again Sam's thoguht after leaving his Dad.. "mai aesa nai tha..lekin apki wja se me ye ban gya...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...and tab me gunjan ko kabhi khud se door nahhi jane deta.,," here I was like hayeee poor sammy.๐Ÿ˜ญ...really I felt very very sorry for him..but we all know Gunjan aa jae gi uski life me'.definitely na'agr na ai to hm apna sara feed back wapis le len ge S3 and joseph'๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Now continue soon...eagerly waiting for the next part..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for the pm

Soory guys didnt read APHG teaser till yet..will read very soon ..plz bear with me...

Hi RiJA !! Thanx for your so Nice & Detail feed-back.Your all words R very precious for us. Yes, JOSEPH is much better then before now...But,rest is a very powerful medicine for him so,taking rest.๐Ÿ˜ณ.
And,about SaJan meetings assumptions... V told U naa...don't read this story with any pre-set mind...B'coz,U'll get many unexpected scenes here.๐Ÿ˜ณ. Sorry,for disappointment... But,don't worry SaJan meeting scene is coming very soon...
Thanx for liking MONiSH-GUNJAN and SAMRAT-MONiSH confrontatation scene.and,I am surprised to see, U still remember 1st confrontation of SAM-MONiSH.scene...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Its means... Now,more carefully write karna hoga... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ.SAMRAT will be SAMRAT... He is unexpected...
His confusion would b create some more interesting scenes๐Ÿ˜ณ so,Wait n Watch.But,this time MONiSH is not less then him.
SAMRAT aim/target is so clear...He wants RiCHA for his ambitious purpose. He loves GUNJAN but,same time he knows she is useless for his Plan...and this fact reflects his Negative side. GUNJAN admits the reality... she wants to forget him... Now,she wants to leave for her Family[NANDA's Family] and their happiness. MONiSH knows,the meaning of Family for her...so,he is ready for his Plan. But,Can SAMRAT leave her so,easily...?? This is the Big question.๐Ÿ˜•
GuNish kiising sequence is coming in Part-33...but,don't judge that scene B4 the reading of Part-34.It will b so situational and important part of this story... and thanx for compare this story to IPKKND. Actually,V all R so surpriesd after seeing these all scenes in parts wise...KHUSHI's past description scene was also surprising... She is also orphan from 8 yrs. age, Stars thing , Parents death reason and feared from speed. Yeh Kuchh zyada hi similar hota ja raha hai๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜† .
Yes,The character of GUNJAN is extra sweet here...totally different from all 3 Guys cahracters...so,Opposite attracts.๐Ÿ˜ณ V 'll b continue Office scene in Next part...so,this time 'No Comment' for that part... But,trust us... Its very interesting turn. And,V forword your suggestion to GUNJAN (Usse kis ke saath kaam karna chahiye๐Ÿ˜ณ Now,she can decide,herself...๐Ÿ˜ณ). and thanx for liking SAM-SD scene... That 'Tameez-Tehzeeb' line was our favourite too. (Hamari URDU bhi improve kar rahi hai๐Ÿ˜†).
Thanx again for this Nice feed-back.V'll B update very soon.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry for the late comment. Update was awesome. loved it like always. Sam-monish conversation was well written. Waiting eagerly to know what sam chooses, love or money? I really want samrat to choose gunjan, but i know that it is not easy for him. Let's see what he do! and u guys have written samrat's pov very nicely. Monish-gunjan scenes were great. I liked them a lot. he is really concerned for gunjan.I loved gunjan's simplicity and her innocence the most. not only in this upate, but through out the ff. she is so adorable. And i know it's not easy for her to forget eerything said by samrat. it must be painful to her. I really want samrat to something to her, which makes her happy when she remembes him, not hurt. Description of monish's office is nice. but what was his plan? Why had he made her lock in his cabin? Poor gunjan, she was totally scared. I just hope that he won't do anything wrong with her. And i can guess what were the papers given to nandas. I think they are the papers to notice them to vacate their flat. and i know it was monish's plan to make them shift to the appartment , he gifted to them. And thier concern for gunjan had shown well. It felt like they r gunjan's real parents who r worried about her. I hadn't felt that they r not her parents in any scene. It was so perfect. great job S3. Waiting eaerly for next upate. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snowwhite28

Hi S3 again as usual awesome update...๐Ÿ‘

aab toh proper words bhi nahi hain๐Ÿค”...i am running out of stock...๐Ÿ˜‰
every time new twist & turns are coming up...Full of suspense & drama...

