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Posted: 14 years ago
It shows the reality of person. People are surly like this
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both parts were amazing...

but y is rano hiding frm her children??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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loved da update
do continue
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awww fanx 4 da fab update loved it
i wonda wat maans up2 nw plzz cont soon
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wow awsome update

waiting for nxxt...update soon
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both the parts are amazing luv it
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hay you all.. will be updating on my new thread :D
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UPDATING on MY NEW THREAD
no colour code.. & maybe mistake.. as i will
be updating from my phone..
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me outside
& wrote this part..
so :D
won't be long
will pm you aall later 2 night
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THREAD 7
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sweety
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now rano is hidding the truth
lets see what have u stored for us
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Wow awesome update again!!! i still don know how u can write so well... u are awesome keyama... 👏👏👏


Maan gives her a small peck. Worried sick..
Dr "she is fine, just too much stress, please try to put her in bed rest.. Maan nodes & holds her tight. He loves her so much.. But does she?

aww maan loves her so much... geet needs to realise this soon... bechara maan...

Maan "did she call you mom?" he asks, wondering...
Rano "no! No! You must have hard wrong" maan faintly smiles. Having hard time to believe this truth. "how is she?"

why is rano not comfortable with maan knowing the truth??😕

Geet woke up, slowly tried to sit up. Maan was helping but she snaps "stay way!"

😡😡 UFF geet maan shows u so much of concern, if u cant appreaciate its okay, BUT don get angry with him atleast...😡😡

Maan "I have no intention to help but you are week!" that was his firm strong voice, she could clearly sense that maan is angry, & she dare not provoke him further. A faint smile, more of a mockery smile came out ... She sits up & was about to leave when maan stops her, "you are very week"
THAT was a good reply back to geet..😡 maan care for her alot...😭

Geet "I can't effort this amount of money!" she snaps off & was about to leave again, when maan stops her.
Maan "geet, you are very week!" he tries again, & why was he trying? For her? When she ECM considering this anything, I do it because it hurts when I see her in pain, & her, probably won't even care if I die!
yes maan, not worth if geet doesnt appreciate yr help...

Maan just looked at her in shock. Did she just swear at him, another new thing he just discovered that geet speaks out rubbish in her pointless anger. "CHUP!" he shouts, making geet jump, actually it did some good as she in fear snakes her hand round his neck. "tumko faltu bath karne ki walaba koi kam nahi hi ka! Her waqt baq baq karti ho! Miss hoshiar express!" geets mouth fell right open.
😆😆😆 nice one maan... she is really mad... 🤣 she is truly H express... always keep bak bak at everyone... 😆😆

Geet "hhfirjf nrfjr kff"

🤣 🤣


Maan "this is not a zoo that I will let this sherni escape!" geet tries to kick him but again that goes in vain,
HAHA omg maan hinted she is a BILLI... haha.. zoo... LMAO at that one... 🤣

Hitting his chest madly.. "I hate you! I hate you! I hate you! You are horrible mean! I hate you!"it was more of a playful punch then actually punching. Hard. After few minute she gives up, somewhere realizing why he may have done this, she was so tensed, she nearly burst & over the top. A tear rolled down her eyes... She sat on top of him... Near his private part...
😳😳 she sat near where??😳😳 and she is so cute, hitting him so playfully...😉

Geet "you crossing your limit here!" she starts her baq baq again, but in vain maan simply ignore...
phir se her bak bak.. she wont get tired wont she??😆😆

Maan outside looked at rus & rajji who was just giving him angry glare.
Rajji "this is kidnapping!"
KIDNAP!!!😲😲 🤣

Rajji "because Dii does not like you!" maan roles his eyes. Geet ka chamci..
haha raajii is geet ka chamci definitely..😆😆

Geet leaned against the door. Waiting for maan, then suddenly she hares click... What a surprise, it's no other then maan... She shoved him, pushed him to get out.. But maan just hugged her from the back... With a gentel kiss... "Atlas we are together."



geets eyes widens in a shock... What exactly is he planning?
ME JUST BLUSHED AT THE LAST PART.. OH EM GEE.. THEY MAKE ME GO MAD!!! Haye... what a perfect pic for situation... "atlast we are together'-- haye yeah atlast they are... finally...
@precap: 😲😲 what is maan plan now??😳😳
OH OH---😳😳


awesome update.. me loved it.. i love the nok-jhok between maaneet in this part... loved hw raaji was being a chamci to geet.. and the way geet hit him, wow me loved it.. the final pic had me transported to maaneet heaven...😆😉
CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT UPDATE...😳😳
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
STAR OF THE UPDATE: maaneet..😳😳
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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haiii that was awesome part..loved reading it.

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