Monish has comed up with a very strong plan...now its up to samrat how he will handle all this...curios to know wat is his decision????

watever monish has done with gunjan was totally out of my imagination...his intentions are not still cleared...use gunjan ke sath yeh sab karke kya milega???? ๐Ÿ˜• There are other ways to come into the goodbooks of gunjan...she is such a naive & innocent girl...๐Ÿ˜” & sometimes she becomes Stupid too..๐Ÿคช this world is full of double faced people...she is unable to see the real intentions behind the handsome face of Monish..๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Another big question comes to my mind is that wat will happen next๐Ÿ˜•?????Who will save gunjan???? samrat, monish Or somebody else????๐Ÿ˜•
Well i want samrat to save herโ˜บ๏ธ but every things depends on u guys...๐Ÿ˜‰& off course watever the story demands...
& wat was that notice all about...๐Ÿ˜•
Mrs & Mr Nanda are really worried about gunjan...there condition was very well written & expressed..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ It was very real...

Anxiously Waiting for yur next update PLZZZ continue soon..& thanx for the pm...๐Ÿ˜Š


TANU๐Ÿ˜Š





Thanx TANU for your precious Reply and appreciation of our effort.๐Ÿ˜ณ Yes,MONiSH has came with his strong plan... SAMRAT decision is playing a very important part in this story.๐Ÿ˜•

MONiSH is very smart guy... He only wants to get GUNJAN in his life...By,hook or by crook. GUNJAN is really innocent...she cant able to recognized true face of peoples... She is not stupid ..actually,after her parents death...NANDA's were over protective for her so,she didn't know about the some real face of humen.

V'll solve all your questions in our next part.๐Ÿ˜ณ Mr.n Mrs. NANDA are a typical normal Middle Class parents...so naturally they are worried for GUNJAN, more than their other problem which will be cleared in the next update. V'll B update very soon.





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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all thanks for giving me the link
and its awesome ff๐Ÿ‘
pls add me pm list๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Sorry For Not Commenting Hon :( ๐Ÿ˜ณ Really Buzy With College & All . Lovely Update, Can I Know If We Will See Who's Saves Gunjan & Why Monish Did This In The Next Update Or You Guyss Will Drag It Showing These Two Thingss ?! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Hi Soham,Sonia,Swati๐Ÿค—...

1st of all SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRyyy For commenting so late...


Now I must Say this the whole update PART---30 Was just Superb...MIND Blowing,awesome , fantabulous and Out Standing...and I MEAN IT...Part-30 was really very beautifully written...Each scene, each characters emotions were superbly described...I could feel each characters pain...U have written each Characters thoughts and emotions so well that i could imagine what this character must be feeling at this particular moment in this particular scene...Amazing and Fully rocking Update PART-30 Soham Sonia Swati...EXCELLENT S3๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...

I cannot say I like this scene or this scene because I LOVED EACH N EVERY SCENE from Samrats entering his office lost in thoughts of Gunjan...This scene was Really good.....it very well showed Samrats ANGER , EGO problem, Status thinking thoughts, his confused feelings n thoughts , his emotions, His pain of loosing Gunjan His deep feelings 4 Gunjan which he is denying and doesn't want 2 accept and wanting her back at any cost ...Each n every thought written by you S3 showed each of samrats emotions...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...Loved lost in thoughts samrat who was atlast thinking about Gunjan How he met her 1st time , then in office and how sweet her voice is these emotions showed samrats deep feelings for gunjan...and Samrat has realised his mistake his tears and pain proves it that he was wrong in being rude 2 Gunjan and he shouldnt have shouted on her and said bad words about her and her family n should have trusted her he knows he has given her pain BUT HE has realised this up to an extent NOT Fully...his ego is stopping him from admitting his mistake and saying sorry...BUT I LOVED IT THAT HE BOUGHT Gunjans Locket...๐Ÿ˜Š...Samrat doesnt realise this that gunjan is a self respecting girl thats why she sold locket thats why she took scholarship for studies ...and this locket means the world 2 her ....I REALLY Want 2 read this scene when Gunjan gets her locket back ...HOW SHE WILL REACT? I know she will be very happy BUT WIll she take it from Samrat?? and I wonder when will get out of his thoughts about Middle class and rich class thinking....

I also loved the way u wrote
samrats childhood part It was was so awesomely written that It bought tears 2 my eyes..tears 4 CHILD samrat and his mother ๐Ÿ˜ญ.tears for this grown man Samrat๐Ÿ˜ญ...Now i understand Why Samrat Doesnt give love and understand the meaning of love as HE never received Love AND love he had his mothers and Dia Maas that was taken from him everything was stolen from him by his own father... just reading and imaging How much pain they both suffered at the hands of Pratap n trishna bought tears 2 my eyes and anger for PRATAP-TRISHNA๐Ÿ˜ก...how can a Man LEAVE His dying wife? How can he behave this way with his wife and son ...?๐Ÿ˜ฒ...How can a women throw aways a childs childhood memories??๐Ÿ˜ฒ..How can a TRISHNA be so cruel ..when Samrat needed his father he was sent 2 boarding and Not even allowed 2 enter his OWN home๐Ÿ˜ฒ...TRISHNA๐Ÿ˜ก... ... how can a person be so cruel so evil ..IF a child cant trust His father then whom should a CHILD TRUST...This was a very shocking scene๐Ÿ˜ฒ...as it showed pratap shergill true colors But YOU S3 -SOHAM SONIA SWATI wrote this scene so so well that each conversation clearly showed HOW EVIL a MAN PARTAP SHERGILL is๐Ÿ˜ก...And HOW CHEAP and B๐Ÿคฌ Trishna is...Very well written scene๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘....How can he behave this way with his own Flesh n blood How can a father use his own son 4 his selfish moives...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...These two Pratap-Trishna deserve each other ...They are seriously disgusting .๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคข...What is he up to now? hasnt he spoiled his son's life enough...I was shocked when i learned that samrats entry in office 2 his marriage 2 Richa is part of Mr shergill's plan๐Ÿ˜ฒ...But WHAT PLAN??๐Ÿ˜•...what can samrat not do if he marrys richa and what does Mr shergill mean By this remark when samrat comes to know the truth tab tak He wont be able 2 do anything ???๐Ÿ˜•BUT WHAT ?? these two are so cheap TRISHNA and PRATAP...๐Ÿ˜ก...THEY Deserve everything Samrats anger and everything Kind of hatred Samrat is giving and will give them...But is TAKING REVENGE really worth it?? AS in real life also these type of people exist and these type of people like TRISHNA-PRATAP Never change...YES THEY DESERVE 2 be taught a lesson But Samrat shouldnot spoil his life in taking revenge from his father AS if samrats life gets spoiled it will make his father happy and HIs father doesnt deserve any happiness....YES I agree samrat Biggest weakness is HIS Aim --Aim of revenge and His ANGER and Mr shergill is taking advantage of his weakness ...I Know Samrat knows His Father real nature BUT Does he really know HOW EVIL His FATHER IS??? ...I really want 2 know what is this Evil man PRATAP and TRISHNA up to?? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...Very well described evilness of Pratap-trishna๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

DAI-MAA and Samrats conversation and scene was really interesting...Dia maa knows samrat so well ...her every action proved it.....She knows Samrat loves Gunjan but his Ego is not making him accept it and thats why 2 hide his feelings he is being rude 2 gunjan and thats why she left him...and DIA MAA and Samrat part where samrat was behaving like akid was very CUTE๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜Š...Loved it a lottt...and ENGAGEMENT RING man I can never forget this scene ...kasey samrat ne sales man sey ring buy kari and didnt give 2 richa even and this RING is Still with Him๐Ÿ˜Š...WHO will wear it๐Ÿ˜‰...and Locket scene and then remembering Gunjan and just thinking he has lost her showed Samrat deep pain ..ATLAST SAMRAT accepted HE LOVES GUNJAN๐Ÿ˜ƒ...But he still plans to marry RICHA and wants Gunjan in his office so he can meet her everyday๐Ÿ˜ฒ... ..MAN THis showed Samrat has not understood that Gunjan is a simple innocent and sweet girl and 4 her marriage is a sacred institution ..for her its unity of two souls and If Samrat Wants Gunjan in her life Forever He will have 2 give his relationship with gunjan a name ..he has 2 MARRY her and truly be hers only ...I hope samrat realizes this before he loses her....BUT WILL IT be so EASY for SAMRAT 2 get Gunjan back...Man samrat is so desperate u showed very well with this part when samrat called Gunjan's home and got all information This scene was very rockingly written Soham,Sonia , Swati๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...Mazza aa gaya read karkey...BHAVESH KUMAR๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...MAN MEMORIES FRESH HO GAYIN๐Ÿ˜‰...and I agree with THE WORDS U WROTE and DAI MAA said that Marriage is sacred and MONEY NAME STATUS doesnt stay with a man forever Only True caring and loving relations stay with him...I LOVED THESE WORDS S3 ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...These words showed a mother way of making a son realise that he is going on the wrong path of destruction and spoiling his life ...its showed a Mother 's pain that her child life may be spoiled in his aim 2 achieve revenge....Very well written scene......๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...I hope samrat realizes it soon ...he is thinking about what DAI maa said and realizing it also but His AIM is more important 2 him ..I HOPE he stops before it destroys Him as His father is not WORTH his revenge even...and WHAT WRONG with Samrat why is he taking Medicines???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...

SAMRAT want GUNJAN back at any cost ...In his life and office But I donot Think it will be thats easy 4 Him as he has hurt Gunjan lottt and destroyed her trust and self respect ...It wont be that easy for HIM and Thode papad toh belenay padegey SAMRAT KO๐Ÿ˜‰...tabhi toh he will respect Gunjan and realize her VALUE...and THERE IS A saying also----" YEH ISHQ NAHI ASSAN ITNA TOH SAMAJ LIJIYE ...AAG ka dariya hai...TAIR kar jana hai"๐Ÿ˜‰...KYOON THEEK KAHA NA SOHAM SWATI SONIA...๐Ÿ˜‰...Lets see what happens...I hope I am right...

Gunjan Man she is so INNOCENT so sweet ..I just love this character...1st lost is sweet thoughts of rahul ๐Ÿ˜Š...thinking about her time with him and how scared she used 2 be of him...etc ..and Then Samrats thoughts her each thought of samrat showed how much samrats anger and rude words had hurt Gunjan ..how much pain Samrat had given her ...Samrat rude words have shaken Gunjan and her trust ...Her each thought proved it ...and She is still so innocent that she thinks everything will be allright soon but will it be?? ๐Ÿ˜•...she sweetly thought of telling rahul every thing later what happened with samrat n her and that she is in love with samrat...But i wonder will it be allright when Gunjan tells rahul this truth ...How will RAHUL react...??? I Wonder how will GUNJAN REACT when she comes 2 know Samrat also loves her and her pain and samrats pain is same ..infact samrat pain is more ...and they share same loneliness also...I wonder how will gunjan feel n do when she know samrats life truth childhood truth how hurt he was since childhood??
I Know NOONE CAN TAKE A MOTHERS PLACE in ones heart A mother always has a special place BUT DAI MAA is like a mother 2 samrat and loves her also and Gunjan and DIA MAA can both heal samrat...BUT WILL SAMRAT OPEN UP and Let them heal him...I WONDER WHAT will happen next????๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...really want 2 know and excited 2 read further story...

ONCE AGAIN AWESOME AND ROCKING PART-30 SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI...LOVED READING EVERY part a lottt...Fantastic work S3๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...and SORRY 4 such a long comment ......actually part 30 is so rocking that I cant stop typing and I want 2 praise U all again and again 4 writing it so excellently and for describing each characters emotions beautifully...OUT STANDING WORK S3๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...

WILL COMMENT ON PART 31st LATEST PART By tomorrow ie sunday๐Ÿ˜Šand PLSS PLSS DO PM ME WHENEVER you UPDATE SOHAM,SONIA ,SWATI...
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LOVE your good friend
Gunjan๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...

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